The Evil Life of Xu Damao

It's poisonous. Writing a time-travel novel with a protagonist is about suffering.

To Wugongqiao: After reading the latest chapter, Yu Lei felt unhappy. Although the love rival line can cause enough plot conflicts, this design is very unpleasant. The repeated foreshadowing before appears to be particularly inconsistent after the setting of a love rival appears, just like the baggage laid by a crosstalk actor is being dug up by the audience. All the foreshadowing before now looks like shit to the readers. Xu Damao's ten years of persistence became a joke. This plot trend may dissuade readers

I'm not happy to read the book, what's the point of it, and even call me grandpa, the author is enough

I finished reading it before I knew it, and the author is very encouraged.

I have read several books on the theme of love courtyards, and I think this one is okay. Please keep up the good work and look forward to updates.

Why do a bunch of people who are full of love for the courtyard suddenly appear in Qidian, and all kinds of outrageous things, such as traveling through the heavens, isn't this just an ordinary life TV series?

Damn it, he's even stupider and more irritating than the original.

The writing is okay, but the logic of the characters in the story is a mess. The protagonist knows that nothing can be saved under the premise of the plot. Knowing that the big boss would lose his job, he was still self-righteous and put his hope in others. His wife, father-in-law and mother-in-law still ran away. It's exactly the same as the original plot, is this still a monster? Except for Silly Zhu, whose personality is almost the same, the other characters' characteristics are completely inconsistent with the original plot. I wanted to write my own original plot without being too lighthearted, but my characterization ability was not reflected in the original plot at all. Even though the protagonist is Sha Mao, the second uncle, third uncle, and several other characters of the Jia family are so downplayed that they are almost gone. There are quite a lot of quarrels between the protagonist and Silly Pillar. Qin Huairu's scheming character was not reflected at all, and Teacher Ran basically lost it when he got married in a hurry. Characters with different personalities in the original work feel similar to each other in their dialogues here. I don't know if it's because I think readers already know it but I don't want to write about it. I want to create my own silly, mao-protagonist and evildoer. But nothing about what the protagonist does is reflected at all.

I insist on seeing it after the reform and opening up! I thought something cool would happen! As a result, two people who had been together for ten years divorced within two years! This book is also amazing! I think changing the title of this book to Xu Damao's Turtle Life is more appropriate!

You have been waiting for Xiao'e for ten years and found her in Hong Kong. It was good to return to the capital, but inexplicably, he fell in love with someone else... After divorcing his first wife, he unexpectedly had another child. Is it so poisonous?

This subject has been very popular recently, and it is relatively new from Xu Damao's perspective. Keep writing and keep an eye on this book

What I wrote in the beginning is very good. It's not a holy mother, it's not a dark one. It's about taking revenge and repaying kindness. But later on, it started to be poisoned. First, Lou's mother became wise, and then she started to have a crisis and changed her heart. Then there was a second female lead. You have been waiting for ten years, but when you see Lou Xiao'e and her son, you become a different person! Abandoned!

It's a courtyard again, damn, I saw one and reported it

The name of this book is "Xu Damao is Silly Zhu's licking dog"

Poisonous, highly poisonous Silly Zhu was persuaded once by the protagonist, and decisively broke off the relationship with Widow Qin; The protagonist Xu Damao knew that the catastrophe was coming, so he did not persuade Lou Xiaoe's family to run away, and ran to beg the big leader to step down soon. Then he was lucky enough to think that he could avoid it by keeping a low profile, and then the Lou family and his own home were ransacked. I can no longer stand these two poisonous points.

Rubbish, I can't stand it at all. What idiot doesn't know that people will run away when the wind blows? You're not going to Hong Kong with me. You are not ready to break off the relationship and find a wife, but you still want to give Ran Qiuye to Silly Zhu, and then become a bachelor yourself. It is worse than a TV show. Why did you travel to the past, specifically to hurt Ran Qiuye, who had some feelings for him, lick your enemies, and make them laugh at you?

The protagonist recognizes Silly Zhu as his master at the beginning, and returns to the compound to do it again. As of the latest chapter, he has been regarded as Silly Zhu's grandson and doesn't dare to resist at all. It's better to replace it with the original Xu Damao

Never mind! As soon as the first chapter comes out, you call someone grandpa. This plot is poisonous! The plot and characters are ruined! ! !

What a monster's life! Turtle life. I've read a few chapters and can't stand it

This book is as disgusting as it is disgusting. It depicts a sweet and undying love for you, making you think that love really transcends time and all kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Then when the years are good, this hard-won love can be easily torn to pieces, and it is not for other reasons, it is purely the work of people themselves. The protagonist really doesn't have the responsibilities of a man. I don't want to curse, but I really can't help it, bullshit

Xu Damao's Cuckold Life Identification Completed

I really can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 19. Who are you showing your misery to? Even though he knew the outcome, he still refused to do so and allowed his father-in-law's family to be affected? ! ! Still working as a dog-legger for the natives for a year? ! ! Retreat! ! Just accept my mouthful of 34-year-old phlegm. We read novels to let modern ideas change the plot, not to refresh the plot. Then I might as well read the original work.

You should call this Xu Damao's tragic life

No matter what is written, AI can write it better than this. It can't be that I bought a fake AI and it is so bad. It is the most rubbish book in Siheyuan I have ever read.

The author has written a protagonist who is more saintly than a saint. He looks like he has time-traveled from a mental hospital. The problem is that normal people can't stand it.

There are too many poisonous points. Du Yiming knew that Xu Damao had a physical problem, but he didn't check it immediately. Later, he inexplicably said that Xu Damao was fine. Even if you wrote that he was cured, it would be more reasonable. Du Er, I talk about it every day that it will take ten years to start the war. What's the difference between saying that the eight-year war against Japan is about to begin? Du San, if the wind blows, don't let the Lou family run away, and if you don't run away, don't cut it. Funny! Du Si, are you so obedient to Si Zhu? Do you follow advice or are you a fool?

11 Votes to support the author!

Author, are you sure the protagonist has traveled through time? Didn't you poop it out because you ate too much?

Although there is a little less support, I still hope that the author will continue to work hard. I am happiest when I read a book.

Go into the factory and hit the screws! Cheating on old age, double salary