Tomb Robbery: Starting from Queen Jingjue

Hey, it turns out that Cao Cao's nickname is Xuande. Is that Liu Bei's nickname for Mengde? The most beautiful woman in the Three Kingdoms is actually Xi Shi, I've learned a lot

That tomb owner chat group is really illogical. A bunch of people bet that someone will dig their own tombs. And the content of the chat makes me just want to vomit.

Ying Zheng calls himself the king? Cao Cao's courtesy name is Xuande? Xi Shi was also a contemporary of Cao Cao? Author, you yourself have liked it and you won't change it? It's still in the first three pictures. Is it funny to write it like this? But I can't laugh! I have to laugh a lot 🤔

It's a little bit poisonous. It doesn't explain the historical knowledge clearly, and it doesn't distinguish between priorities. It's a small plot about the tomb of General Jin Guo. There is too little plot about the protagonist. It only describes the plot of Hu and Fatty looking for an exit. It doesn't describe the plot of the protagonist's battle. It's too unclear to distinguish the priorities. Moreover, since Zongzi is too capable, why don't you kill him and insist on making up the plot?

It's pretty good to watch, but it's a bit awkward The protagonist knows about Ghost Blows Out the Lamp, so you should also know the plot of the zombies. It feels like it's the same thing as in Ghost Blows Out the Lamp, with the addition of an extra protagonist The protagonist can't explain the situation to Hu Bayi and others, and it's understandable But if this continues, it's no different from Ghost Blows Out the Lamp It doesn't matter whether there is a protagonist or not

Only after reading it did I realize that the most interesting thing is actually the introduction

The more I look at it, the more poisonous it becomes. What are these things?

Tomb robbers cannot cooperate with fat people. You don't even know how to write novels In grave robbers, fat people are cunning, impulsive, and greedy for money. They are "hard-fingered." As long as your life is not as tough as his and not as lucky as him Then congratulations. You still have the money for the tomb.

After coming out of Queen Jingjue, escorting the girl into the ancient tomb was too compact. One tomb followed another, without any breathing in between. Although it was a wonderful adventure in the tomb, it was too depressing. Moreover, the chat group of your plug-in was there at the beginning, but not later. It was continuous. Take a few dungeon adventures, don't repair for a few days, just rest for a few days to write about your daily life, check the information, after leaving this tomb, the donkeys in the production team will not dare to rush like you, enter the next scene to rob the tomb, take your time, isn't the early writing pretty good, why are you anxious?

Can the author read more before writing? I tried my best to read it without thinking. I can't understand the common sense of history and I'm speechless.

To be honest, I hope the author can understand this basic common sense and basic knowledge clearly before writing the book. Don't talk about other things. King Lu Shang is not a monarch. If you call Qin Shihuang, you can use me, or I, but you actually use me. . . . Ah this. . I hope you can take a look and change it, otherwise you will be really discouraged from quitting.

I gave a special reward just to say that this book has many poisonous points and poor literary skills. Many people can get their claims wrong, and historical figures can get it wrong. Also, there is no difference between reading this book and the TV series. It is better to watch the TV series.

You might as well not have a protagonist. Without the protagonist, the souls of the two children could still rest in peace. But when there was a protagonist, one of the children's souls was directly exploded by the zongzi. Nothing changed. In the end, it became worse.

Finally finished reading it all! It is not recommended for those with weak resistance to poison as they may be poisoned to death! The protagonist is forced to be wise for a while to familiarize himself with the plot, and then forget about the plot again! After a while, I know the background and occupation of some people, but I don't know what these people do! What a mess! I don't know what the author is writing about! Bye-Bye

Cao Cao's nickname is Mengde, not Xuande. The most beautiful thing in the Three Kingdoms is Diao Chan, not Xi Shi. Xi Shi is not from the Three Kingdoms era, but from the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period.

Damn it, it's actually a eunuch book. What kind of recommendation is this?

Can Genghis Khan call himself king? The most ridiculous thing in the world

It's really rubbish. You don't even wear gloves when robbing tombs. It's weird that you don't transform into a corpse. I mean, you've already read the original work. Don't you know where the agency is? There is nothing new in writing like this. I also want to know what your book is for. . .

In fact, I was puzzled by those who wrote about tomb robberies. There were so many relics and tombs abroad that I had to focus on the things left by my ancestors. I wonder if I could leave something for the serious national archaeological team. I would say that anyone who robs tombs in the country should have no descendants. To explain that this is fan fiction, there are many works such as Tomb Raider, Uncharted, National Treasure, and Indiana Jones. These tombs can be built casually. If the protagonist doesn't do it anyway, they will eventually be destroyed by the tomb destroyers like the original protagonists.

The strength was so strong that I could still see it at first. It's very unpleasant to watch from behind. If a master of Uncle Jiu's level is brought here, he will basically be crushed.

Although the writing style is average, the writing is crooked to the point of eight strokes, and there is no chat group behind it. The central idea is not reflected at all, and the text is not on topic. It just adds a character to the original work, which is regarded as a magically modified version.,

This is my first book review, so I'm going to reward you.

It looked pretty good at first. Why do I lose my head just looking at it? Chat genre. You can continue. Why did you get involved in mythology again? Wouldn't it be nice to go downstairs with this protagonist group and start the chat system? Why is it getting more and more crooked? 🥵🥵🥵. After seeing this, few emperors will have anything to do. You shouldn't go around talking about the system's red envelopes. Adding adventure without thinking? This was done. It's okay and cold. Look, you've turned into a licking dog🥵

You think, can a man call himself young or something?

Md I watched half of it and almost finished it, but found that it was unfinished Gan

It feels like the pig's feet are licking Shirley Yang. I don't think it's necessary to lick it!

Did you pry away the original CP? Fans are either emotionless or create an original female character or assign a less important role. For example, it would be great if the heroine is Yingzi. Now it is really cool and serious, and extremely poisonous. Also, if you don't have character design, don't write a novel. I can understand other novels that weaken the original protagonist, but you just made Hu Bayi invisible. It's a real npc. For example, writing a team article like this is probably The role of Hu Bayi: the brain who divides the money and decides the hole, and fights in the grave The role of the fat man: promotes the plot (cheap) but is extremely shrewd and righteous, has good marksmanship (similar to fire support) The role of the protagonist: ceiling of combat power (the main combat power of the team), knows a little Taoist "spells" (just know a little, don't be too exaggerated) The role of Shirley Yang: Hu Bayi's partner, the team's intelligence provider, strong agility, good marksmanship, etc. Dajing Ya: The main force of the team's logistics support, with a wide range of contacts. Written this way, at least the character functions will not overlap. In other words, the original characters will not be invisible. But there are two difficulties: the author's writing style and plot need to be changed. The changes should not be too big, otherwise it will be difficult to have a sense of immersion (of course, I didn't say that your writing style is perfect). The simplest thing is to put a character like Zhang Qiling directly into it.

He said that he wanted Lao Hu and Shirley to get together as soon as possible, but in his actions he showed himself harshly in front of Shirley. It was pure elementary school mentality.

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No wonder the idiot novel is not popular, it's just the character of the protagonist🐶