My SSS Talent at the Beginning Is Still Too Weak.

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I've finished reading it, overall it's a very good novel. Perhaps in terms of details, there must be many omissions. But whether it is from the perspective of conception or description and the author's intentions, it can be given a very good score. But for me personally, the biggest omission is still the concept. The author's idea is too big. However, the length is too small, resulting in many things that cannot be withdrawn. For example, the author uses a lot of details to describe bionic people and humans, materialism and idealism, human development into the future, whether it will exist forever or perish, etc. It is difficult to describe even one of these large and empty theoretical systems in a novel of only 620,000 words. As a result, many details have been laid out, but when it comes to the actual details, it is found that they cannot be taken back at all. For example, the debate between idealism and materialism at the beginning of the article cannot be constrained by particles on the basis of my mind, therefore my existence. When particle constraints are used, it has been proved that materialism constrains idealism, and situations like this will be very common in the later period. The author's writing is very good, but his ambition is too great. Let's try to discuss just one topic in the next book.

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After reading a few chapters, I felt pretty good, but what I didn't like was that the author's depiction of human nature was too one-sided and somewhat illogical. Humans are social animals. When encountering this kind of situation, people's first reaction should be to stick together. The author is a little too obsessed with the laws of the dark jungle. The people the protagonist can contact are all people on the earth, or even people from a country or even a region. It is only logical for people to seek help from each other under this kind of survival pressure, and to develop together as a team. I hope the author will not focus on the evil of human nature. After all, there are still a majority of kind people in modern society. Come on, creating is not easy, I hope you can persevere.

Please post a post and leave a review. I think this article is very good, for the following reasons. 1. No female leads. At this time, no one can believe that unless you are 100% sure that others can't hurt you no matter what. When a female character appeared before, I was thinking, if there was a female protagonist so early, I would give up immediately, but fortunately there is not one. At this time, it is not suitable to have a female protagonist at all. It is very difficult to survive, and it is even more difficult to be a drag (I don't think a powerful female character will choose the protagonist, so it must be a drag) 2. The logic is more reasonable. Historians and geographers should stop arguing. This is not a professional literary work. Let the author go. I think the process of psychological change is quite good. When you are full and warm, you can think about lust. Only when you have enough food and drink can you have human nature. Unless you are a real Holy Mother, but that is stupid. It is normal for you to have a spiritual life after eating and drinking enough. But one thing is that the woman from District 18 seems to be licking the dog a bit too much, and it feels a bit low-key. 3. The uniqueness of the protagonist He is not the only one who has SSS-level talent, so the protagonist's ability to thrive in it depends partly on himself, rather than letting me think that anyone can be replaced. I think this is OK, and there is no such brainless and cool routine. 4. The car drives just right It is a car that is not vulgar and can be driven. Both men and women can have fun looking at it. I think it is very good. 5. I suggest the author be more confident, write well, and ignore the trolls. Just look at me and ignore them. Anyway, there is a grumpy old man 😏 in the book club circle who lines up every day. Ignore the trolls, there are many more people who support you than the trolls, that's how writing is. In the eyes of mature authors, trolls are automatically filtered out. It is recommended that those who troll as soon as they come up should follow my approach and arrange a permanent banning package. I would like to emphasize that I am not bribed, I just like to write long reviews, it is a personal habit.

Damn it, you are more ruthless than beheading a girl. Every time a girl shows up, before I even poop my pants, the girl is gone, or I get beaten up. Damn, you are so awesome.

Why is there no country? Why don't the presidents of these countries speak out? How about quickly organizing military scientists and professionals to build civilization? Especially our country, it is so good at the epidemic. Even if it travels to another world, it will be fine. The country will respond absolutely quickly. You know nothing about the strength of the country, and the president of our country is definitely not that stupid. He will definitely make a voice and call on us to unite.

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This kind of leap is only achieved by a few minor levels in fantasy novels, but it directly spans two eras? You can speed up the process but just skip it. It feels like the book is about to end? Don't you want to write about interstellar war? Aren't you going to fight the so-called divine four-dimensional creatures? The outline of this book is quite good. It moves directly from survival to science fiction, which is logical. In the end, you can write science fiction. Now in three dimensions, developing civilization to four dimensions, five dimensions, six dimensions, etc., You can keep writing, right? You can challenge your writing limits and see how many millions of words you can write without breaking down. In the early stages of this book, the world view seems to be very grand, and there are many foreshadowings. I feel like you're going to keep writing like this. The outline is pretty good, but why now? It feels like you are about to finish. It won't really be finished this month or at the end of the year, as the single chapter you posted said, right? Then this book is very bad!

