I Have Been Practicing for 100,000 Years and Was Broadcast Live

After reading two and a half chapters, I really can't watch anymore. I think I really like reading nonsense novels, but the writing style is comparable to my writing style. Farewell.

I don't know about you, but I feel like I'm still this weak after a hundred thousand years.

I saw two books, they are the same, I don't know who copied whom.

The protagonist is very strong, but why does Li Lingxin write it so brainlessly? This woman is so redundant

Let me try to talk about the objective problems in this book. First The protagonist's pretense is a bit hard and it's baffling to read. There is no foreshadowing. If foreshadowing is divided into large, medium, small, and almost none, there is no doubt that the foreshadowing before the protagonist's pretense is almost zero in the first dozens of chapters, so the reading is unusually stiff and awkward. Second In the first ten chapters, Li's bodyguard is a poisonous spot. It is unprofessional for a bodyguard to act without permission or to act without permission. Even if the bodyguard acts, he or she will not say a word. (Maybe I used the Crimson King and didn't see the bodyguard get the signal.) Third The description of the juniors in this book is a bit stupid. The juniors, especially the juniors in the family, may know less, but they will not be fools. The author can explain from two places. First, you are the head of a big family. Would you let your juniors make low-level mistakes on important occasions? Second, as a junior, you follow your grandfather to visit someone. You see your grandfather chatting with this person in a low profile, and then the two people look at you. Will you talk about it behind you, or will you walk forward with the same low profile and wait for your grandfather to introduce that person? Finally, the character of the protagonist is too deliberately portrayed. The fact that he doesn't let people in and slaps people with smiling faces is totally inappropriate for his age. Whether he is a cultivator or a god, he will not have this feeling of being a nouveau riche and bullying others. Maybe the author wrote this for the sake of contradiction, but you can completely introduce the contradiction from the protagonist's descendants, there is no need to be so blunt. Finally, we are all new authors. Whether it is a hobby or you want to make money, please stick to it.

I have recently read several books about identifying ancestors. They are basically the same, and I don't know if they were produced on the assembly line.

Brothers, don't come in. It's produced and processed on the assembly line. Don't come in. It's highly toxic.

I am particularly curious about how a mortal who has lived for a hundred thousand years can make him fall in love.

After a hundred thousand years of cultivation, you have reached the level of a dog? Can it be broadcast live?

They've been cultivating for 100,000 years, and their family members live broadcasted that they've cultivated it on a dog.

Is there no book at the starting point? Can this also be used as a daily guide?

The main thing. This character. 100,000 Years of cultivation. Fighting dinosaurs. Do you think so? We are stupid. Also like primitive people. Sermon. Damn it. Dinosaur. How many years have we been away? Tens of millions of years. How many years are primitive humans away from us? It's also modern times. 100,000 Years. Not tens of millions of years. Just to tease me.

It's very creative, and the protagonist's grandfather is also very cute.

In a hundred thousand years, half the world will be your descendants

Yesterday I read a book called "Cultivation". I was exposed by my great-grandson live broadcast. I feel that the plot is similar to this book, but the names are different. It couldn't be written by the same person.

After 100,000 years of cultivation, are you sure you will be your descendant or your descendant?

One hundred thousand years? Elementary school compositions are better than this 🤫

"Xianhao, starting from the live broadcast" borrows a building and wishes Fei

After cultivating for 100,000 years, the Golden Immortal can unify the planes? How rubbish is this?

After reading the introduction, I feel like I have finished reading this book.

The pig's trotter great-grandson is absolutely redundant and pure waste.

Your writing style is not good. . The plot is similar to the book I read some time ago, and the title of the book (I am a cultivator of immortality was exposed by my great-granddaughter in a live broadcast). I just took a look and found that my book was released on April 29th, and yours was released on May 20th. What a coincidence. . . . I am a bookworm, not the author, don't be disrespectful, I am not promoting the book