Devouring the Eternity of the Starry Sky

To be honest, those who devoured Luo Feng's opportunity were not very flattering. First, Luo Feng's three views are relatively correct. Basically few readers will dislike him. Second, after you grab it, you are sure that you can handle the world beast war. Luo Feng's machine source is all one link, one link. For example, without the inheritance of Babata, Luo Feng would not be able to survive the Golden Horned Giant Beast. Without the Golden Horn, Luo Feng might not be able to enter his field even if he is a genius.

The plot is too cliche. Devouring wants to break out of Luo Feng's plot. Don't write about Luo Feng's promotion route. You can use the military to fight against the beast tide. You don't need to be immortal if you encounter adventures. The universe and world lord are enough for the early stage. You can make up your own, and you don't have to be too strong. The basic secrets of the universe will do. After all, Swallowing Starry Sky is about the understanding of the laws. Secrets are the way to understand the laws. As long as there is a way.

Write your own style, you won't be popular if you are cliche!

Why do you always say "compensate Luo Feng", why don't you create a system or opportunity yourself, or don't be a showman and build an archway, if you don't use these, why are you traveling to swallow the stars? Are you making soy sauce? Why call Luo Feng 6666?

The most important thing is to persist and persist!

I don't understand that the Lord of the Golden Horn can still live after his soul has been destroyed. This is outrageous. No matter how many clones there are, there is only one soul. The author must have read the original work. This can all be wrong.

The character of the protagonist is not well set. While clamoring to surpass Luo Feng and become immortal, he also wants to follow Luo Feng's route and seize his opportunities. He has a weak mentality. The key point is that the author also set the protagonist to be a decent person. I really don't understand how the protagonist can seize Luo Feng's opportunities and then give him alms, while still befriending him with a face. If the protagonist is set to be an adult who will not be punished by heaven and earth for his own sake, I will feel better.

The strongest person in the universe has no clones. Evil Flower Allah is dead when he dies.

How can I put it this way? It's really disgusting to take it as soon as you take it, and you still have to act and stand up. In a world of personal power, you still look like a loser.

Stealing Luo Feng's opportunity is extremely poisonous. I hope the author can be more imaginative and not be like this. He would rather wake up the golden finger. Be reasonable and don't step into such a poisonous pit.

The author has never read the original work Swallowing the Stars, or maybe he has read the encyclopedia, and after reading a few unpopular fan books, he thinks he can make money by writing fan stories and then getting a big IP, right?

It's just copying books, it's still a running account, it has no content of its own, and the pace is too fast. If I keep writing like this, I will almost go through reincarnation in 200 chapters, and then it will end. From the author's writing style, I can't see that he can write about the continent of origin.

I saw a novel about Luo Feng before, which directly turned Luo Feng into a scumbag. I sprayed him on the spot.

It's best to have a clone talent that can keep the clone after becoming a true god.

All I can say is that the author just keeps making small mistakes The world of the sixth heavy sword is the world of the sixth heavy sword that is used to guard the gates on the 7th floor of the overpass The gatekeeper who chooses the controller and uses the magic weapon is the sixth heavy sword on the 7th to 9th floors. Corresponding to the 7th, 8th and 9th floors respectively. If you make a small mistake once, forget it, you are making small mistakes repeatedly It is said that the 13th floor is the Enlightenment of the Marquis, and the 18th floor is the Invincible King The Enlightenment of the Marquis Tongtian Bridge starts at the 15th floor, and the title of the King is 18th floor The title of Invincible requires the secret method of divine power amplitude and a set of heavy treasures to be called invincible. I was very angry after reading this. Who gave you the courage to write a novel without knowing enough about the original work? From which fan fiction do you think you write fan fiction? I support genuine novels, but you are not qualified enough to let me spend money to read them. You do not understand enough about the original works when writing fan fiction, and there are constant mistakes. Some readers' chapters remind you that you have not corrected them for several months. Writing fan fiction means respecting the settings of the original work and writing something of your own. If you don't even know the power system of the original work and write it randomly, you will treat the readers as fools, especially those who have read the original work. Don't blame the readers for criticizing you. I will never allow an author who doesn't understand the original work to indulge in fan fiction and write about it, especially if he doesn't correct it after being reminded by readers. It's understandable that his writing skills are not good enough. This is obviously a matter of attitude. Chapter 78 Questions There is a paragraph where you say that the Lord of the Universe is dead and cannot be resurrected. Sorry, the Lord of the Universe is dead. He is dead and cannot be resurrected. Readers are reminded in the chapter that it is another attitude problem. Chapter 84 Fusion Law Problem The law is to climb up from the lower law of a point to the 10 major laws. Whether the fusion law is 2 lower laws or the corresponding upper and lower fusion laws, it usually starts with a venerable person. A person who becomes a venerable only has time or space to understand one of the two ways. The fusion law is 2 lower laws. If you fully understand the laws of position, you will be the master of the universe. Even if you fully understand the simplest fusion law, you will all be the master of the universe. The order of the power of the law levels is (also the difficulty and the depth of your understanding) Perception of a law Comprehensive understanding of the law of fusion. There are 36 essential combinations of the lower laws and 108 essential combinations of the upper laws. You said that the fusion of two lower laws to become a master makes me laugh to death. It is another attitude problem. Chapter 89 Soul Attack Problem No matter how many clones you have and how far away they are, except for clones that are not afraid of soul attacks, soul attacks will kill your soul through your clones. The souls are all connected. It is another problem of changing the attitude of the original work. Chapter 101 is a whole chapter with logical problems The question of whether Qian Shui's mother is the Immortal King or the long-famous King is indeed written without enough understanding of the original work. Cheng Immortal cannot have children, and it is still a matter of attitude. Chapter 112 Tongtian Mountain Problem Original Universe Tongtian Mountain has 12 floors Original Domain Lord Tongtian Mountain has 16 floors Original Realm Lord Tongtian Mountain has 20 floors You describe that the original universe Tongtian Mountain has only 10 floors. Your constant transmission errors are not just a matter of attitude. Let's say he doesn't understand the original work. He does know some of the characters in the original work. Let's say he understands it, but he simply can't figure out the power system.

