Tokyo Writer

I have basically read the novel "Rebirth of Japan" over and over again. This one is really good.

The main line of the article is steadily advancing well; the characterization is okay; but it lacks the depth of the young era and the low emotional intelligence. It is said that it is not watery enough and is a little dry. The reader does not have the same perspective as the author. The author knows many mystery novels, but the reader does not. You can completely spread out the history of the development of mystery novels and the background of Japan's bubble economy in the article. These authors have written about it, but they don't pay enough attention to it. It is recommended to refer to Lao Wang's "The Rise of the Literary Heroes of the Republic of China". By writing in detail the historical status of the text copied by the protagonist, what phenomena have been caused, this is a place to lay out the development history of mystery novels or other hydrological knowledge. At the same time, it also gives readers an introduction to look forward to copying the text, so as to further enhance the feeling of copying the text.

It's a very good book, but I'm so eager to do it. Even if I don't lack money and I'm sure it will be a big hit in the future, I still insist on promoting it. These actions will lead to a series of troubles and slaps in the face.

Except for passing the protagonist's manuscript at the beginning, I didn't see the female editor helping the protagonist in any way. She only talked big words and kept promising to recommend and win awards for the protagonist. In the end, none of the promises were fulfilled. The farmer was lucky enough to dig out the gold mine with a hoe. Although he knew that he did not have the strength to hold the gold mine, he still overestimated his ability and wanted to take the gold mine as his own.

The protagonist keeps talking about repaying kindness and repaying kindness. First, what she earns is the money from the review. Second, even if you repay the favor, why do you have the idea that repaying the favor = not leaving the magazine? Does she take herself too seriously and thinks that without you, she will be unemployed? Still you don't take yourself seriously and feel that you have no independent personality? Third, it's like licking a dog, forcing the love for emotional drama, which is speechless.

It feels like I have become a reader of "New Novel" and I am looking forward to the next chapter

Chapter 90 is in progress, I'm sorry if I don't complain 1. There are too many conspiracies and tricks, and it's a bit frustrating to watch 2. The so-called repayment of gratitude is too outrageous. Just because the female editor Asano reviewed the manuscript, I decided that she was a great benefactor and kept emphasizing it. The protagonist can wait until the manuscript is rejected before submitting, which is the first; the protagonist can write other works and submit manuscripts, which is the second; Asano has already reaped the benefits, status, salary and bonus, etc., Which is the third. In the end, the protagonist still felt that it was not enough, so how about kneeling down to say hello every day? 3. Self-published here, extremely poisonous. Why don't you go to the bank to check the loan limit first? Secondly, if you don't have enough money, then print less books. It turns out that the protagonist's brain circuit is completely different. Why do you think that the owner of someone else's publishing house will agree to your request? You signed the contract yourself, paid the money, and they are taking care of you, okay? You would not go to the senior who admires you for help because you are afraid of favors, but instead look to a stranger?! Xiu'er! That's right, if someone lends you money, then he is a great benefactor, and even his life is not enough!

To be honest, the current connection between the protagonist and Asano is too far-fetched and too weak. The so-called kindness should not be an excuse to prevent the protagonist from pursuing a high-return platform. As for repayment, the protagonist has many ways to repay Asano after becoming a well-known writer.

After thinking about it, I decided to express my feelings. I read all kinds of books, but recently I happened to want to read the mystery genre, so I clicked in. At first it was actually acceptable to me, including the heroine, it was actually okay. But it goes all the way to the publishing house of suspect x. It can be seen that the author wants to make the novel closer to reality, including the specially opened post, which shows that he has prepared a lot. But being reasonable and true doesn't mean it looks good. I think the people who originally attracted people to this book were those who wanted to see a good book written (copied) and then shock the readers. The author has ideas and wants to add something on top of this, and it's okay to improve the characters and plot, but he can't put the cart before the horse. Your book is called "Tokyo Literary Master", not "My Days at a Publishing House in Tokyo". Your dense settings, camps, dilemmas, and conspiracies came too early. It's like eating a hot pot meal. You've just served the bottom of the pot (text copy), but suddenly the store manager comes out and tells you the history of the hot pot restaurant and how difficult it is to open a hot pot restaurant. I came in rushing to eat hot pot. You wait until I finish the hot pot. At least you wait until I finish simmering the beef and mutton hairy tripe and yellow-throated shrimp. After eating it in my stomach, it would be better to have this one. That's it. I think I've read more than 30 chapters now. I don't know what to do. I'll decide whether to leave or stay after reading it.

I have read Chapter 112 and am very tired. Why does the author have to write about conspiracies and conspiracies? Do you think this can be used as a conflict for people to read? Baffling! Although the writing is quite dry, I admire the author's reading of mystery novels and the plot is well summarized. I was simply put off by the silly plot. Even if you only write about the protagonist copying books → excellent grades + plot summary and interaction with the heroine, if you write this routine repeatedly, I can continue to read it with relish. Poor rhythm control. It is recommended that the author read other manuscripts to see what is good writing.

It's okay for the author to use the female editor as a tool to advance the plot, but by making this character unlikable, you're putting the cart before the horse. I won't say whether this editor is kind to the protagonist or not. Shouldn't the point be to grow quickly and repay the favor? And I really don't think the protagonist repays his kindness. I have seen that the protagonist has paid a lot for this editor. He is tied to this magazine and even if others try hard to poach him, he will not do it. But what did this editor gain? I saw that in the end, the editor got nothing and was transferred. There is really a problem with the author's writing style. You have to repay the favor. There are many ways. There are many ways at present. You can make conditions with other magazines to bring him over, or you can ask the editor to quit and be his agent. There are many ways. I just write the stupidest method, which is harmful to myself and others.

