
Staying in the Xiongbing Company, Playing and Cultivating Immortals
苟在雄兵连玩儿修仙
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- Completed
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- 318k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 4y ago
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- Qidian
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Personal opinion: In my opinion, the personal power of the Super God Universe can only be divided into three levels. The first, second, and third generation super genetic warriors. The third generation super genetic warrior is already the pinnacle of personal power. The so-called god-level (loaded with third-generation divine body technology) is still the third-generation super gene in terms of super genes, while the king-level (fourth-generation divine body, celestial body computer, and the weapons arsenal database of an entire civilization) is a plug-in. Third-generation warriors, God-level and King-level are equivalent to full-level numbers. The third generation is naked, God-level wears armor that combines immortality and defense, and King-level wears armor that combines immortality, defense, and recovery. They also hold the top civilized weapons arsenal and are assisted by big data and artificial intelligence. (Karl's phantom body directly means that I am an autonomous artificial intelligence image. You can't hit me, but I can order my subordinates or control weapons to attack you 🤓) Ruoning is just an ordinary third-generation angel, without a divine body or a celestial computer, but with a weapon that can break defenses, he also defeated Yan and Qiangwei, who had fourth-generation divine bodies at that time. , Yan used a trick to get Ruoning fooled, and then he took the opportunity to use the celestial computer to establish a gene lock and positioning on Ruoning. Qiangwei used the assistance of the Devil to suppress Ruoning. Ruoning was finally held back by Qiang because of Liang Bing's intervention. Only then did Yan have the opportunity to use the celestial computer to lock Ruoning's genes and execute a full-power trial. With so many factors, Hua Ye died because he refused to save him.
Update for me
Cultivation and other things, I think it would be more enjoyable without a female protagonist. Of course, don't have too many, as it will be annoying.
Many fan fictions are based on the character Li Liangbing. What else is there? The three views are different from the five senses. When the yellow village comes in the plot, the change is the change. At least you can die with dignity, but asking the minions to use rape, what is the difference between this and the Japanese invaders? Even if it is cleared through a series of plots later, what is the use? ? Are you really going to put down your butcher knife and become a Buddha immediately? ? The above are all personal opinions
I feel like the author didn't read The Way of the Burning Sun 1. During Dukao's time in the Ming Dynasty, the Sun invaded the earth. It was Dukao who used his identity as a former war maniac to help Sun Wukong fight back the Sun. Of course, it was Lieyang himself who was beaten by Sun Wukong and refused to retreat until he had only one battleship left. Although Dukao is an alien, I still recommend the author to watch The Way of the Sun 1. Sun Wukong's training was arranged with the help of Dukao. He is not a member of my race, and his heart must be different. This sentence is actually not suitable for the Xiongbinglian universe.
Not my kind. His heart must be different. Even a three-year-old can understand it. Why don't you authors understand? Joining the Super Theological Seminary is not promising. When I see an angel, I can't run away and don't look back. That kind of arrogance is worth licking. Can you please give Diqiu some dignity?
You can watch it without thinking, otherwise it will be extremely poisonous! I just want to know how to time travel and bring a cat with you? We are here to see the protagonist, not the cat! I saw an article written by a big guy that fits your situation very well. I hope you will read it. I can tolerate other poisons for a while, but this one gave me goosebumps! If you are using this cat as a punching bag, forget about it as a pimp, but in a few chapters it turns out to be more of a protagonist than the protagonist, so you might as well kill the protagonist and just write about this cat. [Theoretically, the fewer supporting characters, the better. The supporting role is the tool of the protagonist. Supporting roles that have no functionality or overlapping functions should be deleted. A novel is your startup company, the protagonist and villain are the core personnel of your company, the supporting characters are the employees, and your energy is the salary, so remember this sentence-'The company does not raise waste. ' For example, your protagonist meets two heroines, both of whom are beautiful, one is a lolita and the other is a royal sister. The two are jealous and their goal is to be with the protagonist. This may sound interesting at first glance, but let me tell you, it is not the case in actual writing. The functions of the two tool men overlap! If you want to do it, you should also give them different goals. For example... I will give you an example casually. Loli is to have a child with the protagonist to complete the family mission, and Yujie is to steal the protagonist's information and serve the organization. Both of them can fall in love with the male protagonist, no problem, but they must be different. Otherwise, the plot of the two heroines will appear monotonous. The first two bites are fine, but if you eat too much, it will make you sick, and if you eat too much, it will make you sick... If you eat too much, it will make you sick... If you make readers sick, they will not pay for your words! ... When I wrote novels in the early years, I liked to arrange an entourage as a follower next to the protagonist, that is, a clown, to add humor and humor, similar to Zhu Bajie next to Sun Monkey. Later I discovered that the novel is not a cross talk after all. There is no need for this kind of character to exist in many situations. For example, when the protagonist goes to play a dungeon, should the clown follow or not? It's useless if you follow him, but why write about him if you don't follow him? This is very embarrassing.
Although I haven't watched Super God Academy, I have read a lot of Super God fanfics. Why are there so many Black Rose people in the comment area? I feel that Rose dedicated herself to the earth. I don't want to say how much it helped, but at least she had an attitude. In order to let Ge Xiaolun open his wings and increase his strength, he even gave her his first kiss. You, the author, are the same. You will be all kinds of negative when you catch Rose. It's okay to write that the B cat doesn't like it. Rose entered the formation and was abused and left alone. Especially in the thirty-fifth chapter, she started spraying directly, and all kinds of brainless operations were simply amazing.