Take the good things you should have if you want, why bother with the coquettishness? As long as you are not the kind of person who takes advantage of Luo Feng and calls him brothers, just be an ordinary alumnus. You robbed the inheritance of the Fallen Ink Star, and later you forced the Golden Horned Behemoth and the Secret Code of Nine Tribulations away. If you forcefully write this, the book is half weak. In my opinion, there is no need to leave the good things that can be obtained to others, unless they don't like it. I find it ridiculous that there are not many protagonists like Luo Feng who have three views and don't take chances.

I just want to ask Luo Feng the opportunity: Are you sure you can survive the Jieshou disaster? If you are sure that you can grab it or not, it doesn't matter. But if you are not sure, will it be beneficial to the protagonist to follow the original plot? If the protagonist's talent is average, it's not like he's trying to get a chance. He's picked by the boss and doesn't look down on him. The protagonist has good talent but is not top-notch. Just follow Luo Feng and help Luo Feng a few times to at least become immortal. If you have talent ranging from cosmic level to ordinary true god, just follow Luo Feng. It is definitely the best choice. If the protagonist's talent surpasses Luo Feng, there is no need to grab any opportunities. The resources of the earth are just an ordinary immortal, and they are not worth mentioning compared to the resources of the peak tribe to cultivate geniuses. The Secret Book of Nine Tribulations is only respected and useful. When the Lord of the Universe takes the divine power route, the 10081 talent gene level is just the beginning. The golden-horned behemoth can seize the body, but there are many gifted creatures with gifted incarnations, so there is no need to force it. In general, the strongest opportunities to swallow the starry sky are the Star Tower and Lianyuan Technique, but they were basically useless before the World Beast Tribulation.

It is recommended that those who are illiterate read the title of the book. What is the name of this book? I put it down one by one. This book is a derivative work, not a story about the creation of heaven and earth. It is a fan fiction that uses the opportunity of the protagonist. Doesn't the author deserve to be scolded? There are so many objections

Chapter 102: They started to fall in love and stated that they wanted to have children. Isn't this the heroine! Does this have a conflicting relationship with what was said in the previous chapter, "I don't want a female protagonist" and what is said in the middle chapter, "having love between a man and a woman is not as interesting as pursuing the avenue"?

You still have to seize the opportunity, unless you just want to be a salted fish. Swallowing the Starry Sky, Luo Feng has not yet grown up, which means that Luo Feng is not a lord now. How long will it take for him to control the past and the future? This is a devouring world, maybe we can seize the opportunity from the root, and control everything ourselves in the future 😁 So, you have traveled through time, great opportunities and great fortunes are there. You grab it or not, you grab it or you don't grab it, you grab it or you don't grab it. Stop talking, we are all selfish people, we still have to grab what we need. But keep a low profile and don't set the frame so high, it will attract thunder.

The feeling this book gave me can be described in three sentences! First: Is there any good stuff? Protagonist: No! That belongs to Luo Feng! Second: Any chance? Protagonist: No, that belongs to Luo Feng! Third: Is there a treasure? Protagonist: No, that belongs to Luo Feng!

Am I so powerful? I looked at the table of contents, and it's not even chapter 200, so it's already Broken East River.

The last chapter spans too much! One chapter directly jumps from the Lord of the Universe to the Lord of the Chaotic Source, without writing the details in between. Is it impossible to write without reference to the original work?

I haven't read it, but to be fair, you said that the author wants to jump out of Luo Feng's plot. You can't expect every author to be a level 5 author. You must be a great author. Everyone writes fan fiction. It's not easy for everyone to have a few who can write level 5. I remember that there are several fan fiction that swallowed the stars and jumped out of the original work. Look at those books. Let's talk about the author's plot issues.

The most disgusting thing is to suppress the ethnic group when they are weak, and to seize the earth and seize the treasure. As soon as he arrived, the Lord of the Universe sent treasures everywhere. Inheritance Even dogs hold grudges? Not as good as a dog

It's just random writing: soul kills the clone, the body is immortal, the strongest person in the universe also has a clone, what the hell is this?

The writing in this fanfic is really good. Everything does not follow the original author. The protagonist has his own character and his own story, which is particularly praiseworthy. Although it is not as detailed and comprehensive as the original work, it still seems to be weak. If the author cannot find a supporting point for the story after the protagonist's reincarnation, I am afraid that the end will be the end in chapter 300. Come on

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There's one thing I don't understand now. Can you please explain it in detail? It is a life with a clone, and clone No. 1 Has a soul defense treasure. There is no clone number 2. If the soul attacks clone number 2 and the damage exceeds the limit of clone number 2, will clone number 2 die? What will happen to clone number one?