Start with Blue Silver Grass

Shennong Changcao: I read the Blue Silver Grass guide and was a little disappointed (each paragraph is followed by a personal statement, which makes it feel like the context cannot be connected). However, the author has made great progress and the guide is so well written that it doesn't look like it was written by one person.

The author is actually very active, but sometimes what he says is a bit depressing, but we can see that the author is still working very hard 👍 and persevere! Maybe there will be more than 10,000 updates per day one day! ! ! 😍 So first put the introduction below. Remove the content in brackets! Then changed to: "The book is panicking! Then I can do it and I can't open this book in a mood that will taint the readers' eyes! I will definitely be able to finish the book! It will not be unfinished! It will not be too messy!" 😆😁😜 (Tell the readers that you can do it 🥺) (If you are a man, you can do it!)

After reading it, it was good, but there are a few points that do have some impact. It is understandable that Yitian World wants to occupy it, but why should we train Zhang Wuji and the others? Although I want to be powerful, I don't have to act like a babysitter. I feel uncomfortable with the protagonist helping other protagonists for free, although there is no threat. Also, the protagonist's mother gave birth to another child, for no reason. I don't understand why I wrote this. Is it to support my parents in their old age? No need. Oh, this is a personal complaint. Come on, author.

The most difficult thing about Zhutianliu is the integration of the power system. To give you some advice, power is power. If there is a world suitable for all systems, then what determines the level is the upper limit. What determines winning or losing in the same realm lies in the deep development of a realm. (For example, if the Douluo system has martial arts, Tang San and all the time travelers are more powerful than the same level). The improvement of quality affects the subsequent increase of the upper limit of the system. Different worlds will bring suppression to the power of foreign systems. For example, in Douluo's field, the world can be regarded as a larger field. The greater the difference between foreign systems, the more powerful the suppression will be. For example, the Great Overlord and Doupo Cangqiong Xiaoyan have to go through spiritual transformation when they first arrive at the Great Overlord, so that Doupo is the lower plane under the Great Overlord. Then they can be regarded as branches of the same system. This transformation is equivalent to connected tributaries flowing into a larger place. The Douluo book describes that the greatest destruction of gods cannot be compared to Dou Di. It is assumed that the most powerful god is equal to half-step Dou Di. But Dou Di came to Douluo and was suppressed, which means Dou Sheng may also be Dou Zhuzun.

Alan

Please stop writing it. It's a mess and start a new book. I think based on your idea, it would be much better to simply write about Douluo and then open up some stories about other worlds. If you write this book like this, it will be like this. It is not as good as the several Douluo fan books you criticized earlier.

It's quite interesting, but sometimes it requires some brain teasers, otherwise you won't be able to understand the author's connotations. The introduction is quite discouraging and I suggest you change it. You should read this novel slowly, otherwise you will easily miss the exciting content.

After reading another fan, I think there is a pretty good theory: Tang San's Blue Silver Grass went completely wrong. Except for the hundred thousand year soul ring, the other soul rings of Blue Silver Grass are best from plant-type soul beasts. If it weren't for the Ice and Fire Eyes and the Awakened Blue Silver Emperor, Tang San's Blue Silver Grass would at least be useless. If there is a plant-based soul beast path, the Blue Silver Grass Spirit can surpass the Blue Silver Emperor in the later stage, and if the resistance points are full, it can be played as the Douluo version of Senju Hashirama and Bai Zetsu.

One thing I have to say is that this book made me feel numb while reading it. Can the scene switching be less abrupt? The setting of the book is also very good, but the scene switching made me unbearable. Many times I couldn't react to what world I was in. Sometimes the scene switches back and forth several times in one chapter without any warning. Don't you think it looks very laborious, author?

I feel like if you keep writing like this, not many people will read it. There are fewer people in the comment section now than before.

I saw it from a certain group, let me give it a look

After reading Chapter 20, the protagonist's innate soul power was level 6, and it took 3 years to reach level 10. It would be difficult to absorb a 460-year-old soul ring when you have mastered Xingyi Quan. It feels too stretched, so keep watching.

I feel good about the book. But why does it feel like the above part does not follow the next part when I read it?

It was so embarrassing to see the character set there. Tang Hao and the others only came to see the protagonist because of the martial arts. Then, without saying a few words, Tang Hao and the others asked if you were a Blue Silver Grass martial spirit. The protagonist was bragging about it. Isn't the character set a bit too redundant? Obviously, no one asked anything, and then the protagonist kept bragging for several chapters.

The writing is too mixed. I write this now and that now, but they are still in the same page. This makes the reading experience very poor and the writing is fragmented.

Dragon and Phoenix among men

This book is very creative, but the author just tried to kill himself The plot is too scattered, and the protagonist disappears every day.

Hey, let me clear my name. Tang San is not a villain. He just treats his own people better than outsiders. Most normal people are like this. The master is not a scumbag, he just surrendered to reality. At least he has the courage to pursue his dream. Zhao Wuji is not a good person, but he is nothing. The villain doesn't know why so many time-travelers torture him. Bibi Dong is pitiful, but it's hard to say that he is pitiful. Almost everything about Bibi Dong is a backhand from Wuhundian. Who can accept a backstab? The early stage of Qianxun Ji is okay, but Bibi Dong can't be washed away.

In fact, Bluesilver Grass is very manipulative, it can be used for healing, and it can tie up other people's joints like a rope, making them unable to exert their strength! Of course, it is the ropes of blue silver grass that are intertwined with each other. You can also use the spikes to prick other people's eyes, noses, mouths and other vulnerable parts. When encountering fire attributes, you can also let Bluesilver Grass store water, let the surface part be burned, use the water in the middle to block part of it, and then use the inner part to attack.

Please tell me, do you have any recommendations for novels about behind-the-scenes and doppelgängers?

A hammer in the east and a mallet in the west. The structure and pacing of the article are terrible, but the content is good

I barely understood it, and I asked why it took so long in Douluo. However, this kind of multiple worlds is a bit uncomfortable to write a paragraph and then change the world.

Doesn't this end too suddenly?

I just want to know if the protagonist has a harem of three thousand

It ended suddenly. I'm a little regretful and relieved at the same time. It's too big at the back and it's not interesting anymore. If I focus on the Three Kingdoms, I might be able to write a few more chapters. It doesn't matter if it's over. I'll take a break and start a new book.

Bibi Dong's first martial soul and ninth soul ring turned out to be a 60,000-year-old human-faced magic bead that took 30,000 years to cultivate.

Okay, okay, take a look 😍😍😍😍

Thoughtful and creative fan

What about the new book? ? Want to see the fate of all realms😏😏😏

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