Douluo: Get King Arthur at the Beginning

In terms of smooth writing, it's not bad, but after reading a few chapters, I feel there are a few poisonous points. 1. Xue Ye's illegitimate son? I was sent to Flanders as an apprentice. This was the first time I was poisoned. 2. To get a soul ring, you should go to the Spirit Hall to apply for the Soul Hunting Forest. The Star Dou Forest is a wild forest. In Dou 1, the Star Dou, Sunset, and Frozen Forests should be unattended. This is what I've seen so far

The protagonist was almost killed by Dai Mubai in a sneak attack, was severed by Flanders, and was expelled from the academy. He said that Xiao Wu was wrong. If there was no follower to protect him, he would have been attacked by Tang San, and he would have been seriously injured. Old Jack's death was probably blamed on the protagonist by Tang San. Now the protagonist's second and third aunts are contacting the forces behind it to make the protagonist look good. Why is this plot so uncomfortable? Is it going to develop into the mainstream of abuse in the future?

Has the author read the original work? Isn't it nonsense that the soul power cannot be improved even if the soul power is full innately? How to improve without absorbing soul rings? There are too many poison points in the first chapter.

Well, the martial arts fusion skills in the first part were not so bad, maybe a little less.

You can summon it if you summon it, but a martial spirit like your coffin is really hard to use, and even a bit contradictory.

By the way, there are actually people who can actually make the hair style of the Silly Hair King😂

Isn't this the whole Morgan thing? It just happened that the Japanese server 2.6 Was installed recently A woman with silver hair, black silk, long legs, and long legs on XP

After seeing Tang San and the group, I can no longer watch it. No matter how good the plot is, I can't watch it anymore.

I thought the martial spirit you wrote was Arthur, but it turned out to be a summons, so I ran away.

Let me ask, why did you add Kamen Rider?

Multiple heroines? You can have multiple heroines, but I hope there will be no brainless stallions, especially the kind that accepts every one you see, which is the hardest to accept 😅

Write less about these boring daily routines. If you write too much, others will not be able to continue.

Haven't updated for a long time 😒

The protagonist was also such a doormat. He was stepped on by everyone. Some minor characters who had nothing to do with him were killed, and those who said they insulted his family were released after being beaten. I gradually gave up after watching this.

The writing is good, but it's not suitable for others to read.

Add a few male followers, such as Jin Pika and Solomon

The harem has begun. . . 😅

I don't care, I want to watch Shura Field, I want to watch women fighting 😍

This male protagonist is a bit disgusting

The beginning is the most important thing, but in the end the road seems to be blocked by the author.

There are a bit too many followers, and it's really a bit flashy. Some of them can only be eaten at home, and not all of them can be put to use. It's a bit boring to just write about "strategies" and daily life, and there is no particularly detailed description of the protagonist's combat power (if there is, I didn't see it, so I didn't mention it). But I hope to keep working hard, the ideas and templates are pretty good, some details need to be planned, and the plot direction needs to be clear. ✊👍

Why is the main character so short? I am now reading Chapter 5. There is a woman who is taller than the protagonist, but she is the same height as Artoria. Artoria's height is 154cm. She's not even 150cm tall at the age of 13. You must know that Tang San's height is 170cm at the age of 12. The protagonist touched Saber's head before. Did he jump up and touch it? How funny that must be.