Utra

I read the beginning and gave it some encouragement (? To be honest, the text and plot are very good, but this is more like a script or a documentary than a novel. The beginning has a clear sense of separation: it is not like the beginning of a work, but the "middle part" of a film and television drama. It feels like It's like the author understands his characters and what's going on in the world, but he fails to convey it to the readers well. The development of the plot seems abrupt, and the subjective initiative of the protagonists (should they be two male protagonists?) Is not felt. "Arrange tasks to protect the scumbag", "Receive a letter with blood letters", "Suddenly a leader passes by." There are too many "unexpected events" at once, but there are very few "natural events" caused by the characters' actions. It is really difficult to start. For example, it is like starting from the uncle's suspicion of a traitor. The audience sees a bunch of dwarves (and a halfling). Why is this? A dwarf prince is so fierce in searching for gems? Why did he give the protagonist a mithril armor? In comparison, the novel has to remove the advanced special effects, BGM and acting skills. I hope the plot is good enough.

Bullfrog, you are on the preliminary list, come on