Douluo: Capture the Goddess Zhu Zhuqing at the Beginning

After reading three chapters, I finally understand why no one has read this book. It is extremely toxic.

， Originally, the time-traveler thing was already a major change to the plot. Are you still afraid of changing a piece of history? You have to let your woman have a past with other men, and still call it reality. This is so funny, how about you write a fan story about eating peaches and talking about reality with us? What's going on?

Are there Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue, Hu Liena, Shui Bing'er, Shui Yue'er, Huo Wu, Liu Erlong, Zhu Zhuqing, Ning Rongrong, and Xiao Wu as the heroines?

I don't know what the author is thinking. He really likes to write about his women wearing scantily clad clothes, and then other people will want to have sex with them after seeing them. Do you really like to let others see and eat them? Nausea

To be honest, the master in Douluo is really easy to win. He only knows theoretical knowledge, so what's the use? Even if there is no master, according to Slime's own talent, other teachers in the academy can rise. I always had this question when I saw Douluo.

Your setting is not good, don't add your own thoughts, the realm will be messed up, what kind of god emperor will you create? And Douluo Continent is actually stronger than Dou Ji Continent? It's funny, Douluo is a fantasy sewer, a martial arts man, with martial arts secrets all over the place, Douluo Continent, all the bells and whistles? ? ?

Sure enough, the daily drug introduction is well-deserved😂

The previous article was well written! It's just that I can't read it until I get to the back. It can be said that it started to go downhill since the Haotian Sect was destroyed. After Tang Hao was killed, the book started to get bad. Why bring a group of women to the Killing City? It is completely unreasonable here. You can only leave after winning 100 games. With so many people, does the protagonist plan to stay in the Killing City for the rest of his life and wait to die? Then God Shura appeared to give the title of Holy Son, but it was superfluous. In this way, Tang San had no background, and the protagonist was basically invincible. No matter how you write it in the later stage, it will be just a glitch.

Now that I see Zhu Zhuqing as the heroine, I can immediately leave. It's true that 9 and a half of the 10 Douluo books now have her as the heroine, which makes me vomit.

，         ，lsp But I am speechless. Why do we have to let some original plots actually happen, such as Bibi Dong, A Yin and Xiao Wu's mother? We can completely let the system create a similar unfinished cause and effect at different time and space points, allowing the protagonist to go back to the past and win first. Then they use world will or causal involvement to block part of their memories, causing the plot to deviate slightly. As for children, do you want to know more about the system's deus ex machina? Is the lottery a decoration?         ，， It's okay to be looked at by your own woman or other women, but you let a strange man look at your woman's body?

The author would like to ask, after the protagonist becomes a god, can you consider letting Lu Feng fight against the world of the sky? (Accepted all beauties such as Xun'er, Xiao Yu, Yafei, etc.)

There are more than 1,000 chapters, and nonsense can take up 700 pages. The plot is not well written, and there are chapters of nonsense. Even a fight can lead to asking for a wedding gift before time travel. I really vomited.

I like harem stories😍😍

I have read a lot of Douluo fan fiction, and most of the fan fiction authors hate the original Tang San, so they are abusing the third person, but what makes people speechless is that they did not write Tang San to death early and kept the disgusting people. On the surface, they said that torturing Tang San has always been fun, so they kept it, but in fact, without the original protagonist, they could not write the rest of the plot. You are dissatisfied that the Third Young Master of the Tang family has given you the pen now, and you are useless. You think that the Douluo plot is not good, so I have given the pen to you, and you are useless. You have to write it according to the plot set by others. You will jump as soon as you leave. You are obviously relying on adapting the original work to make a living while scolding others and at the same time shaping the protagonist to be even more disgusting than the original Tang San.

There are so many Douluo Dalu novels, and the protagonists are either this awesome martial spirit or that awesome martial spirit. Is there really an ordinary martial spirit who becomes a god? He keeps saying that there is no useless martial spirit! Just trash people?

The author's works are so beautiful, so rare, but why doesn't anyone say a few words about it?

This book should actually be called Sunlight Douluo😷😷😷

Many of the authors wrote second creations. For example, in this book, Tang Yuehua is a madam and Ye Lingling is a chicken. The protagonist makes Sword Douluo quit the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect with just one sentence, and slanders the Haotian Sect without thinking. No matter how disgusting the plot character is, he will not kill him for fear of affecting the plot. While talking about respecting girls, it is casual and frivolous at the same time. The heroine Meng Yiran has not appeared as much as Shrek Academy Cuihua. She has always written about things that are inexplicably inconsistent with the main plot and do not match the daily life. I don't want to complain about the top beast martial arts and soul skills. These are the poisonous points. If you can bear it, you can still watch it. I read it through QQ reading.

Tang Yuehua has a big secret? Haha, just write something random

Didn't you realize that Douluo's martial spirit copied Oda's devil fruit ability?

Can this book be written for another three years? I'm convinced too. I can only say that you are crazy about money.

When will the author publish a new book?

Why do you have to hide your identity all the time? You are surrounded by your own people and you have no enemies. You are still hiding your identity. I haven't mentioned it until later.