Chronicles of Red Mansions

A person with a foreign surname interrupted the plot of Sister Lin and other girls in advance. It was very interesting at first, and it was more reliable than fighting Jia Baoyu face to face to grab girls. The rhythm was relaxed and moderate, and the unnecessary struggle plot was brushed off. It's just that the plot of this book has flown far away from the fight with the mangy monk 😥... It's obviously more watery than the previous chapters. There are three chapters that impressed me deeply about the anti-counterfeiting plot, and there may be as many as six or seven chapters; the Jia family's story has also become the story of an outsider, and there are not enough conflicts. The author seems to want to concentrate the conflicts in the frame. Sora's destiny, Ryuko, is recorded... Due to the interruption of the original plot, the author has also reasonably changed the character's personality, but Sister Lin's aura of being out of the world is no longer that of a girl next door, and the personalities of each maid have become more and more reshaped based on the symbolic personality of the original work. It cannot be said that it is bad, but the charm of the Red Mansion has been completely destroyed recently. Personally, I think this is an interesting, unique and refreshing book, but it doesn't have enough features in the serialized state to attract people to keep reading. Maybe after the completion, the reading experience can be improved by reading the key plots.

I love Sister Lin! Gather together, let me see how many Daiyu fans there are.

The author's emotional drama is really not flattering. Almost every girl's first expression is affectionate. Lin Ruhai and other gold list winners have just promised to come to marry Lin Daiyu. When they see Miaoyu, they promise, and when they see Xue Baoqin, they promise to marry again. The relationship is like child's play. How true is it? At the very least, there should be a secondary level, and there should also be time to accumulate. If it was purely a post, then just pretend I didn't say anything.

In harem novels, the setting that the protagonist protects himself for a certain heroine is outrageous. The author is writing about a harem in the style of a single woman, and there is no way to get along well with both ends.

The only villainy in this book so far is the princess who disguises herself as a man to replace the prince. In any dynasty, as long as the emperor's IQ is above average, they would not dare to treat the country as a child's play. This setting is really bloody

Sister Da Ai Lin

The biggest problem is that if you rebel, rebel well. Don't fight with the Jia family all day long. Even if you bring down the Jia family, it will be useless for you to rebel. Or do you think that bringing down the Jia family will bring down the dynasty. Then I can only say that the protagonist's structure is only the Jia family.

The protagonist has always given me the impression that, except for Daiyu, who clearly wants to marry, other women can change their fates, and it doesn't matter whether they accept her or not. Except for the protagonist Dai Yu, who has a clear purpose, the rest of the strategy progress is all unintentional. The most disturbing thing to me is that the protagonist cares about Daiyu and doesn't care about others. For example, with Ping'er, there was a misunderstanding and ambiguity. Daiyu felt uncomfortable, so the protagonist "kept down and acted small" to coax her. However, her thoughts about Ping'er were that if she really wanted to, she would give her a place to settle down. Another example is Miaoyu. The protagonist and her have expressed their feelings for each other before. I thought Miaoyu would be able to compete with Daiyu when he came, but in the end, what did Daiyu say? She said that as long as she was there, the protagonist's thoughts would always be with her, but it was Daiyu who spoke up before the protagonist stayed and continued to persuade Miaoyu to go home, otherwise the protagonist would have really gone back with Daiyu! Well, I am naive, Miaoyu is nothing. I won't go into other details, as the whole story is filled with emotional drama. It's not that the protagonist shouldn't care about Daiyu's feelings, but since the decision is to have a harem, then be clear-minded and don't be scrupulous because you care, let alone care about one and not care about others, and put emotional weight on it. Harem does not refer to the result, but the process, the richness of emotions. For more than 400 chapters now, the relationship progress has been stuck with Daiyu. How can the protagonist open a harem for Daiyu's feelings? In the end, the so-called harem is just the protagonist, Daiyu and a group of women who have settled down!

