Douluo's Self Has Become Zhu Zhuqing's Martial Spirit

Douluo: I am a hair on Zhu Zhuqing's leg

Sympathy for spirit beasts, funny, people can't live in harmony with each other, how can people and spirit beasts live in harmony?

Daily drug introduction, who can give me a like? I recognize him as his father

Is there anyone? If so, just give me a shout.

As soon as I read the introduction, I knew it was a bad book that could poison Shen Nong.

Xiaowogua also feels that his writing is terrible. Can any readers recommend some books to improve his writing skills? Xiaowogua can learn from some experience.

After reading the introduction, it's time for Zhu Zhuqing's father to fight Zhu Zhuqing's mother. The martial spirit is inherited from one of the parents (can mutate) or both (double martial spirit), but the transformation from a beast martial spirit to a human form is a bit big. When Zhu Zhuqing's father sees her martial spirit, will he feel like he has a green grassland on his head...

The single heroine also has an affair with other women. Talent

Douluo fandom is really not suitable for writing protagonists who know the plot. Whether it is the protagonist who licks Tang San or the protagonist who licks Bibi Dong, as long as these protagonists know the plot, it will give readers a very deliberate feeling.

Xiaowogua found that many readers said they were a little confused about Chapter 23. Here, please leave Xiaowogua in suspense. It doesn't matter if you don't understand it. There will be explanations later. There is also the setting about Mo Wentian and the system. In fact, this is the main enemy of the protagonist in the later period. He fights against the system. Do readers find it interesting?

Chapter 1 has been changed. The foreshadowing has also been laid. After that, whenever Xiaowogua had time, he would also correct the unreasonable chapters in the future. Xiaowogua thinks that the only remaining problem is that the relationship between Zhu Zhuqing and Yanagisawa has developed too fast. I will definitely change this summer vacation.

So who is the protagonist? I endured the poison and read on, but in the end, you got another time traveler and the system spirit Pangu Ax, and also rewarded the immortal rope. What is the protagonist doing? In the later stage, he will kill you with an axe.

After reading the introduction, I was ready to leave. All spoilers are over. Watch Snakeskin.

Daily guide, whoever likes me, I will recognize him as his father

How come the heroine created by the author is so simple and mentally retarded, and Nono is weak.

. . . . There is Ning Rongrong's guardian spirit, and now there is Zhu Yeqing's martial spirit. What about Tang San's weapon spirit in the next movie? Xiao Wu's biological brother and sister?

The first chapter was addictive, and there was also the verbal teasing about Zhu Zhuyun and Zhu Zhuqing being hunted. It reminded me of a novel I had read before, which also had side-stepping and verbal teasing in the early stage. It was normal, but in the later stage the heroine was raped. Although there was no direct relationship, I was afraid that something would happen to the heroine when I saw this writing style, so I didn't dare to read further.

Can't you write TM well? I have to add some random people

Don't wash yourself if you're new, it makes me feel uncomfortable when you see me

It's boring if the protagonist doesn't have Douluo's memory

He is a martial spirit, so the author left him as a human being. He might as well have been an old man.

I haven't watched it yet, but I like it. I also write Douluo fanfics, but it's Lily. I have one with 4 to 50,000 words, and I'm still writing one but haven't released it yet. Hiccup, let's see how you write first. Come on, write more.

Looking at me with a confused look on my face, what are you doing?

Love it, love it 🙂🙂🙂

Last time I saw one written as Qian Renxue's martial spirit.

It took me so long to read this book to understand that there are three time-travelers in it, one from martial arts, one from the modern world, and one from the world of immortality. The beginning of the book is vague and vague, but it's not clear who the protagonist is and what his origins are.

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Why is it called a fan? It means that the protagonist has read the original work and is a fan. - I don't know that the original work just adds a protagonist with memories, who is almost like Tang San.

It is not recommended to read. It is okay in the early stage, but in the middle stage, it becomes very confusing.

What the hell, you gave Tang Hao a pill and licked the dog and ran away.