Don't just let the protagonist travel around the world to cultivate immortality. Is it really that easy to cultivate immortality? In the setting, the protagonist is considered a super genius in cultivation. Even if he started practicing at the age of ten, he would still be 77 years old and practiced for 67 years before reaching the threshold of pill formation. An opportunity stuck for 30 years without a breakthrough. If ordinary people doubled the amount, would the earth really have that much time for humans to cultivate, or would it have so many resources for humans to use? The protagonist is in constant supply of all kinds of elixirs. Without any elixirs, it would take hundreds of years for ordinary people to just rely on absorbing spiritual energy to build a foundation, right? Don't talk about geniuses. If you don't practice, who knows if you are a genius? God's system is so busy following its own path, how can it have time to be distracted? At most, the protagonist like Linqi can hold hands and have to consume resources to be effective. Even this is not as good as his teammates. At most, he can keep up.
Lu Qingyang: I, Lu Qingyang, know the most immortal diaosi in the world.
The world view of Xiongbinglian is quite macroscopic. If you add the setting of cultivating immortals, it is neither fish nor fowl, just for the sake of refreshment, which is a bit insulting to the original anime.
After reading a lot of supernatural fan fiction, I discovered a characteristic. Most of the ones classified as light novels are mindless YY, with the main characters being sleazy and the plots are a complete mess. However, most of the ones classified as science fiction have a couple of tricks up their sleeves!
Qiangwei and Deno are real cancer
This book has nothing to do with Gou. I feel like this book requires eunuchs. In just over 70 chapters, the gods and demons of chaos have come to protect me. It's quite refreshing to read, but it seems like there's more shit to be written later. It's weird if you don't have eunuchs.
The previous two days were fine, but why did the content of the past two days go wrong? Let's not talk about the setting of Sun Wukong. It is not a projection at all. As for Rose, she is 100% Dukao's daughter. She is the child of Dukao and the earth. But like others, she was implanted with the space-time rose gene studied by Morgana at the Super Seminary. The author also smuggled private goods. The evaluation of Dukao is not objective. How can you tell that Dukao has ulterior motives for the earth?
Did the author watch the anime with his butt? Let's not talk about the Super Seminary fanfic, why is there someone in the Xiongbing Company who is Black Deno and Black Ducao? I'm afraid it's not a serious illness. Without Deno, the first wave would have destroyed the earth. Moreover, Ge Xiaolun already took control of the situation in the later stage, and Dukao was not resurrected. Angels have joined. What happened to Dukao? Could the revival of Deno mean to rule the earth? Isn't Deno's population growing? Being able to bypass the official settings is awesome. I was already poisoned when I saw the killing of Dukao. I am more or less half a divine farmer. Everyone, listen to me and retreat... Otherwise it will be too late for the poison to spread.
I don't understand why many novels inexplicably feature a cat following them around. Cats are inherently disloyal animals. Very disgusted
Why do you have to cultivate immortality in Super God? The growth of immortality is slow and not as fast as technology.
I'm a male fan. I've always wanted to read Super God fan fiction. Everything Super God fan fiction writers write is stallion fiction. I hope it won't be a stallion fiction anymore.
After reading Chapter 29, I gave up the trap decisively. The pig's feet behaved inexplicably and were extremely poisonous.
The system is different. If you reach the highest level in cultivating immortals, you will live longer. Why not cultivating gods? Gods can destroy planets. This is more reliable. Cultivating immortals is enough to chop down a mountain. The heavenly blades of human and heavenly angels can split the earth in two in one go. Cultivating immortals has fallen behind 😰😰
Stop updating another book? 🤫
Laser, still have time to measure ballistics? Based on this alone, I have lost confidence in the author's common sense and logical judgment ability! There is no online article to support the basic knowledge and setting logic... Let's just stop at it...
I have read a lot of Super God fanfics, and no matter how big the protagonist is, he will never save the villagers in Huangcun, but this book saves the people in Huangcun. I will keep reading it.
The progress of cultivating immortals is very slow, while those who have become gods through technology will upgrade very quickly.
Tsk, if the main character is written to death, then the eunuch will be the only one. It's so sexy.
Why not write about Ge Xiaolun and Yan?
To spread the word, I am a Buddha from Super Theological Seminary.
Talking about people who are bad at cultivating immortals, let's take a look at the 36 Taoist Tiangang methods. The thirty-six methods include: "Mediating with nature; reversing yin and yang; moving stars and changing battles; returning to heaven and returning to the sun; calling for wind and rain; shaking mountains and earth; soaring clouds and mists; drawing rivers and forming land; moving the earth to golden light; turning rivers and seas; pointing the earth into steel; five elements escape; six armors and strange doors. ; Know the future against the will; Whip mountains and move rocks; Resurrection from the dead; Fly to hold traces; Conquer the Qi with nine breaths; Lead the Yuanyang; subdue the dragon and subdue the tiger; mend the sky and bathe in the sun; push mountains and fill the sea; turn stones into gold; stand upright without a shadow; change the shape of the fetus; the size of the flower is as desired; the flower blooms instantly; the wandering spirit controls the Qi; see through the wall; Return the wind and return the fire; master the five thunders; dive into the abyss and shrink the earth; fly sand and move rocks; carry mountains and cross the sea; spread beans to become soldiers; nail the seven arrows." The emperor who has not yet become an immortal can destroy the universe, and the super god can only blow up stars at most.
Supermarket Academy is quite similar to Yuanzu Ryu Xiuxian. You might consider writing about this.