Stars and Stars in the World

It has been more than 6 months since this book was first published. The author insists on updating it every day, slowly presenting an online game world bit by bit according to his own settings. As a reader, it is the first time that I have changed my habit of reading books. (In the past, I read it after finishing it 🤭) I want to say to Mu Yi here: The world is beautiful. Although writing a book is difficult to agree on, and there may be bumps in the road ahead, please continue to write, so that Mu Yi can find his friends in the world, become the person he wants to be, don't have to worry, and grow up slowly... Finally, I hope friends who follow the author to share more, so that more people can see a wonderful world. ❤️

The theme sounds novel, and the frame layout is very large. But the plot is really stretched, and it pays great attention to details. For example, the attributes of skills and equipment and the various characteristics of the five elements. But these details are used to describe the data, but are not reflected in killing monsters or PK. The focus of the game theme itself is on the process of defeating monsters, pushing BOSS or PK and tasks. Too much attention is paid to it. The equipment and skill data and the daily stuff are just passed by. It's a bit putting the cart before the horse. In addition, the notes at the end. Although I know that the author may be afraid that readers will forget those settings, too much explanation will seem very slow. Generally speaking, it feels like I have written an outline and introduced the skills and equipment without writing a plot. So it will become more and more boring later on. Keep up the good work.

It looks good, I will keep chasing it, come on!

The author's sharing is not easy, please support

Haha... I hope the author keeps this book free of typos

Recommended by book friends. Come on!

I'm from the chicken eating place. This name and the second character should be sent directly to most people who rely on searching to find books.

Come on, think about the outline and write carefully

I came from Chiji. I have watched nearly half of it, and I think it is okay. There are very few poisonous points, and there is no plot like in previous online games where the president of the union is the big brother and the member of the younger brother, and he does not compete with the players for supremacy at all. Disadvantages First, the plot is flat, not enough exciting, and there is no climax. The second is that the protagonist is not prominent enough. Liu Nian's words far exceed the feeling of the protagonist. This may also be the reason for the lack of excitement. The third one is the name. People can't find it if they want to see it. Readers who want to read traditional online games have almost finished the old ones, and almost none of the new ones are on the recommendation list. They may search for online games in the search bar or set the type to online games, and then limit the number of words and set the time to the past one or two years. Your book also has so many words, which is a small advantage. But couldn't find it. Halfway through the game, I made some suggestions, which can be improved from the game plot and the dungeon plot. The current game plot is very shallow, not twisty enough, not full enough, not interesting enough, and it is just a matter of killing monsters. Foreshadowing and conspiracy connect the mission stories together to advance to the climax. The battle highlights the sense of epicness. In addition, there should be professional competitions later, but I feel that different professional skills have different positioning. I feel that fighting and painting should be two different systems of skills. Just like the protagonist, the nature of this profession and most of the skills are completely prepared for PK. You can't say that pk is still there to attract hatred. It's a bit of a weird logic problem that the PK that is very strong in brushing pictures is also very strong. Moreover, skills are completely random and depend on grinding. Everyone is different. It feels like money is better than skills rather than skills. I think the pursuit of fair competition in traditional open world online games is a poisonous point of this type of game. I don't know if the author has designed a fair competitive PK environment. If you look at game competitions in the modern world, they are basically about games, technology, player status, and team level, rather than who gets more good things from game exploration, who has better equipment and skills, or who spends money to buy more good things. Who has more pk skills, who has less painting skills, and who has destiny skills. Whose numerical value is higher?

I saw your review from Chiji. I haven't read the book yet, so I'll bookmark it to support it.

Boss, thank you for your hard work for generating electricity for love🌹🌹

The author's writing is great. Come and support me. Come on!

I have written more than 600,000 words. The author is amazing.

The writing is very good and more interesting than other similar novels. I hope the contract will be signed successfully.

Recommend. The writing is good and balanced, and the author is the ultimate data king. There is no need to worry about the plot falling apart or prices falling, and the villains and supporting characters all have online IQs.

This name is a bit difficult to search for. To be honest, passers-by would never see it without a recommendation.

Come on, come on, it's a terrible idea to change the name. The title of the book is too difficult. Let's add a bookshelf first and read it immediately 🤭

The name is too difficult to search. The second character is considered a semi-rare character. The search difficulty is higher than that of other books. It is difficult for people to remember it, let alone other words.

I'm here to eat chicken. I haven't read the title of this book. It's too difficult to read.

1. It doesn't feel like a group portrait, but five protagonists. Apart from the protagonist group, there are no other outstanding characters; 2. There is no heroine, and the role of Xinyao is hard to say 3. The plot is too gentle, and it feels like the protagonist group is playing a single-player game

The author actually didn't sign a contract, so I can't reward him even if he wants to

After reading novels for so many years, this is the first time I see an author who has not signed a contract. . . . . . . .

The title of your book is too difficult to type. I searched for a long time and couldn't find the word.

I'm just here to eat chicken, so I'll collect it first. Come on, author.

🪖 When will Brother Yang come out with a new book? I'll be blown away.