Global Awakening: Starting with the Awakening of the Void Terror

It's pretty good-looking, the writing is good, and the subject matter is my favorite type. There are some poisonous points here and there, so it's okay. It's a food-level story, but it's just too little.

When I saw Chapter 16, I felt that the author started to suppress the protagonist. He awakened, but did not fully awaken. If he is good at playing, the protagonist will definitely be ridiculed later. He will be the squad leader even if he says anything. This kind of plot makes me want to vomit. He deliberately suppresses the protagonist to create conflicts. Then he awakens and needs many times more materials to upgrade than others. He is always several levels slower than others. As a result, he can counterattack every time. After that, he relies entirely on adventures to replenish resources. Now he has this adventure, and now he has another adventure, haha.

When building a dragon building, please note the character's name, soul, soul type (such as ancient species, mysterious species, ancient species, fantasy species, weapon species, etc.), And innate soul skills. Love you all🤓

Come on, the big bug next door is really capable, I'm looking forward to this one from you

I think your data expansion is too much. . . In the first stage, you need 100 of the same soul beads to upgrade skills, and in the second stage, you need 1,000. Each stage is multiplied tenfold. The market price of a soul bead is 1,000,000 A six-person team of an army has a daily task of hunting 1,000 soul beads for each person. A total of 6,000 pills generate a total economic value of 6,000W. Even if it is compressed according to the internal price of the army, it will still be 4,200W. Is your currency the Zimbabwean yen or the Vietnamese dollar?

Let me give you a suggestion: read it after every time you write it, and you will know where your problem lies.

The idea is pretty good, but the writing style is a bit weird, but the daily routine is okay. The main plot moves forward like a running account. The plot of the "Newbie Gift Pack" is extremely boring, and the character's movements, expressions, and language descriptions are also quite mechanical.

Looking at the introduction, are the achievements of the six generations of Mingjuns of Lao Qin all fed to dogs?

Why not just apply for level 5? Wouldn't it be more advantageous to get more resources if you sign up? Why hide it and report it to the third floor? Do you still need to hide it like this?

The fandom area is too quiet. I would like to post some pornographic pictures to attract others. Let's share the pornographic pictures together.