
Starting from the Wish of Fist, It Will Travel Through the Heavens
从拳愿开始莽穿诸天
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- Completed
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- 1.1M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
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- Qidian
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Some thoughts on the author's protagonist's character and emotional lines
Disclaimer: I am not teaching the author to write a book, I am just expressing my personal opinions and feelings, which contain a huge amount of personal subjective emotions. If there are any disagreements, please communicate harmoniously. First of all, many people criticize the protagonist's character. They think he is too crazy and arrogant, and he looks like a psychopath. Personally, I think this is nothing. You see, the arrogance of Ouma in the early stage of the original work is just as high as that of the protagonist, and he is the kind of person who is both good and fun-loving. Ouma's character in the early stage was actually very bad, but we didn't have too much resentment because we could see Ouma's handsome and immersive face from various channels, so we beautified Ouma's various behaviors. You think the protagonist is crazy? If you take the role of Fanma Renga and Fanma Yujiro and compare the above two aliens, do you still think the protagonist is crazy? The protagonist of this book was Yujiro Fanma throughout the entire story, so it was very interesting to read. As for the emotional line, since I brought in Yujiro Noma, I subconsciously thought that the protagonist also had extremely strong personality charm and attraction to the opposite sex like Yujiro. In the original work of Sabagi, the women who had a relationship with Yujiro were all extremely obsessed with him. Why is this? If the charm score is based on appearance, Ouma's face is rated 90 points and the protagonist is 99 points (the author sets the protagonist to be much more handsome than Ouma). If I were to put my first impression on a female character, Ouma would be 100 points (Ouma's handsome face coupled with his handsome, sculpture-like muscles), and the protagonist would be 50 points negative (his muscles are so terrifying that people ignore his face). A woman's favorability is largely linked to her first impression. For Ouma, women are attracted to him, but for the protagonist, most ordinary people's first impression is fear. But in the follow-up exchange, Ouma's indifference was deducted, of course it can also be said to be aloof, but the aloof Ouma was beaten almost to death by the enthusiastic protagonist with a crushing advantage (the protagonist stood in front of Ouma the whole time and let Ouma beat him, and then Ouma resisted the protagonist and nearly died with a punch). Such a huge contrast caused Ouma's impression score to plummet in Akiyama's eyes. Then the protagonist's impression score also dropped because he was too cruel, but it was far lower than the impression score of Ouma's character being broken. At Nogi's request, Akiyama had to communicate with the protagonist who she was very afraid of. Is it true that an ordinary person is asked to take care of a lion? Or have you witnessed it preying on a lion that was so cruel and bloody? Akiyama interacted with the protagonist with the mentality that he might be injured or even die, but gradually he discovered that the protagonist was not as cruel as he appeared. He was even very easy to talk to, and had a good attitude towards people. His personality was even a bit like a child, just like a cruel lion that had just finished hunting and ran to the keeper with blood on the corner of its mouth to be shaved. The contrast was extremely huge. What this contrast brings is that it breaks the inherent first impression and deepens the existing impression of the protagonist as a whole. On this basis, everything the protagonist does is consistent with his personality, that is, he is powerful and brutal in battle, but he is usually gentle and polite to others. The protagonist has maintained his character with absolute strength time and time again. What's wrong with such a powerful existence attracting a female to fall back on him? If Ouma is a walking hormone for women, then the protagonist is a walking village medicine. Protagonist My Alien!
It was fun to watch and very exciting. Fighting mania is the best character
Some thoughts and suggestions about the upcoming plot
The following content only represents my personal opinions, and I hope the public is aware that I am not teaching the author to write a book. The powerful protagonist's fists and fists during the fight are nice to watch, but this will cause aesthetic fatigue, not only for the protagonist of this book, but also for the content of other books. Why is it like this? It's very simple. Many, many authors simply cannot write the description of the tragic scene of the battle (that's right), and they can't even copy it, or they dare not copy it. This is very bad. The written impression is the same as a street fight, or street fights are more serious than what they write. Taking the relatively famous Saba in fighting comics as an example, the injuries suffered by the 13-year-old Saba in the battle with Yashamon were terrifying, but after that, he was punched by Yujiro and almost died. Is this scene tragic? However, after that, the battles of Saba, who was getting stronger and stronger, became more and more miserable each time. Why? Because that's what fighting comics are about, they are about brutal fights with fists and fists, but this also has the disadvantage that the protagonist must become more and more miserable, and the injuries he suffers every time he actually fights with his opponent must be more and more serious. The culprit of this is aesthetic fatigue. Only greater stimulation can stimulate us who are already aesthetically tired. It doesn't matter if it makes our blood boil, it doesn't matter if it makes us feel scared, or it doesn't matter if it makes us sick. As long as it can make us have emotional fluctuations, it's a good fighting comic with good scenes. But this is not enough. No matter how tragic the scene is, we will get tired of seeing it. At this time, we need a character with a high level of competence to show off. There's Yujiro in Saber Tooth, but there's no one other than the protagonist in this book. So the protagonist cannot fight fiercely every time, he must properly torture the opponent, that is, let the protagonist use technology to defeat the opponent unscathed, instead of getting injured every time. This kind of behavior is actually quite silly (but the author wrote it. My senses are very good, as if I am watching Yujiro take the ultimate move of the blade). Such a plot in which the protagonist abuses food can be left behind to reconcile with Rito and Ouma with Haru (the strongest fat otaku). In the subsequent battle with Uncle Kuroki, the protagonist is now seriously injured, and his right hand cannot be used on the cheek for the time being. It can be seen that the author is deliberately weakening the protagonist, just to pave the way for the peak showdown between the protagonist and Kuroki. The protagonist is at the pinnacle of power, and Kuroki is at the pinnacle of skill. Both of them are unable to make progress in this world. I hope the author can write such a scene well. It doesn't matter if you write slowly. What matters is the quality. As long as the quality is good, I can accept it once a day.
