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It's not like I've been working for a job for 3 years, it's like driving screws in a factory for 3 years.
This book has things that the author wants to write, but it is a bit immature. My humble opinion: 1. A female AD is arranged for some reason, but does the league currently have a female AD on the home team? 2. The protagonist is an edg veteran. Readers want to see a quick slap in the face, a cool rhythm, and the protagonist leading the team forward. The protagonist is the boss in the team, so carry, rather than the protagonist growing up with the team. You are not a newcomer, so you are not suitable to start the protagonist setting. 3. It is best to write the playoffs or S-game within 200 chapters, and the pace is slow.
What can I say about the plot? I personally feel that it is not very good and it is not a cool genre. I think the biggest failure is female players
The author is probably a more androgynous boy. He is submissive and indecisive between the lines, as if it were written in front of him. No, it's a girl writing it, right?
Multiple protagonists, an abusive master, the intelligent system is replaced by a young lady halfway through, and all kinds of fake tricks to fool readers Anyway, it is a very strange book. I just don't want to be popular, and I wrote it for myself.
There are also women who are so awesome, so imaginative and unintelligible.
The author must be young, he writes emotional lines like a child playing house
Update time: 9pm every night.
Author, you have written these two women in such detail. If you only accept one and give up the other, it will really be a major poisonous point in the book. Very sincere advice.
After reading it, this is what I think. Don't judge me for a second. Let me quibble. The writing is very good, but it's a little short. It disappears as I read it. It's uncomfortable. Finally, I pray for a big update, a big update, a big update, and say important things three times.
I don't like the style, the main character looks like a funny guy, especially when no one wants him, he feels sorry for himself and is funny at the same time. I haven't resisted Chapter 3.
No updates today
Sorry, I will make it up tomorrow. Thanks for the reward of 266 starting coins in the morning sun. The boss is very generous. If you want to scold me, just scold me in this comment. It is true that the update is unstable.
Is there a group? Where is the author's home? I can give you something good.
Ask for leave
Sorry, I have a severe headache today. I'm going to take a sick day and rest for a day. There should be a lot of updates tomorrow to make up for today's updates.
Good guys, who did you two look for to make the picture? You eat two fish.
The single female protagonist is the one, for the sake of spoilers, she is the most annoying one, all the pressure is on Su Qing. In the end, if you add An Qi, I will explode.
Some chapters are written in a mess. I feel like there are a lot of typos and misunderstandings. What the hell.
New book released, title: My Girlfriend is Very Cute
Well, brothers who are interested in urban romance novels, you can come and take a look. This is not the author number, but the author's name is Vegas Na.
It probably won't be updated today. It will be updated tomorrow morning.
I did some farm work during the day and am tired at night. I want to go to bed early. I will update it tomorrow.
Is there an accurate time? . . Don't go without updates for three days and occasionally fake corpses. . .