I Was Deceived at the Beginning and Joined Longing

Brother, you should have written the novel as a review. Why are there so many interactive sentences?

Forehead. . . . You urban entertainment writer, you gave me immortality, sorry, I can't stand it

Another little fool who was deceived by the live broadcast data, there are 35 million people in the live broadcast room. . . There are not that many people watching live broadcasts every day in China

Zhang Zifeng has been ruined by you, right? No matter who is the protagonist, she is shy🙂🙂

All kinds of embarrassing content pops out as it is written. If you say it is interactive, it is too embarrassing. If you don't read it, there is no content. The dialogue is also a mess. It makes people stupid.

I guess the author must not have read the relevant introduction in the assistant. He is an impulsive writer. His last novel was over 200,000 words long, and then he cut it off. The whole novel was overly sexual, and very unfriendly to logicians and plot lovers. If there is anything worthy of praise, I personally feel that the only courage to cut it off is because the author's reading level and literary accumulation are really unable to support the completion. This is not derogation, but the norm. I have been working as an assistant for several years. Many impulsive writers are in this state. They have an idea and start writing immediately, without considering the rational distribution of plots and conflicts. After writing what is in my mind, I will find it difficult to squeeze out inspiration and disdain the plot. So after a certain plot is over, I will cut it off. After a while, I will have an idea and start writing immediately. Then I will consciously sum up the experience and decisively add water. A plot can only use three sentences. Instead of summarizing, he actively adds various conflicts and then expands them into three chapters. Sometimes they are described in a certain retro form. Just like the author of this novel, the plot and dialogue are extremely awkward for people to watch. It reminds people of the budding era of new concepts, the kind of novels composed by bourgeois and gorgeous words. However, they are not good. When I read it again, I found that the number of words is just low, which is incomparable with that kind of hard-core composition novels.

Don't like foreigners, Liu Yifei

There is still a market for this kind of mindless and obscene book. This book shows that women all over the world are mindless and pig-footed. . Nausea

I feel relieved after seeing so many Taoist friends... The threshold for writing books is too low now. No wonder readers are so picky and can't stand it. But people who write books never reflect on themselves. It's really an interesting phenomenon.

The first chapter is extremely toxic, with mixed use of first-person and third-person narratives, too many self-exciting narrations, and the recent recommendations from Qidian. Com have become increasingly low-quality.

Have all the editors at Qidian been poached? What book did you return?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's poisonous, it's very poisonous, it will kill you

After seeing the first picture, I was so embarrassed that I drew a sand painting with goosebumps.

Shennong was poisoned to death in the first chapter

Come on

How can a novel with such skewed views be labeled as positive?

Did you start by finding someone to help children write novels in elementary school?

I didn't even finish the second chapter, so I slipped away.

Haha, after reading the introduction, I went to read the comments, and it turned out to be exactly what I thought!

I barely read Chapter 13, and I really can't stand it anymore. I really can't complain

It poisoned me to death at the beginning. I came to see you yearning for it. Do you think I saw you yearning to become an immortal?

Finally updated, I'm afraid you might have cut it

Zhang Zifeng also received 😅😅😅. Abandon books

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How disgusting. Especially the character's name.

Momojiji's voice-over talks too much nonsense, and an embarrassed group of people endured reading five chapters.

I really don't want to see reality stars appear. . . . .

Updates are quite haphazard, or they will be discontinued sooner or later and are too long. I don't know which one.

Why hasn't it been updated yet? A eunuch? ? ?