Spy Blood Loyalty

The author must learn from the lessons of the previous book. It is best to have no more than one main female character in each plot. Emotional scenes must be written in a larger format, be more normal, and refer to the emotional experiences of people around you, okay? In fact, the relationship between Jiang Xinyu and Hattori Mina was well written. Their breakup made me feel like I was heartbroken, but the relationship with Tongtong was not well written. I suppressed Tongtong at first, but then suddenly I couldn't do anything about her willfulness, and the plot development was unreasonable, so I didn't read on. I think that during the confrontation between the two, Tongtong was constantly being eaten up by Jiang Xinyu, but it was only normal that the two's strengths were gradually discovered by the other and they fell in love with each other. I originally came here from Xia Ju's book, and I found it okay after reading the whole book. The setting of the twins in the previous book was a pity. They could have protected each other or cooperated with the male protagonist to complete many wonderful tasks, but one of them had to be written out. There is a tendency that the love between sisters is not as good as the love between men and women, and the pattern is too small. It's not that sisters can't tear each other apart, but the setting must be reasonable. For example, a country can fight together without breaking through. It's like the right path in the world is the vicissitudes of life. Although the political stance is different, they are still relatives at home. Or one of them is bribed by the Japanese to compete with the hero and heroine in a battle of wits and courage. Isn't this very fulfilling? You ask me why the review of the previous book is written here? Because I'm afraid the author won't see it, and I hope he can revise the last book if he has time. After all, the twins can write so many good plots, and it would be a waste not to finish it.

The plot is good, keep up with the updates, it will definitely become popular! I'm thinking now, do I need to use a beauty trick to get the head nurse?

Lao Tie has opened a new book, please sign it 😊

Does everyone read and dive? Come and complain when you have time! Although Lao Tie has a soft heart, we love to see Lao Tie being complained about, so book friends should complain more violently! 😁

Put it on my bookshelf again🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪[f n=54]🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪Write less emotional drama, author, you are really not good at this

I have finally caught up with the progress. The one who impressed me the most is not the male protagonist, the supporting actor, or the villain, but the female character who only appeared once. Haha, in my opinion, this character can actually be extended a little more and give her a little more. As for the role, she had no choice but to take up this career because of the pressure of life. However, she could have more ink points at the point where Li Si appeared. She could embody the shining point of the brilliance of the people and write about herself who still persisted in the quagmire. Unfortunately, it disappeared later. Just gone? My second favorite is the Snitch. He is not a good guy or a bad guy in the ordinary sense, but I think the author can give him more roles in the future, so that he can develop a sense of complexity as a small character making his own choices in the face of the times. Because I really like the author's previous books, I also read this book very carefully. As I read it, I had some doubts. The doubts are that the logic is indeed very strict, and the story structure is also very exciting. However, the author may be afraid that others will say that he has a poor word count, so I think he should enhance the atmosphere. Or partial psychological description, and when some group characters appear, more pen and ink are needed to make the plot more compact and gripping. However, at this time, the author's concise writing style will only make me, the reader, feel depressed and heavy, but cannot bring in more of that kind of emotion. I also have some suggestions for the author. In that era of depression, darkness, and no hope, can the author give us more hope in plot design? Don't use the death of one person to save another person, and don't let the male protagonist Gao Daquan, otherwise we will lose a lot of fun! I have another small request. Can you give me a role? Iron Hammer, female, underground party member, usually works as a Japanese chef, is characterized by being good at close combat, able to carry cauldrons, and has an ordinary appearance.

Let me go, this is the author of Secret War 👍👍👍👍

I've been busy lately, so I may not have time to open a building, but I will still vote as usual (vote when I have time), and monthly votes are also provided.

Come on, old man, happy Mid-Autumn Festival!

It's a sofa among sofas, I like it. Congratulations on the new book!

The writing is good, as expected of an old author, and I feel it is better than the new book on the list!

Comrade Xiao Zhou is on a mission.

Features of Lao Tie's book: The way the scripts of film and television dramas are written makes people feel like watching TV dramas. The fragments are connected in series, and each fragment is useful without much watering. So the old one looks very compact and passionate 😁😁

I wish Lao Tie can calm down and write well. Come on, my fans are optimistic about you! !

There was no update today, so I protested😁

The main character's name is different from mine in the middle character 😰

Recommended by Deep Blue Country Chapter, the author of "The Dark Knight"

Congratulations first! Then the old iron update will be more powerful. That's all, I'll be in tears if I talk too much.

Congratulations on finishing this book and spreading flowers🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

The author should first update 3,000 words for 30 consecutive days. Your fans haven't invested yet.

Lao Tie has updated it, and old book friends who saw it quickly came back to support it...

Finally updated😭

Updated, updated

Come on, old man, the plot has been pretty good recently, please update it quickly.

Suddenly I discovered that a new book has been opened, alas. . .

I've read Secret War twice, but the new book still doesn't have much weight.

Hi! It has been suspended for another ten days😭

I shed tears in silence, and the sound of camel bells rang in my ears.

Why hasn't the last book been updated? ? Although the plot was about the two sisters changing, I thought there was going to be a turning point, but it ended up not happening.

Hey, looking at Lao Tie's update speed is still intermittent, I can foresee a bad future!