Is there a female protagonist? It really makes no sense to have a Japanese background without a harem.

69 Withdrawal, just copy the text of the book, copy the book, and actually want to create your own, eat some peanuts, don't just drink. After reading the comments, there are so many people saying that the protagonist nt always talks about repaying a favor. I also think that repaying a favor is about repaying a favor, not being a bully and a lowly person.

I just feel like it's hard for you, a copycat, to get ahead. You're being suppressed and struggling in various ways. Isn't it cool to be a copywriter? Besides, are you risking your life to repay a little kindness? Really outrageous.

It made me feel a little uncomfortable. The protagonist refuses to leave the magazine in order to repay a favor or something, and repeatedly refuses invitations from other magazines. I think it is quite unnecessary.

The author spent too much time on Asano Aiko. Although it is true that Japan "repays kindness in case of accidents" and "friendship is the most difficult to accept", too much emphasis will make us readers very uncomfortable (at least for me), and this character is not fleshed out enough.

This book can only be read with closed eyes The author can get 80% of the sales revenue of the book, can you believe it? Normally, physical stores alone should account for 30% of sales revenue, okay? It's okay if you don't have common sense, at least you have to use your brain, right? In this world, physical store book profits don't even reach 5%. What kind of store do you think can survive? 🤫

Nt plot, no wonder he is a deadbeat

I wonder what the use of a female editor is, deliberately suppressing the protagonist?

I already felt a little uncomfortable when I saw the editor of "Thank You". Later, when I saw that a female character came to me for no reason because I was reading a mystery book in the library, I knew I had to say "goodby".

I felt pretty good about what I wrote before. When "The Devotion of Suspect To be honest, I read online articles just for pleasure. I am also a literature lover. For example, I just read two books this month. One is Lu Yinyin's novel collection "Typhoon Day" published by Houlang, and the other is Eco's "Bodorino". "Bodorino" is a big one. When I was reading it, because of the religious culture and European history involved, I had to look up the information and read it over and over. Reading this kind of literary works is really painful and beautiful. I am tired of reading a lot of books, and I want to find an online article to relax. You still tell me that such writing is unrealistic and brainless. I am really tired. I want to be realistic. Isn't it good that I read books by Yu Hua, Ma Yuan, Ge Fei, and Zhang Wei? Having said so much, I still hope that the author can find good ideas and write more exciting things.

It's a very good novel, every chapter is disturbing. Originally it wasn't a very cool article. Readers began to limit the author's description of characters again. After looking at it, it turns out that it requires characters who are close to the protagonist, especially female characters, not to have their own thoughts, not to be separated from the protagonist's thoughts, and to completely revolve around the protagonist. Asking for a harem, writing a lot, and watching the protagonists with different personalities sucking the dog. Oh, maybe if a tsundere queen lets the protagonist lick her stockings, some readers will be happy. In a good work, everyone has their own thoughts and they do not live for the protagonist. Their thoughts either cause trouble or benefit the protagonist. This is the normal society and world. Many people take on the role of the protagonist and hope to benefit forever, without having to worry, and more of an escape from reality. I think such readers are very suitable for reading Shuangwen Xiaobai. However, due to his rising level, he looked down on Shuangwen and Xiaobaiwen, and was in a place where he was neither above nor below.

The further you go, the more you struggle. Should you write novels and strive to become a great writer, or should you engage in struggle? And the protagonist has become very hypocritical

The male protagonist is a dog licker, and the Japanese writer is a dog licker. It is really the most ridiculous thing in the world.

I started reading Zoo and I thought it was a good taste. After all, very few people read Zoo. But the more you read, the more disgusting you become. Later on, the content of the novel repeats the word count. You say you are afraid that people have not read it, okay, that's understandable. As a result, you started an internal fight among editors, and I felt like it was starting to get bloody. There is no problem in repaying a favor. Not to mention Japan, it is also normal in China to repay a favor for editors. But you are not an online novel, and you are poaching people to be editors of physical books? Are you the second best boss? Forget about the awards, I really don't understand why the head of the department controls the awards? How dare the head of a Japanese company's organizational structure dare? I can understand if you write to the board of directors or the general manager. Is it possible for you, the head of the department, to control and not be caught by the supervisor? What was the concept of sales of 30,000 to 200,000 copies in that era? To put it simply, Dou Po Cang Qiong was born! Do you think you are the boss and you say that a department manager is manipulating the award and denying it to Tiancan Tudou? Go crazy. As a result, I started to write online novels again. The background was the bubble economy and the beginning of the 21st century. I just laughed. Let's start with the fact that there are only a few people online, and then there is an online platform with more than 200,000 people commenting on it, mainly criticizing it. Let's not talk about the author's disdain for the chain, and let's talk about the copyright issue of online novels. It is understandable that the protagonist is anxious to use money to write a few more physical bombs. It really made my grandpa laugh to create an online novel where no one is online. I really doubt that buying an outline and then filling in the content myself is totally different. It's not good at romance, nor is it overly plotted. The actual background is forgotten as soon as it's written down, and the level of the main theme is not high.

Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง! I've always been following you, ps: Please let me know when there will be a group of readers 🤓

As a setting where a Chinese originally traveled to Japan, I don't need you to be very sharp, at least I can't have a character that can be manipulated at will. From the beginning to the end, I looked like I was suffering, which made me feel sick to my stomach. I'm sorry that I didn't save a subscription stamp.

Similar books are all cool articles, and cool articles are like beef. There's shit in this piece of beef! ! !

When you write a copy, can you please not include the words you copied? A chapter with such braille is all the content of the copied book. Who will read it?

Did the author stop writing? Or opened another account?