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Let me give you a warning. If you want to read this book, you should read Chapter 48 first. If you can accept it, you can leave. If I can't accept it, I'll leave first.

I always feel that the cultivation achieved through the system is empty and false.

Hello author, I have a little suggestion! Even when it comes to the protagonists and supporting characters of other books, it is better to be more objective. After all, you are the author, not the reader. You should understand that writing is not easy. Presumably some of the characters you want to write must be in popular novels (objectively speaking, they will be more or less blessed by the original works). Of course, this does not mean that you should blindly praise the original works. There must be plots that you think are not good. After all, everyone has different ideas. You can analyze it. It depends on your skill. Don't just blindly rant, just like Xiao Yan in Dou Po and Tang San in Douluo recently. It's always rubbish or scum, and the reasons given by those who say it seem reasonable at first glance (the main reason is that the reasons used by these people have become a template) Since you have borrowed something from others, study it more deeply (after all, no matter how controversial some novels are now, they have been tested by the market.) The minimum respect must be given, and this is also respect for yourself. You can question it, but you can't be stupid!

After reading the introduction, I don't know what will happen if Xiao Yan, a protagonist with a decent outlook on life, meets Tang San, who has become Shura God... Other than those flaws, Xiao Yan is one of the protagonists in many online literary circles who has a good outlook on outlook on life. It would be unimaginable if you let him know what Tang San did. Normal people know that there is no benefit at all from being friends with a sinful person, and even if they are brothers, everyone will stay away from such a person. Anyway, I don't know how the author will deal with it. It's interesting 😏 and has been collected.

To tell the truth, ordinary people on earth can kill gods with their bare hands wearing Douluo Dalu.

This book is so beautiful, but it is a pity that one morning sixty years later, I was lying on a bed in a certain hospital, and my time was running out. At this time, I had written more than 50,000 chapters. I held my phone and scrolled through the screen - I have finished reading today's updates. The children gathered around the bed and said heartbrokenly: "Dad, stop brushing. You are so old. You should take a rest." The great-grandson said at the bedside, "Grandpa, you have been reading this book for sixty or seventy years. When will you see the end?" I turned my head and looked at my great-grandson's calm face. Said: "The author has been writing this book for more than sixty years. From youth to middle age and then to old age, he has been writing for a lifetime. He is writing a book with his life. It is estimated that he will never finish it in this life. It seems that he will pass it on to his children to continue writing. If he had known this earlier, Taigong also wrote a book back then. One book can last a lifetime What a good job. It seems that Grandpa can't wear him out. After Grandpa is gone, if this book has an ending that day, you can say it to Grandpa when you sweep his grave, ah ~~~~~cough cough" Ha~~~~~hu~~~~~~ Ha~~~~huh···········... Time will freeze from now on. Another seventy years later, a white-haired old man in a wheelchair was pushed by some young people to the tombstone of a tomb. The old man ordered the young man to take out a bouquet of flowers and some offerings, and then said to the tomb: "Grandpa, I came to see you again. It seems that this book will not end in my lifetime. You are right. It seems that the author really passed this book on to his descendants to write. But don't worry. , I have already dragged my great-grandson to pay attention to this book. If there is an ending, he will be the first to inform you. Speaking of which, I really have to blame you for a few words. It would be better if you also wrote a book. It depends on others. , A book can feed several generations, ··..." The old man no longer spoke, only the chirping of cicadas, After a while, several young people heard painful cries, and soon a new grave was added next to it. ····... One thousand seven hundred and sixty years later, a young man in front of a cemetery placed a large number of fruit offerings and kowtowed to an ancient tomb Kowtowing, "Ancestor, your wish is finally coming true. This book is about to have an ending, because I took the only daughter of the author's heir and got the copy of this book. Writing rights, so I can let this book end at any time. I didn't plan to pass the ending to future generations, but you always wanted to see the ending." At this time, the sky was dark, thunder and lightning were coming, and an old voice came, "You are an unworthy descendant, how can you say that you will lose such a good job? "

It seemed careless at first, but it turned out to be a critical blow in Chapter 48. It's as disgusting as if you don't accept me as your disciple, I will never be able to stand up for a long time. If everyone is like this, do I still need the inheritance of the master? What's the use of that Susu? Talent but not talent, skill but no skill, beauty, she can't even be ranked. Cui Wenzi is N times better than her. What's the point of saying that Xiaochuan and Gao Yao are just friends and don't consider recruiting them? That Susu is just a friend, and her talent is better than Xiao Chuan and Gao are still not good enough, tsk tsk, tsk tsk, tsk tsk tsk, just because Susu is interested in the protagonist unilaterally, just accept it. You are still a business type. There are only three positions, and this consumes one employee position. If everyone does this, how many positions will be given, and will the talent be needed?

Hurry up and end the myth. It feels like there is nothing in this world, except for the elixir, and it can only work in this world. There are no available resources, and the price of the medicinal material given is too high, right? A hundred-year-old ginseng is only 600 yuan. Don't add any emotional drama. This kind of novel will definitely collapse if you add emotional drama.

The iron-clad Yue Buqun, the protagonist of flowing water 🤓

If you think of a question that belongs to you, you can sell it. Does Zhang Wuji's cold poison belong to him? Does the schizophrenia belong to Shi Zhixuan? Then why not sell it?

Kamen Rider and One Piece are trying to persuade me to quit. The characters are not familiar with each other and it gives me a headache. I'm trying to persuade them to quit!

There are too many people, and it's difficult for you to arrange the plot. It's a bit confusing. It's too slow to introduce the world one by one.

The story of the myth is true. First of all, Yi Xiaochuan's tiger-shaped pendant must be valuable, and the box that can take people through time. Secondly, why should you make friends with people like Yi Xiaochuan? Finally, if you don't like Lu Su, why would you take him with you? No feelings, goodbye.

This kind of astronomy shouldn't have emotional scenes

Lord of All Heavens and Worlds Yue Buqun

Wasn't this kind of procedures for the Zhutian Temple broken down a few years ago? It's all about Swordsman starting from the martial arts climbing process, let's try something new! All the chores are badly written!

There is nothing at the beginning, so I have to recruit people. Do you think it is necessary?

Can't you imitate the setting of (I have a Zhutian store)? It's really frustrating to have so many restrictions.