A Journey to the Heavens Starting from the Mountain God

It was okay at first, but as soon as he came out of the mountain, he became a being like an innate god. He couldn't control his lower body, and he said that he had a noble personality, but the woman just stuck to him and went to bed. How fucking horny are you? No wonder you can't find a girlfriend in your thirties.

I feel that the author has too many ideas, constantly changing the setting, and there are too many elements. System flow + incense god + reshaping into an innate god (Tiger body) + heaven flow + cultivating the heart (refining the mind through cultivating Taoism) + refining the fake into the real (pretending to be Kunlun Mountain Monarch) + sealing one's own strength. A ninth-level or eighteenth-level deity was replaced with a one-star or two-star level setting in just a few dozen chapters. It looks so confusing.

The first ten chapters are completely dull and uninspiring. After the reincarnation, the first few chapters are barely okay. Starting from the reshaping of the legal body, the character quickly loses his intelligence. In the second chapter, he suppresses the protagonist's strength, and then starts the so-called human experience. After ten chapters, the heroine will blame him. After that, it is completely the author's way of writing. Withdrew.

It doesn't look good. A mortal is negotiating with a pig's trotters for a profit of 55 yuan from incense.

I feel like the main character's diaosi mentality can never be changed. Every chapter is imagining the future and I can't stand it at all. The author should go home and stop insulting writing.

The author's writing style is about the same, but the plot is a bit stretched, and the family relationship line is a bit toxic. Author, you should know why the starting point is called an orphanage. Otherwise, the whole book is useless if you can't grasp the family line. Moreover, you are still writing the Shinto style. After you become the God Emperor, your parents will be forgotten, but what about your sister and nephew's family? Be an eternal noble? Give me some benefits, be a mortal nobleman for a few thousand, die in old age, and then continue to take care of you in the next life. Not to mention that my sister becomes an immortal and takes advantage of my brother's influence to slap her in the face and break off the engagement. I also give her some anti-inflammatory drugs. I just wanted to tell you about the plot, but after thinking so much about the subsequent plot, I suddenly felt that I couldn't stand it and didn't want to read it. Sorry, goodbye, author.

I have never heard of a god stealing the origin of my own mountain. How can I call him a god?

To follow the incense and fire path is basically to expand the scope of jurisdiction and gain authority over heaven and earth. Then control all the authority of the world in which you live, control the world and become the master of the world, and finally continue to evolve and expand the world. The stronger the world, the stronger you will be as the master of the world, or build a divine domain or a divine kingdom, and then continue to evolve into the world, and then continue to evolve and expand the world. The stronger the world is, the stronger you are as the Lord of the World. In fact, no matter which path you take, it will be the same in the end. In the end, the world will evolve and grow to include all the rules and avenues in the world. The Lord of the World will finally understand and control all the rules and avenues in the world, thus transcending all the rules and avenues in the world, and become a transcendent person who transcends everything.

After reading Chapter Fourteen, to be honest, starting from Chapter Ten, I felt like I had read the previous ten chapters in vain, like reading a novel all over again! Combat power system, cultivation state, the protagonist suddenly changes from a person to a monster with the body of a dragon and the head of a human. Then he changed from a mountain god to the king of Kunlun Mountain in all the worlds! Lifespan has changed from 300 years to immortality! Then I wrote a special chapter to show how awesome the protagonist's goal is to become the King of Kunlun Mountain in all the worlds. When I read it, I thought the protagonist had achieved Hunyuan! Then I suddenly realized that it was all imagination! In other words, the contents of those chapters are basically all self-pleasure! It's all about imagining how awesome you will be in the future! It has nothing to do with the present moment! Too much nonsense! The plot content and character descriptions give people a serious sense of fragmentation! Friendly reminder: If you want to read it, you can start directly from Chapter 14! This way you don't have to go through two protagonists!

I won tens of millions in gambling, and if I go back to farming and selling melons, I am also a talented person!

The author's outline is constantly being revised

I don't know who the author of this generation is. Are they so hungry? Within a few chapters, all the women have appeared. I have no strength, but I am diligent in finding women.

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. If you can obtain the force in the void like your current divine domain, you can completely upgrade the world. If you always do it in the world, it is too petty. Or you can collect the source of the mountains of the entire world, then sort out the earth's veins, sublimate the mountains, and canonize the mountain gods.

The few pictures since Fa Ti are all self-pretentious and self-absorbed. . In the second line, after traveling through the past three years, I haven't even figured out another ghost land at my doorstep. I don't know if I'll figure it out later. Originally, the system of incense and fire was almost written as a perpetual motion machine, but then a creation system was introduced. It was really intoxicating.

What did you write? It's neither fish nor fowl, and it's also a harem story about torturing the master, you're really good at it!

When I saw Chapter 10 of the City, I didn't dare to write those things. Just don't write it. It's disgusting. I didn't dare to write it anymore. Damn it. When I saw the main character was sold, I felt like shit. What on earth did you want to express? You thought your own mountain god was going to go crazy and kill his whole family. Then you sold it later. You are awesome. It's disgusting. I read the comments at first and said it was poisonous, but I didn't expect it to be so poisonous.

All I can say is that the author was so happy with the writing that it became a self-help article. Overall, the idea is very good, but it really has no strength.

The earth-like rain gods are actually the guarantee of the world's spiritual energy. The basic cultivation resources that maintain the world are naturally generated. The existence of the gods is a small spiritual energy perpetual motion machine under certain circumstances.

Who knows the group number of the author's book club, please send it. ——A reader who likes prostitution for free

This book is quite well written, I like it very much! Is it updated yet?

Why should we classify cities as immortals? There are not many good books about Xianxia

How many like-minded comrades were poisoned at the end of Chapter 2?

The author pointed it out in the book, just to mess with Quan Qin, okay? 😄😄

It's very interesting. I support the author to write more. Come on 👍👏

I would like to call you the strongest with the number of words in water! 90% Of the whole book is narration, so what kind of novel is this?

It is recommended to write the year at the beginning. After being reborn, the most exciting thing is that you can be a copywriter. You can write directly according to your own ideas. The cool thing is that you are far behind...

What are you writing about? It's a mess, and the first few pictures are all narration. Can you write? If you can't write, don't write.

This novel is entirely based on a running account format, with basically no dialogue or communication.

I haven't read it yet. Read the comments. It's very bad.

It was the first time I read a novel and I read eight or nine pages. There was not a single line of dialogue and everything was mentioned in one stroke. Is this a novel or a story?