Shenhao Starts with Losing Weight

A tycoon, if there is not a good process from ordinary people to becoming a tycoon, then he is a local tycoon. Also, if the money comes too quickly, it is a fat sheep, so be patient in the beginning. There was too much crap in the final system.

I felt sleepy after watching it, so I reluctantly said a few words. The protagonist's character is not established at the beginning, and the plot is like a gurgling stream with no waves️. Don't you know that the plot needs to be ups and downs? Take a movie as an example. It cuts into the plot at the beginning, digs holes, then entangles, entangles again, accident after accident, and explodes in the last half hour to fill in the holes. The ending leaves an Easter egg, or it is an open ending, which is endless aftertaste. Instead of the protagonist chatting with the system about secondary school topics, he is hitting this thing with a hammer and the other with a stick. From the beginning to the completion of the book, there must be a thread pulling it, called the main thread. You need to let readers know where the main line is before they can follow along. During this period, there will be many threads tangled up, which are branch lines, also called dungeons. These are used to enrich the main plot and serve the main line. The following is the dry stuff. There are routines in novels, and all experienced readers and writers know them. Establish a character for the protagonist at the beginning of the chapter, try to act alone, do not add extraneous details, do not start with the general environment, and lead the reader from the shallower to the deeper. In this way, you can better understand the plot in the second chapter, and you won't have to worry about the halo of the protagonist when supporting characters appear. In addition, the opening chapter describes the dilemma of the protagonist, commonly known as digging a pit, and then within three chapters you must use golden fingers to solve this dilemma to bring a sense of satisfaction (must use golden fingers to solve it) Write a bigger dilemma immediately afterwards, and suppress a small climax within ten chapters. Basically, your book is ready to be read. The starting point is very tolerant. Many readers are hungry and will eat a lot of seedlings. Come on! Draw out the key points, don't work behind closed doors, go to other books to learn from each other's strengths, outline the details, set up routines and take notes. ——Advice from an old eunuch

After reading a little bit, I found that the system talks a bit too much, which affects the perception. The plot of interacting with the system is a bit stupid, but it is acceptable. I will continue reading the rest.

After reading four chapters, I no longer have much interest. The system has paved the way for you and asked you to lose weight but you don't. You keep saying, "Can you please stop mentioning weight loss all the time? Is this kind of personality suitable for the system?" The other protagonists are probably already working out, but the waste is still in the ink. Before the system, they felt fine, but with the system, they are incompetent.

Are you still alive ten years ago, despite being obliterated at every turn?

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Damn you, you're just making up the numbers!

Little sister, little sister, little sister? Awkward?

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Please update more, there are too few now.

Not bad, I gave eight recommendations. Come on 😃😃😃

Dear friends, let me revise the article. I will tell you the specific content here, so that you don't have to read it again. Please support us! The article has been changed. Specifically: 1. System rewards are divided into three parts, one is task rewards; the other is achievement rewards; and the third is monthly draws. 2. The world that the protagonist lives in is a parallel world, and everything has gone back five years, which means that he has a clear idea of ​​the general economic direction in five years. Using the funds provided by the system to invest is a "pig standing in the wind!" 3. Secondary permissions: Reward cash of less than 10 million, character query function, new prop card is similar to a junior lucky card. Mainly the first five chapters. You can go back and read them, or you can just read them here without affecting your reading. If you have any major questions, you can also raise them here.

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