There are really too few themes about Fist Wishes and Blade Ya. I hope the author can write more and I will always support them.
This article was written about "Hunter of the Path" because the system garbage and the settings of "Bazuga" disgusted me. Originally, I thought I had found a book I liked, but I didn't want to read Naruto Chapter 7.
So Xiaojie really doesn't like it, and he also hates it. Really, typically what's mine is mine, and what's yours is mine. You can't hit me, but I can bully you, but you can't make me unhappy. And the strange thing is that many people like this weird character, thinking that he has a pure heart and innocence, my God!
Support, well written and very pure
Imagined the muscles of the protagonist. I originally wanted to make a cover with such muscles. Unfortunately, Taobao is full of scams, and I don't have money to customize it.
It's boring. I feel that both the protagonist's quotients (IQ and EQ) are much lower than normal people. Are you envious of the protagonist's fighting prowess? Obtained by sacrificing the two merchants.
The author wanted to prevent the protagonist from being raped by Yujiro, so he became an eunuch (sad) Author, you are so gentle!
I can't stand watching Hunter World breaking down its own arena rules. I don't know what the author wants to write.
I've read a lot of novels, and this is the first time I've met the main character who was beaten to death 😂
The combat power collapsed too quickly. The speed behind Quan Yuan was too fast for human beings. Wish of the Fist - Tiger, Crane and Snake Shaolin Temple - Saba - The Strongest Disciple - Black Scorch - One Rider for a Thousand - Contractor of Black - Fist of the Big Dipper - Prisoner of Food - Jojo - Hunter - Killer Girl - Saint - Shaman King - Yu Yu Hakusho, etc. It would be better to write this kind of world order. At the beginning, I would like to follow the hunter (the highlight of the hunter is his various abilities) and follow him with the hokage. There is a high probability that no one will watch. The combat power collapsed too quickly.
Can I skip the battle if it's not important? Every small character deserves a chapter or two! I'm tired of looking at it
The front is very good and has a lot of feeling. But this character is not suitable for Hokage. It is more suitable for Pirates. If you go to Hokage, you can only get an eight-door armor retreat. Why do you have to show off when you are reckless?
Hey, I can still watch it at first, and it doesn't affect me if I jump around to watch it; when it comes to Hunter, I feel it's a bit ridiculous, but I'll just watch it; when it comes to Naruto, it's a bit outrageous; when it comes to Pirates, I just hit the big move right away, and I can't watch it 😢
Quan Yuan itself is a niche, and it is a good thing that the author wants more readers to know about Quan Yuan, but most people who read this have read Quan Yuan, and those who have not read it will basically not read it. Your explanation is too harsh, and the protagonist is too short. It seems that I am reading a novel about Quan Yuan, not a fan. I can arrange more fights and don't talk too much. It doesn't look like a duel of life and death.
Fist Wishes → Blade Tooth → The Strongest Disciple in History → Street Fighter (King of Fighters) → The Valkyrie at the End → The Captive of Food → The End of Dragon Ball
The writing of "Ken Wan" at the beginning was quite good, but in the end, I couldn't look straight at Naruto. The various descriptions made me seriously doubt whether you have watched Naruto. It's not that you can't write about Konoha Darkness, but that the character's personality and abilities are really made up at random. How did Madara without the Rinnegan release the Rinnegan's ability, as well as various previous bugs.
It can only be said that the author's writing is okay, but the second world is not good at all, and the theme is not right, which caused a large number of people to skip the vote. Of course, I am one of them. The biggest problem is that what we want to see is that the protagonist is punched to the core, but in the second world, he basically became Invincible within the main line, even if there is an opponent, it is the type that can be won 80% of the time. What we want to see is 55 open, or even 46, I am 4 against 6, but the further the author writes, the more invincible the protagonist becomes, and the less interesting it is to watch. After all, we all know that we will win the battle, although there will be so much interest. This means that no matter how much you write, as long as you are still in that framework and the protagonist is still invincible, no one will come back at all.
After reading more than forty chapters, I can say that there are many fighting scenes, but my mood does not fluctuate throughout the whole story. This level can compete with Boruto.
Xiaojie is a very pure person, he has his own logic in dealing with things. To be honest, I really look down on those people who bully Xiaojie and call him double-standard and indifferent. From the beginning of the story, he treats everyone he meets as a friend, and he cherishes everyone who radiates kindness to him. As a child who grew up in the forest, Xiaojie undoubtedly believed in the law of the jungle. If you kill me, then I will take your life. Therefore, his view of life is different from most of us from the beginning. But if you want to say that he ignores life, I don't agree. As for you saying that he is willful and unreasonable, I just say hehe. What were you like when you were 12 years old? Using adult standards to treat a child is what you call double standards.
There is one thing to say, you are just following the original plot with an invincible protagonist. There are not even any tricks, and the changes are not big. You might as well read the original work.
The main character is written with a very low IQ. . . And the kind that is extremely arrogant
Well, this book was okay in the early stage, but it became boring in the later stage.
The protagonist becomes a eunuch in chapter 54, just like the author
Naruto can still see it, but when it comes to the pirate character, it collapses. . . Looking forward to the next one
Written in a mess
Most of them are fight scenes involving other people, and the protagonist rarely appears. I have no patience before I finish reading the free chapter.
The reason no one watches it is because of Naruto and the Pirates