Only One Punch Can Break Through Everything

If you don't add so much, why would you keep it? You have to wait for martial arts. With this golden finger, Ma Bu can be upgraded to the truth of the Great Sun Tathagata, the great road is the simplest, and the different paths are the same. The more basic and simple it is, the more powerful it becomes at the end

How to say it? The protagonist is about to be beaten to death. I thought of adding some points. I have to be tortured to be happy.

I originally wanted to write a long review, but by the end I didn't know where to start. It can only be said that the author has dug a sinkhole for himself. The material selection is completely difficult to start with hell... If it were not for the level of a master like Squid and Get Out, it would be impossible to master this kind of subject matter. The impression I feel is that the plot is written wherever I think of it, and it doesn't make me happy. The reckless protagonist is completely incompatible with the calm and rational character. The protagonist is a human but not a human. As a result, both sides are offended and disliked... And he is not handsome. The lack of a heroine means that high-quality supporting characters are needed, but the character design of the supporting characters is not stable, and the weird world ends up feeling like an upgrade. It was really painful to watch. I sincerely recommend that you don't add so many buffs to yourself when writing a book for the first time. It would be better to choose a simpler subject matter.

The protagonist knows that Shenlan is a time traveler, but his personality is like that of a native. He doesn't go looking for low-level weirdos to ambush, but he hunts for palladium here and there. As the introduction says, he has to practice the boy's skill to level 999, and he can work miracles with great strength. He also learns so many martial arts, and the romance is not like romance, and he is not reckless enough.

To sum up, I tried not to increase the number of words by force, because I was afraid that the main character would level up too quickly and I would have nothing to write about, so the cross-referral flow would not be fun. I learned a nondescript way about the Demon of Heaven, but learned about pretentiousness but not the fun. The reason why the novel is so fun is as follows. Take a look at what I learned: Upgrade when it's time to upgrade, don't grind, and don't do any half-steps. It's time to change the map, and there's no need to worry about it. Because his writing structure is complete and his outline is detailed, it is not passionate writing. Moreover, his article does not worry about the source of points for more than five chapters, and Mr. Lu and several young masters basically beat the children from beginning to end. How can you be like you, who is beaten at every turn and leaves no points? Have you seen Mr. Lu and several Mr. Lin doing such ridiculous things? There are absolutely none in this book. There are few sources of points. If you already have them, you won't add them. If you look at the strength of the ink, it's not a good article. Nowadays, many cross-references can't learn to read it, and they don't know where the good points are. But what is worthy of praise is that the author's interaction is good. It is not easy to eat anything. If you write a book for your hobby, thank you and wish you better writing. If you write a book just for a meal, I wish you can add chicken drumsticks every day. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง. They all came from Xiaobai. The first book of "Gunmei" also abused the protagonist, but it stopped from the second one. From the fourth book onwards, it was enjoyable from the beginning to the end. And what's cool is that it's not just about punching the flesh. Which of the protagonists in Gunmei is not an old coin? I suggest you imitate writing first. Don't be afraid that you won't be able to continue writing and will waste time on upgrading or something. Practice your skills on the first book and develop the cool writing style. Even if you don't have to write two or three hundred thousand words, it will be fine. Just make an outline for the first book, change the protagonist and expand the map and do it again.

Instead of racing against time to add points, the protagonist suddenly encounters a nail trick and directly adds several levels. If you can't touch it, don't add it. Are you afraid that if you add some strength, you won't be able to connect with the monsters?

After reading the comments, I no longer want to read the novel.

A pig's foot is like a fool, but it doesn't use martial arts? Or a modern person? Then you might as well just become an indigenous person.

When I saw Chapter 12, one word came out: Chaos! It makes people wonder what is going on with the protagonist

Author, please try to understand the logic of your book. The protagonist went out with a large army for the first time, and the whole army was wiped out. He was the only one alive. Shouldn't he go to the Yamen to report first? He went home directly. What a ghost, and his parents are missing. Can you introduce what his parents do?

The bosses of the cottage feel like the NPCs in the game who stay in their lair and are killed by the protagonist one by one. The third hall leader Ennuo never enters the county town to hunt down the protagonist. These feel like experience packages arranged by the author.

Good night handsome guy! 😁

In fact, I really want to know how people survived before there was no protagonist in this world. When there was a protagonist, there were monsters and ghosts everywhere. What about before? Wasn't there before? Or is it that the protagonist has the property of destroying the world?