The Medieval Dynasty of the Potters

The writing is so good, the writing style is delicate, the pictures are full, the characters are full, and every word is exquisite.

The first volume of geographical sketches, please readers, please forgive me for my handicap.

I've never read anything like this before/it makes me feel inexplicably. The main character of this book is not outstanding, but it really makes ordinary people ordinary to the end. Every supporting character looks more immersive than the main character. Could there be more fighting scenes? The fight is beautifully written

Let me talk about the problems I think. If the author thinks it is reasonable, you can listen to it 1-I don't know when it started. I always feel that the appearance of idioms in medieval texts is a very inconsistent thing. It's not that you can't express it, but you can imagine expressing an idiom in another language. . . . It seems a bit inconsistent. 2-Although we don't pay as much attention to the Three Golden Chapters as before, we have to say that those who don't pay attention to it are the old authors. In my opinion, the most important thing about the golden three is to create confrontation or suspense. Make readers want to read on. For example, Lord of Mysteries - Who Killed Me, The Naming Technique of Night - Countdown on the Arm, Fighting to Break the Sky - Breaking off the Engagement. They all make people want to watch them. . The author just started to introduce the main plot in Chapter 10. If you are not a patient reader, you would have run away 3- Most of the books I have read that wanted to write about the protagonist having a growth experience have been rejected. In Huo's novels, the protagonist can grow in level (skills, techniques) but there will be no growth in character. Mortal Cultivation of Immortality - Han Li (Gou, calm) Night's Naming Technique (given up by his parents at the beginning, calm and rational) Others, etc., Most of the top-ranked books have no character growth of the protagonist. It is no surprise that those who wrote this have been rejected. The current trend is that no one likes to watch a kind person grow up. In the eyes of readers: kindness is equated with the Virgin Mary.

The writing is quite delicate, but it doesn't seem to be very enjoyable.

Is this background too low? Do you want to challenge the aristocratic class?

I feel that it would be more reasonable to be from a noble family. In the Middle Ages, it was too difficult for farmers.

It is too difficult for the civilian class to rise without plug-ins.

Sincerely, it's been two days and there's still no update.

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