My Female Boss Is Actually My Online Dating Wife

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing skills are not good, and it is very embarrassing to watch. The male and female protagonists get along with each other, and the dialogue is also very weak. The male protagonist gives people the impression of being a little bit, and the male and female protagonists are about to be released, but there is still no progress at all. The previous article does not explain why the heroine falls in love with the male protagonist, which makes people feel inexplicable.

The latest three chapters are out, and I have no desire to follow them 😆 I can only watch it after the author has finished writing the plot 😓 It has a weird face-slapping NTR style 🔨

And also in the industry and on the road? Aren't you embarrassed?

The subject matter of the book is good. When I first read the name, I thought I could eat dog food until I was full. As a result, I read more than twenty chapters, and the interaction scenes with the heroine only lasted two or three chapters. What the hell. To be honest, as far as the written plot is concerned, it is not very attractive and is far different from what I expected. It won't work, it won't work.

One thing to say, the beginning is pretty good, but when it comes to describing the meeting of the male and female protagonists, it is really confusing. There is really no description of the relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist. Is it because of online dating? The same goes for the male protagonist. Many of the operations seem numb. After meeting, there are all kinds of honey operations. Normal people's online dating fails. It is normal for the male protagonist to want to maintain a superior-subordinate relationship. However, the female protagonist is so obviously "pleasing" the noble man to feed him, and the male protagonist is still a little bit offended. The author failed to control this plot.

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the male protagonist thinks too badly of the female protagonist all day long. Does the male protagonist understand the female protagonist? Thank you for successfully knocking me off with the first few chapters.

It really doesn't work, there's no sugar, I'll run first

What is this writing about? The first few chapters are obviously good, but then I move on to entertainment articles. Just write what you want. What about the interaction between the female protagonists?

It's better to let the business war begin with labels. How can it still be on the shelves if it's so off-topic? It's strange.

You are writing nonsense. How could a woman be so scheming? She started scheming against me on the Internet. After letting me know, no matter how much you love me, I will reject you directly, and then leave to develop in a new city. Scheming women will often cuckold you.

I am a student, and I have tried writing before. Everything I write is not easy. I think it doesn't matter whether the author writes good or bad? All very hard. Come on! Author

Starting from Chapter 50, I feel that the timeline is a bit confusing. Is there something wrong?

I don't understand Ultraman, so I just wrote it blindly, and it's so embarrassing.

The title is very attractive, but the plot is really bad, and it is very annoying to watch. Isn't it easy for the male protagonist to leave his job?

After reading more than 70 chapters, I don't even know what I'm writing. The two of them have made no progress at all. They keep writing those things, or else they can just change it to Wen Chai Gong's daily life.

How can I put it this way? The creative concept is good, but the writing is not strong enough and the characters cannot hold it up. The more I write, the worse it gets and it becomes a bit toxic. Either stick to the million-word novel and hope that the next one will be better, or change the subject and continue. . .

The writing is awkward and the male protagonist is stupid. The introduction is interesting

When I write a der, I can't say how good it is, I can only say that it has nothing to do with the title of the novel.

It's been more than 50 chapters and the relationship has not been confirmed yet ByeﾉBye~

I don't know if Wang Ji is mentally ill. Anyway, I think this author wants forced treatment😅

Infinite nesting dolls makes my head hurt and I can't hold on anymore. What kind of author is this? . . . Goodbye, the worst book I have read in the past ten years

Abandoned in Chapter 6, this male protagonist is simply a joke.

What happened from 116 to 117? Did the author change?

What are you writing about? Time flows inexplicably. From the beginning it was fine, but from the end I am confused.

I stopped updating when I stopped, and I was stuck on chapter 250, right? Are you mocking yourself or the readers? 💀💀💀

The author's writing is really good. Those who doubt it should shut up and go away. At least there is nothing poisonous about this book.

Becoming a Shennong for the first time💀💀💀

How come it's still time to restart?

It looked good from the beginning, but the author suddenly had a reincarnation, and I was dumbfounded. What did you write? Go away, bye!

Okay, after reading 20 chapters after it was released and 10 chapters after the time reversal, I am sure that it actually ended before the time reversal. Although I really like the heroine, I feel that continuing to watch this inexplicable time reversal will only be torture If the author can kill the villain before the time rewinds and then the male protagonist and the female protagonist get married, then I can give 6-7 points for the previous content. If the policewoman and the female teacher can be handled well, I can give 7-8 points But he chose to add some science fiction elements to play with time reversal.