Run a Hotel in the Apocalypse

It's pretty good. You can tell the main plot just by reading the introduction. I read that the author said that she would be the male protagonist in the story about a female protagonist. Could you please consider writing a story about a male protagonist instead?

There are a lot of problems with the big sentences, but the sentence breaks are a bit strange. The characters are a bit thin, and some links are obviously just to promote the plot. This kind of plot setting is also very feeble, just for the sake of the plot without caring about the development logic. It is quite difficult to write about the apocalypse for the first time. The apocalypse requires the author to create a sense of the environment. Some of the plots and characters in this article made me feel incompatible with the apocalypse. I would wonder, "It's the apocalypse, what is this going on?" And "Is she really a person living in the apocalypse?" This is my impression after reading more than 20 chapters (?). Come on! There are quite few articles on female channel post-apocalyptic management.

This is my first new book. The writing may not be very good, so please bear with me and I will summarize a few questions for you. ①The heroine is designed to be calm on the surface but a bit silly on the inside. The heroine will not have any special powers. Her biggest reliance is the system. Coupled with her original skills, she has enough ability to protect herself. ② Some people may think that the male protagonist's fighting power is quite explosive and he always threatens the female protagonist. Then what is the meaning of the existence of the female protagonist and opening a hotel. First of all, the identity of the male protagonist has been stated before. I can only say that it was not a coincidence from the beginning. The system will not be just a decoration. The reason will be mentioned later. ③As for why the heroine has no superpowers, I also thought about setting a superpower for the heroine at first, but I felt that there was already a system in place. If there was another superpower, then the various rewards in my main line would be useless. ④ This kind of post-apocalyptic business story will have so many supporting characters that I almost want to name them. I originally wanted to mention them briefly, but it's impossible. The main line is hotel management, and there won't be so many characters appearing every day, so you don't need to remember some of the characters who have less roles. ⑤The emotional line will be relatively slow, mainly business.

Do you still remember that this is a business novel, not a male protagonist's dominance novel? . .