Wild and Vast

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Uh, why can't I vote for a monthly vote?

This is the map of this novel. It's not very well drawn, but that's probably what it means 😁

Since a friend has made this suggestion, I will build one 😁😁😁

Investment is welcome🙂 At the same time, please support😁

Zongzi, with edges and corners, has personality; Dragon boat, with struggle, struggle, and passion; Fine wine, with fragrance and spiciness, with life; Friends, with you and me, with scenery. ————Dragon Boat Festival———— I wish you all happiness, happiness and good health!

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Overall it's not bad, keep writing!

Read the full article. The rhythm is tight. Rich content. Beautifully written. A new type of time travel. Ethnically diverse. Continuously updated daily. Many recommendations. Waiting for signing, waiting for prosperity

Author author. It's 100,000, have you applied for a contract?

Okay, I've had it for two months. Ready to take action

After hesitating for a while, I still wanted to make a suggestion. The chapter posted yesterday was about Lu Yuan dying in battle, so it was a bit poor. The first is the issue of empathy. Generally, when a sect is broken and the leader dies in battle, there is basically only one way to empathize. However, in this book, the pig's feet are related to the clan leader by blood, so there is another way to empathize, which is the death of a relative. Don't talk about others, just talk about myself. I didn't feel very sad about Lu Yuan's death, but I didn't have any trouble in my heart. The first reason is that Lu Yuan has less roles. He didn't appear much, so naturally the impression on him won't be that deep. The second reason is that Lu Yuan's character construction is insufficient. You didn't give Lu Yuan a label, a label that would make others remember Lu Yuan. In fact, maybe a label will do, but this requires your writing to be very good before you can write it. The third reason is that the author's writing style is not good enough. In fact, the author's writing style is already very good, but this time he went too far. It was war. Even if it is a small war, it does not destroy the world or shatter the earth, but it is a war, and it is a cultivator's war. The tragedy must be very tragic, but it is a pity that the author did not describe the war in detail, probably because he knew that his writing was poor. Moreover, the plot is not good enough and does not sublimate the war. For example, after the disciples of the Yushan Sect saw the death of their old sect leader, they would rather die in pieces than to be destroyed and burned together. This kind of thing. And the Yushan Gate is eight hundred years old, and it still hasn't clicked on the bottom of the box? You know, that's eight hundred years! A pig can become a spirit even if it lives for eight hundred years, not to mention that the Yushan Sect is a huge sect organization. It seems that the Blood Yin Sect suffered no losses after breaking through the Yushan Sect. The Blood Yin Sect should have raided the Yushan Sect a long time ago, because the number or quality of their disciples must be much higher than that of the Yushan Sect in order to absolutely crush the Yushan Sect. Then at this time, Xue Wuji's cultivation level is no longer important. Two fists are no match for four hands, let alone thousands of hands. After the Xueyin Sect completely crushed the Yushan Sect, no matter how powerful Lu Yuan was, there was nothing he could do to save himself. That's about it. In fact, the author still writes very well. I look forward to the author's follow-up and then slaps me hard in the face to prove that your even distribution of roles, perfect character construction, and your writing skills are the only one in the world! 🙂

Good morning☀

Author, if you haven't signed this contract yet, just click through and finish it.

Author, you are really patient, this is 300,000 words.

Is Gu Xiaoxiao the heroine? Or maybe the heroine hasn't really appeared yet, but this little girl Gu Xiaoxiao is quite cute 😊

Author: I heard that if you worship gods more, you can increase your chances of signing a contract. When I signed the contract for my first novel, I worshiped Wenquxing.

I suddenly thought of these few points 1. Write about occupations, including entertainment, including rebirth, including historical farming. The direction is that the protagonist has to come up with something. It is surprising. This is a fun plot in this direction. When writing this, you need to pay attention. When the protagonist comes up with something to show off, it is best to combine it with his own identity and situation. For example, the protagonist travels to the past or is reborn, and then makes a short film and posts it to Bilibili. Without foreshadowing, readers will not be able to create a sense of expectation. At least, if you write more clearly, you can say that the protagonist is graduating, or is going to participate in a competition, and then he is temporarily tricked by his teammates, and then the protagonist comes up with a short film. This way, there is foreshadowing, and you can also get a slap in the face later. If you are more sophisticated, you can also add descriptions of daily life, including interpersonal relationships, etc. The same goes for other rebirth stories and historical farming, where the plot is combined with the identity of the protagonist and the situation. 2. The villain slaps the protagonist in the face. For example, the supporting character quits on the spot, embarrassing the protagonist, or the supporting character suppresses the protagonist. In the past, it was naturally like the Dragon King. There was someone behind the supporting character on the protagonist's side to help the protagonist kill the opponent. This is actually possible in the cultivation literature. But in the real world, especially if the daily supporting characters conflict because of their selfishness, and then it would be very embarrassing to write a supporting character on the protagonist's side to mess with the other side. Of course, not the Holy Mother either. In this case, the other party should be allowed to suffer the consequences. If he follows the plot, he will be unlucky, and then regret that he did not follow the protagonist. 3. Regarding the sense of substitution, in fact, for most readers today, if you just pick up a fantasy fairy background, and the writing is not particularly good, if you can't write a flavorful and interesting plot, no one will read it, so it is best for newcomers to write backgrounds that are familiar to readers, rather than writing them yourself, and then revise them. Refining essays revolves around the main line of cultivation, real cities, history, games, etc., Around the protagonist's career identity and direction, becoming famous and making money; or writing about some of the more popular routines recently... 4. It is not recommended to write very complicated settings, especially in cities with all kinds of strange cheats; in the fairy tale fantasy background, there are all kinds of strange settings, worthy of ridicule, worthy of slap in the face, etc. No one will really read this kind of writing without any writing. Honestly write a pure background, urban profession, just focus on career development, fantasy fairy training, write a world view that readers are familiar with, and then the protagonist has an identity, and the main line of cultivation 5. It is best not to narrate the beginning. Many people just write two paragraphs about themselves traveling through time, what kind of world is this, and there is no sense of substitution. Write daily scenes, what the protagonist is doing now, and what difficulties they encounter, and then slowly write out the background of this time travel and rebirth, and then basically lead to a main plot at the end of the first chapter.

It's the 9th. Have you applied as a writer?

The story was okay, but there was a problem with the narrative angle, which might have made the editor uncomfortable, so I didn't sign the contract. It is based on the narrative perspective. If you cannot learn this, it will be difficult to sign a contract.

There should be some conflicts and competitions between students in the academy, and the protagonist's enemies will take the next step if they find out that the protagonist is not dead. That sect leader sent his daughter to sneak into the academy. He accidentally became a tutor in the academy, and then accidentally fell in love with the protagonist. Then he betrayed the protagonist and joined the protagonist's group. He was in a dilemma between love and family.

The circle is a little quiet! Have everyone abandoned me?🥺🥺🥺