The Evil God of Fire Clouds

I don't like your new book. Decisive killing is very good, and upgrading is also refreshing (you have absorbed the power of gods and demons, and you have to waste your efforts to upgrade. It is unnecessary and suppresses the feeling of refreshment). The key is that your power system is unclear, the power level collapses too quickly, the money collapses too quickly, the army and the country collapse too fast. A hundred thousand troops, like chickens, were casually slaughtered by a force with only one innate master. This kind of country would never exist. The cult pope suddenly jumped out, the mystery was gone, and the power level collapsed. The situation of gangs in the city is also speechless. Actually, as long as you use the power system of Shifangwu, your book will be very good. Masters acquire the best skills. The black boss in the city is also an acquired top. Don't let the cult leader show up yet. A batch of acquired monsters will come to level up the protagonist. The cult army, the army expands and reappears on the map (the army must have the power to suppress the surrounding areas, otherwise why would the army be needed?) Shifang Wusheng is very cool, but after 2 million words, I still dare not use unparalleled mowing to the army. Your book, now the power system has collapsed

New book, please support me! ! !

The attribute panel is too messy. It's better to only keep the major skills and martial arts. There is no need to write down the other things that need to be broken down.

Aboriginal people. Modifier. . . If you don't understand it, just ask for it in one chapter. The main reason is that it is too weird. The original democratic protagonist from a modern perspective has a modern golden finger. The style of painting is like Hong Kong comics. . This is like a lump in my heart that I can't stand anymore. It is recommended that you start listening to the audio book after writing it.

You golden-fingered loser wants to waste the martial arts you have practiced and add it to other martial arts. Then you will learn a hundred or dozens of plug-in panels and you won't be able to finish them. It's boring.

682-616-497, Shuqun

This type. . . A little unmotivated

What did you think about joining the army? There are cheats to quickly increase your strength, how to break it? No matter how bad the army is, he still has discipline, which is stricter than that of the sect. Moreover, the army is so bad, and he has to carefully conceal his strength while playing tricks every day.

Have you changed the type? There are too many big names writing about sports, and it mainly covers football and basketball. The competition is very fierce. Either you have good writing skills and become famous after one book, or you slowly accumulate book friends. If you look at the sports rankings, the top ten people have written several books.

I didn't like it either, so I cut it, sorry! ! !