It can only be said that this type of novel has basically destroyed the national system. Even if all the people really travel, as long as there is contact, the basic organizational framework can be established. I don't know what other countries are like, but our country will find that the surrounding government staff will issue orders, and the militia, army, police and other state violence systems will begin. Operation, the people of the country will take the initiative to gather and start organizing production (if you look at the previous three-defence project, you will find that the country is really comprehensively prepared. It is prepared for a full-scale nuclear war. What it faces is how to resume production from scratch when the industry is completely scrapped, such as using animal power to drive machinery for industrial production and other nonsense)

What an honest author. Looking at the introduction, the logic does not make sense, the details are ignored, and there is a typo. I entered it by mistake - don't enter!

It's all booked, can the author kowtow to me? I'll kowtow for you first, don't be a eunuch. Bang bang bang

With a hundred-fold increase, the protagonist is already too strong, but with another hundred-fold increase, it becomes even worse. To be honest, many authors cannot control this talent. Because it will collapse in the mid-term. In fact, when the protagonist is invincible, you can write that other regions unite to compete with the protagonist. You can also write that residents of the main planet begin to come to this half-body planet and plunder resources, or that divine fourth-dimensional creatures bring various natural disasters to increase the visibility. Well, it's really hard to watch a science fiction masterpiece fall into disrepair.

I just love this clean and simple simplicity. Thank you author for not wasting my time.

Malphite

Why does Xiaobai Wudi's novel focus on technology? Cultivation of immortality is not good. Focusing on technology conflicts with mindless writing like Xiaobai Wudi. After all, technology still requires a little bit of theory, and fantasy can be described in any way.

This novel is like a primary school student's composition. I have been reading for more than ten years, and I can't even read some parts. For example, the original text: Thread the vines through the big wheel, and then fix the wheel groove of the small wheel to the vines. In this way, a simple version of the combined pulley is completed. Tie a knot at the front end of the vine to block it in place to prevent the big wheel from slipping away secretly. Can anyone tell me how to move objects horizontally? If I use a small pulley to move an object, the two vines will get stuck. If I use a large pulley to move the object, the small pulley will fall off. How to move it? For example, if you want to make fried corn tortillas, you grind the dried corn into flour and then fry it in a pan. I would like to ask if the result will really be fried corn tortillas instead of fried flour?

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This book... It starts to get ridiculous starting from the Flame Scythe. But that section is quite good. Let's not talk about it. Let's talk about the Kingdom of Night section. I can only say that the progress is really fast. It has been pushed to cyberpunk in an instant. The older generation is all gone... It's outrageous. The Fish King is just a decoration. It was a cute creature at the beginning but did not develop, and now it has become a mascot. Mascot, Malphite finally rose to a level, and then his life was gone... Wuwu, my Malphite Wuwu... The Five Tiger Generals have obviously retired from the environment, but the Five Tiger Generals are indeed NPCs, and Xiaoye has died of old age... Wuwu, my Xiaoye, Wuwu, I can feel that the outline of the book has been reversed at a rapid speed, and it has fast forwarded ten years, and this wave of text chaos has made it clear It is obvious that all the previous settings have been thrown away and a new line has been opened. The ocean ruins are even more useless. With the forbidden land, there are a lot of plots that can be written. They are all gone. The physical book "Civilization Evolution: The Origin" tells the story of Tang Zheng, the owner of the SSS talent of synthesis of all things, and his journey towards the evolution of civilization together with 7.2 Billion people in a different world. It is written like this: After beating a certain person, his attributes plummeted and he fell into a deep sleep. The first book was completed. The second book "Civilization Evolution: Cyber"... I feel it is outrageous to omit a bunch of words.

The early part of the book was very well written, describing the characteristics of each technology, and the details were very detailed. A lot of people criticized it since I picked up a child, but the pace of the book is still very good. But starting around Chapter 100, the system disappeared, and the whole book began to develop in a completely different direction from the introduction. Then the whole book started to feel like Made in Heaven, and a few years passed quickly. Then it started to get heavy, and it began to try to make readers accept the proposition that the end of mankind is destruction, but it failed to let readers feel the process of getting this proposition, and it lacked resonance. But at the end, the hero found Gao Wei's way. Generally speaking, it started to deviate from the topic halfway through, and then it felt a little rushed to finish. Maybe the author's mentality was a bit broken due to being criticized, so the ending was taken back a bit, but it was not completely unfinished, which is still a pity.

I went to bed until after five o'clock, but when I looked at it at noon, I saw that it was posted five hours ago... Oh my god, it was posted at seven o'clock! The author should take care of his health.

It was okay at the beginning, but it became worse and worse at the end. It followed the old path of those novels, and added a little lolita which was disgusting.

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It feels very good. It surpasses many books on this subject. Don't pay attention to the gibberish words of those great writers. Keep writing.

After seeing the introduction, I want to say three words: The whole book is complete.