From the Start, I Was the King of the Alola Islands

It's well written, but I don't want to see those Xiaozhi behaviors after conquering so many elves. It's okay to lend elves to the skeleton team, but please don't give your elves to others.

It is recommended not to translate the content of the Pokémon's speech, but to use body parts and pauses in the cry to express it more euphemistically. If it can be done, it will not only increase the number of words, but also make the description more vivid. Moreover, the reader's own brainstorming of the content is no worse than the author, otherwise what is the use of single-sentence comments? I still like this novel very much and hope to read more.

Who else dares to say that Groudon can't fly

It's a great start, but it really doesn't work out later. It was said earlier that the purpose of recovering elves is to enhance strength, which is not incomprehensible to us. It's okay to fall in love with someone you meet, but keep recovering new elves, and then they will be gone, and you will keep recovering without cultivating them. Doesn't elf writing all depend on the bond between a person and their Pokémon? The result is that the protagonist is pretentious, and the Pokémon just fall in love with him, and then he doesn't cultivate them.

At the beginning, the protagonist accepted a dozen or so, which was enough. I said I would not accept them anymore, but I took them seriously. But later on, I accepted more and more. Many elves have not shown their face for a long time, so don't accept any more. I have raised a bunch of overlord elves, which seem to be very powerful, but they are basically not used in battles. I just use the elves I just collected to deal with them. Author, don't you think the current protagonist is much different from Gou Hao except that he doesn't catch elves with one ball?

I will collapse if I write in such a hurry. . . Celebi That doesn't look good. . . Just write slowly. It doesn't feel real when you write so fast. Besides, it's really like a child, very childish. The elves have almost collected it. . . Don't write about mythical beasts if there are no major events. . . It feels like the author doesn't have a handle on it. . .

There are many Pokémon sports in Alola, such as skiing, table tennis, golf, surfing and other sports. I think I can write about these 🤓🤓

Come, the author reads with me My solemn oath: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words. This is true tonight and every night.

The power system is a bit broken... And you accept so many elves? Ah this

It is best not to have more than twenty elves for the protagonist, and the maximum number of elves that can survive is thirty. Because so many elf authors don't have the energy to write about their characteristics, and some elf think that elf is just a "tool when they have something to do, and save it on the computer when they have nothing to do", most readers won't be able to remember it, so it is recommended that the protagonist stop accepting elves 😅