Detective Conan: Kamen Rider

Black rx

The overall experience of this article is very average, not bad, but not good either, with a medium rating. The only thing that is better is that the author's writing style and details are okay The protagonist in the writing feels nondescript. It has to connect Kotaro and Kabuto. If it is written well, black can't be black? If you like Kato, just write about King Tiandao Souji. In the end, the current protagonist has neither the cheating skills of rx nor the strength of Kato, which is very annoying. In particular, rx has three forms plus the infinite evolution of the sun stone and the ability to be infinitely resurrected when there is light, which are not reflected in the article. Then there are quite a lot of loopholes. Just give me an example. The article mentions the sister Qiuyue Kyoko, but then there is no more. The sister who liked the male protagonist in the original work disappeared. I thought she was my adopted sister after all, right? We have lived together for more than ten or twenty years, but we really have no feelings at all, and then just disappear from the world?

Write a little bit. The advantages and disadvantages are obvious. Advantages: The subject matter is quite interesting, for example, using Showa data to fight with Heisei Knights. The description of Brother Xiao Ming is also good. In the early days, Brother Diqi was not as aloof as other later stories, and he cherished friendship more. And Takagi turns into Gagami. Disadvantages: There is a lot of nonsense, not concise enough (new authors can understand it), the main plot is not written out, and it is quite confusing to read. The third rider came out too early, the second rider could still understand, but the third rider's appearance was just a joke. The description of the fight scenes is not very good, it looks like a leather case fight in the Knight movie, too messy. The arrangement of the heroine Aura, I don't know if it was a foreshadowing or what, it was very sudden. If there is no reasonable arrangement, it is better to follow the old path of Conan fan fiction and let Xiao Ai be the heroine.

Black plus Jia Dou is really poisonous. Can't you write black properly? You have enough to write about the infinite evolution of the Emperor Stone. It is so nondescript. No wonder no one reads it.

Ayaka Konno Kamen Rider Zio Time Robber Aura

I have been thinking about a book about Conan and Kamen Rider, and now I finally saw it, but the seedlings are still too young, so I need to raise them first. Here comes the final recommendation vote, come on!

The writing is very messy and I can't understand it at all. It's like there is no main line, just write whatever comes to mind, incoherent

Minami Kotaro

Good guy, where are you writing the script? All I can say is that what you wrote does not sound like a novel.

Minami Kotaro