The male protagonist is too warm and masculine. When he sees a woman sad, he always blames himself, feels guilty and feels distressed. Will you be able to bear the pain of so many female protagonists in the future? If there are many female protagonists, there will definitely be sad people and things. If you blame yourself and feel guilty, won't you have more female protagonists? When we are eight or nine years old, we can just have fun together! You can wait until adulthood or older to write about the relationship between men and women. It's so embarrassing because it's too young. My personal feeling

This Li Ming is definitely his sister disguised as a man. The second prince died in the first place. In order to stabilize the situation, he asked his sister to disguise himself as a man. In the end, he will definitely be taken into the harem by the protagonist, hehe.

Sister Bao

In addition to the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists, the author also wrote excellent officialdom battle scenes. Come on

Sister Lin's role in the emotional scenes is a bit too heavy, and the author's preference for Sister Lin is a bit too obvious. Too much emphasis on the protagonist's preference for Sister Lin makes the other female characters' emotional interactions with the protagonist lose their charm, making it impossible to feel the protagonist's affection for them. For example, Xiang Ling and Qing Wen, before revealing their feelings, Xiang Ling's silly and arrogant Qing Wen were written with great care, but now the interaction between the protagonist and them gives people more of an atmosphere of a master and a maid, without much ambiguity. It is even more impossible to get around Daiyu as the real protagonist. The author, you have to insert a paragraph of the protagonist's concern for Daiyu from time to time when flirting with them. Why did you ever do this to Daiyu? This is really unacceptable and how cruel is this to them? I have always felt that the author's plot and writing style are excellent, and should not only have such achievements now. I originally thought it was just not meaty enough to attract wolves, but now I find that the author still lacks a lot in the emotional drama. The writing does not seem to be a harem novel but a single heroine Daiyu. There are still few people now. In the future, if Dudu and Xiangling Qingwen are like this, they will become Daiyu's green leaves after showing their true feelings. This is not a harem but a cold palace.

In the first chapter, there is no foreshadowing. If there was no aura of the protagonist, would Sister Lin talk to the protagonist? I skipped through the next few chapters. Personally, it's a brainless idol drama, or a script like a TV drama. Adapted idol drama. (No need for acting skills, just some fresh meat, and that's it.)

I support the restoration of the Ming Dynasty, but forget about the restoration of the Song Dynasty. This dynasty, when all nations in the world abide by the laws of the jungle, started the history of Yanwu Xiuwen for the selfish interests of the imperial power, which directly led to the complete destruction of China, which had been passed down for thousands of years, to foreigners. The consequences were even more serious than those of the Western Jin Dynasty. The result of everyone reading Confucianism is that the literati control the country, and no one has the ability to defend the country. In the end, the literati will become lackeys after the country is subjugated. This was the case for the literati who died in the Song Dynasty, and the same was true for the people who died in the Ming Dynasty. The evil consequences caused by Confucianism have been passed down for thousands of years🙄

The dialogues in the classic Story of the Stone are written in Zhen Huan style, which is specious. There is no flavor of Red Mansion between the lines. If your writing skills are not good, you should be cautious. Red Mansion is not that easy to write.

When I first watched Dream of Red Mansions, I liked Lin Daiyu and found it interesting. Later, when I watched Dream of Red Mansions, I fell in love with Xue Baochai, and I thought the thoughtfulness and generosity were perfect. Maybe every man wouldn't like it. Later, I experienced many things and many emotions. Watching Dream of Red Mansions, the character Lin Daiyu suddenly comes to mind. It feels so familiar, yet so far away. Lin Daiyu is real, but at the same time she is a dream, a lively girlfriend who seems to be living around her, but at the same time, her true love makes people sigh that it is rare to meet her in this life! She is not perfect, but a perfect person is actually an inner fantasy of unconditional obedience to herself. She is not real and has no emotion. There can be many people who love you when you are at your peak, but not many people who love you when you are at your lowest. Is Xue Baofan bad? In fact, it is very good, but only if you really understand the sentence "No matter how ruthless it is, it is moving" can you understand the word "love"! I will always choose the latter one between comprehensive indifference and shortcomings of true love! Dream of Red Mansions is a masterpiece that requires you to calm down and savor life and consider each word. You will see a Lin Daiyu that is different from the one in the marketing account.

Author: Come on and finish it