Arad: I Just Want to Lie Down

Come on, your writing is very good, but it has not become popular for the time being. I only saw it in the daily guide two days ago. If possible, I still hope you will finish this book.

Short and weak😆

This is the best-restored novel among dnf novels Full of memories, no major poisonous points

I don't understand. You're living in a game. What's the use of picking up girls? You don't have that function anymore.

No one? The writing is pretty good, keep it up＾0＾~

I went to the game bar to post, I hope it won't sink 🙂🙂

The author probably wanted to write about a mean person, but ended up writing a story about being a mean person. No matter how you say it, he is a master. How can he add it with a smile when being teased everywhere? Even if he is teased by a woman, I can't understand how passers-by can be teased as well. How can such a protagonist have any sense of empathy? Also, the protagonist is somewhat famous, and he is also a big shot in the eyes of passers-by. It's outrageous that he can be looked down upon.

The bad thing is that the system is intelligent and can deduct points at will... It's not bad for the protagonist sharpshooter to switch to roaming at the beginning. After all, everyone has their own preferences. If I could play this kind of ar game or travel to another world, I would prefer to choose a male paladin.

Let me make a suggestion. It will be boring for the protagonist to always play the role of Gunslinger. I suggest that the protagonist have a DNF role.

The biggest flaw of this book is that there is a system. The most important thing is that the system is intelligent and can also deduct the host's reputation. It is extremely poisonous. 90% Of people are persuaded to quit by this.

The writing is okay, but the setting is a bit weird? Online games? Can it be realistic to make a Douluo 😜

I don't know if the author has read the book review yet, so I'll give you my own opinion. 1. The protagonist's profession is not good. Dungeon and Ghost Swordsman is no joke. When someone comes in and sees that the protagonist is an eel, they immediately click ❌. 2. The positioning is not clear. It is said to be a purely online game. The protagonist is stuck in the game. It is said to be an alien game. The protagonist has no interaction with the NPCs in the game. 3. The main plot is unclear. The protagonist is like a dandelion, floating everywhere without a clear goal. 4. The pretense is not good enough. The protagonist has obviously done so many awesome things, but it doesn't feel satisfying. This is a problem with the author's writing skills. Obviously it is a very good book. The author has a good beginning, but there is no good main line. It would be great to make returning to reality the first goal at the beginning. Add an exchange option for the plug-in, and how much fame can be returned to the real world. In this way, the protagonist has to keep gaining fame for this goal, that is, pretending to compare. In this way, there is a goal, pretending to compare, and it will be more fun. Roaming is not impossible, but it is really not as popular as Ghost Swordsman. The audience for fan fiction is not large to begin with. If you choose a profession that is not popular, not many people will read it.

It feels like the plot is getting more and more inexplicable, and it doesn't look like a virtual online game at all. Is the author trying to write a game or something? It feels like writing this way will eventually collapse. The most important thing is that in this situation, the protagonist's time traveling into the game is a complete failure, because this is a very ordinary game, and the protagonist is just playing the game like everyone else. So what is the meaning of the protagonist's time traveling into the game? If you don't want to delve into the game's plot, why would you let him time travel into the game? To be honest, the plot is getting weirder and weirder.

There are too many slutty words about guild members and the protagonist licking women. I can't get these points.

This book should be called DNF: A Collection of Ten Years Old Smells

There's something wrong with this writing, let's just talk about the beginning. You might as well write a rebirth to the 60 version, collect the materials, and pick up the omissions. It would be better. . . What's the use of adding random settings? Those who read this book are veteran players. Who can understand what you write randomly?

Abin's grades were not ideal, and then he became a eunuch 😒

Not long after the server was opened, you actually couldn't beat someone. Laughing. Please ask if S1, with a smile, can beat 9 with 1.

I wonder if anyone still remembers the story of the fool and the child?

What I wrote before is 👍Okay, I wanted to wait for Bingjie to come out, but you ended up getting cold

I found out about writing dnf. Almost all of them entered the palace. Why?

Writing style, content, wouldn't it be good to honestly write a one-stop article about DNF explosive equipment, tasks, and PK? Why do we need to create a weird system? Why does the author embarrass himself and disgust us? Even if the plot is trivial, if you simply follow the entire history of the dnf game, many people will watch it based on your past feelings! It's a pity that it's superfluous.

Please update it🌹Brother

Update,🌹🌹🌹

It's too late... This is the third book 😭. I hope the author of the DNF mobile game will stop running away.

I miss you so much!

Update it, Nisuchi😢

Update it, 🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝

When can I come back and update?

I haven't played DNF for a long time. I used to play it a lot when I was studying.