Journey to the West Scholar

First of all, this is a book of fairy grass. It combines everyone's theories and dares to innovate. It doesn't read like a routine, and you can appreciate the author's intentions. Secondly, Chen Guangrui is also unique in character creation. Chen Guangrui is the sustenance of modern thought. It is a tiny fulcrum, but it is the key to forming contrast. The combination of modern thoughts and Tripitaka's thoughts can be said to be very good. Although Chen Yi (Tang Sanzang) still has the anti-Buddhist image, he has his own unique views. But there are still shortcomings in the characters. For example, Chen Guangrui is a modern person, and some sand sculptures can be added appropriately (in fact, I think the author has this idea, but it may be because of insufficient writing power. Try to take the initiative to enhance the writing style. I will talk about some ways to add writing style below) The biggest shortcoming is the writing style. The writing style is not tense enough and the setting is cumbersome. This is fatal. There is no problem with the narrative setting itself, but it is not good if it is too plain. , You can make the setting narrative more smooth and unobtrusive, such as changing the perspective of the narrative (sometimes you will even be inspired to insert some plots that are not there before, such as the teahouse storyteller I mentioned there - I can't remember which chapter it is in, but the author can look for it. You can definitely fill in some Buddhist troubles and conspiracy. The author should know that this can be watered down in another chapter, or the kind that readers will not think is watery). The author also did this in the second time talking about the setting. If you can't do it, just post it related to the work, don't post it in the main text, it will affect the reading experience. I currently think of two things to improve my writing skills. One is to imitate the writings of great masters. For example, if you want to write something light and funny, study "Do Some People Really Think the Master Is a Mortal?" This is a joke and a contrast. Furthermore, if you practice more frequently, you will find that your writing skills will improve if you code more. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs!

Author yyds, 29 books, finished, only a book of 370,000 words, 28 books left, a few thousand words less, but this one is more, awesome!

Very well written. Come on, author! ＾0＾~You have surpassed many people! Keep up the good work!

If nothing else, he's awesome! Stop being a eunuch and write well! I believe your book will definitely become popular. I see that the background of your book is very large, incorporating elements from the snow and Jiang Ye, and the background of Journey to the West is also very grand, which is good, but the pig-footed character looks very awkward, but I can't explain it. Something is wrong, and I feel that the martial arts realm is not very clear, and it looks confusing. After all, we are used to the realm of Journey to the West. The main reason is that the characters and realms look a bit awkward to me, but everything else is fine. The above is purely a personal opinion, please don't criticize! Here's wishing the author a great sale of his new book! Thank you 🙂🙂🙂

Author: As a eunuch, what do you think about the existence of 30 books? What gives you confidence? Change your vest.

After reading this book, it was a little dark and my mind was a little confused. I did a question, 1+1=3, I should be fine for the college entrance examination.

Damn it! ! ! After reading the introduction, I thought it was interesting and ready to dive in, but it turned out that this author has written 28 books? I can't afford to offend you, so I'll say goodbye!

Brother, you are so awesome. You have written 29 books, and you have written 28 books. Thanks to your courage, I voted for this book. ˚*̥(**⁰͈꒨⁰͈)*̥Wow~

Where is your fairyland, sir? I'll send you some specialties and come to your door to discuss them.

This is a popular series that is better than novels 🤭

"About the fact that I watched Chapter 98 of Journey to the West and the Journey to the West has not yet begun. Elder Tang is still not born yet" 😡😡😡😡

The author is really a genius. Although he stitched it together, he couldn't stand the way you integrated it so well 🤫 Please, please update another thousand chapters today.

Tathagata Buddha is the villain every day 🤫 Every Journey to the West fanfic has a Buddha as the villain. Is this the loneliness that fills the ceiling of the original Journey to the West?

Update time, power system, gossip. Guarantee two updates, work hard three times, dream every day Update time is 0:00, one at 8:00 in the morning, and one at 12:00 noon. The power system, the limit is not ten levels, the martial arts in this book is more like the immortals in Immortality, there are twelve levels, thirteen levels, etc. It is constantly developed and expanded with the development of the world, and it is not fixed. Gossip: The tone of the book is probably like this. I am straight-tempered and have stories to tell. I generally don't care about the word count, but it is full of useful information. After all, for me, a low word count is cheating and immoral. I hope everyone will support me.

There are so many bugs that a new top scholar can actually become a state pastor after taking office? Even if he offended everyone in the world. No matter how awesome Buddhism is, it can't be this awesome! The court actually wanted to hand over the incense money to him? So does this world belong to Li Tang or Buddhism? Since ancient times, it has been emphasized that if the country is not the master, it will be difficult to establish the law. There are also two dynasties of heaven and earth in the article. If so many offerings are made to Buddhism, these two forces must be indispensable! It challenges my outlook on life so much. It adds a new world view of Journey to the West. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore.

Okay, the author is awesome. . . This plot is so perfect for you to borrow. . . Update quickly.

Damn, that's awesome. The author is not following the trend to become an immortal, but following the trend to enter the palace. I hope this book can help the author successfully cultivate into a harem empress, and she can no longer suppress herself in the palace.

The author has actually written 28 books, what about this one?

Oh my god, 29 works, 26 eunuchs. . . . Could this be it? Don't even dare to follow me anymore

28 Eunuchs, I would like to call you the strongest in history 😰😰😰, someone mentioned you in the comment area of ​​the author of 13 Eunuchs, you are too strong

If Qidian had a list of writers, you would definitely get the first place in the list of eunuchs.

It's so coquettish, you wrote Journey to the West, Journey to the West is a coquettish story

I was just planning to collect this book, but when I saw the author, I thought, Oh my God! The ancestor of the eunuchs, he wrote twenty-nine books and cut off twenty-eight of them! Awesome!

Before Chapter 100, the author laid a lot of foreshadowings. I very much doubt whether Chen Sanzang is really Tang Sanzang. We can guess whether another time traveler took Chen Sanzang away, but this time traveler has a lot of vests. In the end, Chen Guangrui discovered that the biggest boss in the three realms was his own son who was still in the womb.

Tang Sanzang, I know, what the hell is the tenth golden cicada? Isn't it the reincarnation of the six-winged golden cicada and the tenth generation Buddhist scripture seeker?

Two monthly passes plus full subscription. If you were a eunuch, your entire house would be filled with razor blades! 🔪 If you haven't added any details yet, pin them to the top. What are you thinking about!

This book is amazing, come on, come on, come on, come on

I feel that the dynasty has been a bit long, which makes the change unreal. I feel that every time the dynasty changes, Chaofan does not participate in the war. The defeated dynasty generals go to the small world of Fire Cloud Cave or something like that, as the fundamental strength of mankind.

I read it in one sitting. This book is very interesting.

The key to this book is eunuch, I will send you the blade