Devouring the Starry Sky: Picture Book

What a guy, the protagonist thought Luo Feng was dead and almost had a mental breakdown.

It's a bit naive, and at the same time, it feels a bit weird to follow Luo Feng. Following others is the goal of life. I don't want to think like a person who has been terminally ill for three years.

Are there any living people? The comment area is so deserted 🐴. A living person squeaks and a robot clicks.

It's a bit embarrassing. There are so many licks from the original owner. I don't know why😳

Being able to worship the protagonist of an online novel as an idol...

Not promoting time travel for minors

I don't know if the girl depicted in this description is the heroine, which is a bit embarrassing. First of all, only the person she likes will pay for it. If the male protagonist accepts it, doesn't it count as a replacement? Secondly, this girl is not cheating, and she wants to catch up and doesn't want to be a vase. If the male protagonist accepts, will resources be allocated to her next? She may not be able to practice particularly well, so I don't know what this female protagonist is doing. 😂 Regarding the male protagonist, as an otaku, others have indeed given to you, but you can't refuse as firmly as you did at the beginning. She likes her predecessor, not you. You are entangled when she gives you something, and you enjoy it. In the future, maybe more people will value your talent and give to you. Do you accept it?

After reading it, let me tell you my feelings. The first is that the writing is immature and the plot is as bland as water. The second is that the position of the protagonist is not obvious. What kind of person he is and what his thoughts are. All of this must be based on the article and have his own ideas, not to cater to the public. Although we read fan fiction to make up for the regrets of the original work, more importantly, we want to see a different real person making different choices in that world. There is no novel that everyone likes. Therefore, the author's three views determine the three views of the readers who will read this novel, rather than your own ideas. If you impose them on a certain reader, this will only make everyone feel uncomfortable. I feel like this is the biggest problem with this book. Finally, to summarize, keep it up, you can see it, but you still won't get enough food.

It is impossible for terminally ill patients to worship characters in novels. After all, there is no specific image, so only a poisonous point can be accepted. Also, if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them.

In the first three chapters, I felt gay in gay.

[Mingyue] I suddenly saw a picture today. Although it is a little different from the description, it still feels the same~

The heroine written at the beginning must give up literature and pursue martial arts in order to be worthy of the hero! You wouldn't write that the heroine would be a warrior from the beginning!

Without the taste of swallowing the stars, doesn't the law need to be understood? Too much difference.

Yunyi

Can you please stop making the main character cry every time? This is not a beautiful novel.

I haven't read the article yet, but this introduction, is it Danmei?

The writing style seems immature, but I don't have many bad habits, so keep up the good work. Another: Don't imitate idol dramas, which infiltrate all themes with gory romance. Write the main plot carefully... Isn't practicing a skill much better than overusing it and adding superfluous features?

When I looked at the height of the main character, I thought it was a heroine, but it turned out to be a naughty boy. I'm speechless =_=

What are these chapters about? Not happy to see

Digging holes, the female supporting role evolves into the heroine!

This plot is too slow. Just write a dozen or so chapters for the Earth chapter. Wouldn't it be nice to quickly enter a more exciting universe? I didn't see the protagonist growing up at an alarming rate.

Are you planning to create an original book for this book and immediately break through to the universe level? Are you not planning to bid for a genius battle or go to Virtual Universe Company? Then in the later stage, are you going to directly rush to kill aliens? ? ?

Don't look at the multi-knife style. Isn't a knife cool?

Yue Ruoming

Blue Cloud

The writing is pretty good👍Come on💪🏽You must not be a eunuch 🤭

The first chapter is so watery, it doesn't look good

Come on, it's pretty good. Be sure to be the first to order when it's on the shelves.