What Should You Do If You Are Tricked and Killed by the First Emperor at the Beginning? Waiting Online!

The writing really makes no sense, it's logical but not logical, it's cool but not cool, it's written randomly without even studying the history, some things that could have been written in detail are just brushed off or even not written at all haha, every chapter has a lot of flaws

Young man, please check the information before writing about Da Qin. If you don't look for information, it's better to write about another world. No one will find fault.

It would have been nice if the author had read it and revised it himself, but it is really a pity now 🤔

Finally I read a book about the First Emperor. The author's history is not very good. Chen Sheng and Wu Guang were nobles. According to the times at that time, only nobles had surnames.

The author writes a book and takes a look at the data. How many sweet potato seeds are needed to prevent people from starving in the world? Even if the vines can be planted in one period, it will still require 100,000 tons of seeds, right? Do you want people in the world not to go hungry after two issues? After the unification by Qin Shihuang, the number of people was probably less than 30 million, not 3,000, but 30 million.

In the first few chapters, the protagonist is just talking about having the Three Treasures. However, these three treasures have all been proven. As a result, Qin Shihuang felt like a roller coaster, rising and falling, and in the end he even named the protagonist a heavenly master! Then the question is, why were the other people who boasted about immortality not been granted the title of Heavenly Master, and why didn't Qin Shiwang get so excited that he went to great lengths to reward them. You must know that those warlocks succeeded in deceiving him. This shows that before being exposed, Qin Shihuang believed that the warlocks could give him immortality. With no results yet, Qin Shihuang (live for thirty more years) was so excited that he named the protagonist a Heavenly Master. Other warlocks (immortal) have not been sealed.

The main character's character is so disgusting. The bug at the beginning was due to the harsh environment, so the protagonist had no choice but to let it go. As soon as the protagonist escapes the crisis later, he starts to help the emperor catch villains... Look in the mirror! Isn't the protagonist the biggest villain?

Will AI automatically write books now?

Good brother, I can't bear to look at some logic. In fact, your writing skills are pretty good. However, he is the First Emperor after all. You can't write too, emmmmm, straightforwardly.

I just read a chapter or two, and it turned out that the First Emperor was completely regarded as a retarded person and was given the title of a marquis and a small town!

It's best to listen to what they say and learn from them so as not to change your thinking because of them. It's good like this. After all, it's useless for you to check the information about those sophisticated parties 🤭🤭 because you can't check them. Can beat you to death🤭🤭

After seeing potato seeds and sweet potato seeds dying from poison, I thought why not eat minced meat in modern times.

Your protagonist is 184cm and 55kg? ? ? ? , Let me take a look at the content first.

The author's history is hard to describe in one sentence

Ask the author, will he develop towards Xian Qin in the later stage? After all, you also wrote in the article that the protagonist possesses things from all over the world.

Long Tao Building ∧ ∧

Warlock? Shouldn't he be called Alchemist?

The most disgusting thing is potatoes. Sweet potatoes obviously have a cheat system, but they still deny the existence of gods and Buddhas.

Seeing that the author said that after one year of planting potatoes and sweet potatoes, you no longer have to worry about food problems and decisively gave up. Does the author know how many potato and sweet potato seeds Qin needed at that time? Or should we say that Qin has only a few thousand or tens of thousands of people?

Come on, author, this is the first book and it's already very good.

What the First Emperor wrote is like a retard

The author has changed his pen name. Are you the sweet and sour wage earner?

Chen Ke is finished. I can't stand it at first sight. It's not that the book is bad, but the heroine of the book is called Chen Ke. It's so weird. Emmmmm

Alas, I don't want to say anything about this kind of story ending before it even begins. No matter what, if you have no inspiration or insufficient preparation, every book is the hard work of an author, and if you mess it up like this, then there is no other way, even if it is a slight ending and one or two chapters, even if it is not an outline, it has a beginning and an end. To put it bluntly, if you don't want to write, don't write. Blacklist this kind of retaliation. Because in his next book, maybe he just wrote two chapters, oh, it's uncomfortable. I am not responsible for myself or my readers.

After reading the introduction, I am not interested in the series.

Cut! The author doesn't need to worry about them, it's hard to agree with everyone! The author just writes his own story! Novels are not history, they are just references. If they want to see history, let them read historical records and learn from them!

Could the author use a snack? You see for yourself how many typos and sentences are in the wrong word order, and whether the reading is awkward or not. If you want to be a top author, if these basic skills are not solid, how can you make a lot of money?

I was scared to death at the beginning, but after passing the level, I actually started pretending! Not to mention the functions of the system, a lot of content and plots are very childish.

The finished book that was promised was tricked into coming in again.

Your weight is a horse pole~