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I can't stand it anymore. The writing is not good, the dialogue is not good, and the structure is not right. Do we have an outline? Have you watched this TV series? I feel like Taiwanese people should write about Beijing! Delete it and watch the TV series a few more times! !

What do all the authors think now, that if they go back in time, they have to help Shazhu? If you were to travel through time and become a stupid pillar, there would be nothing to say. How about saving yourself? There is nothing wrong with that! But it's disgusting to dress like someone else and have to shamelessly help! It seems that everyone has no dog-licking friends around them. Is Silly Zhu really stupid? Who can be a chef and still have the upper hand against Damao for so many years? Who is a fool? Don't use kindness and honesty to embellish it, he is just a licking dog, he has licked until he can't help himself! Anyone who has such a dog-licking friend around him should understand and go to help him, but I tell you that you can't help him at all! The more you try to stop him or try to make him understand, it's useless, even friends and brothers don't have to do it! I didn't want to say so much, but I couldn't help it! This is how I grew up for more than thirty years. (Here I tell you, the girl was not his girlfriend, nor did she agree to be his girlfriend). I spent all the savings of the family for decades and wanted to sell the house to buy the girl a car, which made my mother so angry that she was hospitalized. However, he sold the house to buy the girl a car while her mother was in the hospital! Our circle of friends tried our best to persuade him, but then he cut off all relations with us. Among the people we knew in common, he said that we couldn't see him well, couldn't see his happiness, and undermined his pursuits, etc.! Now that information is so developed, you should often see all kinds of news on the Internet about licking dogs until they lose everything! Don't those people have any relatives or friends around them? Will you dissuade him? Think about it and know that there will definitely be people who will advise you! It just doesn't work!

The author must not become the nanny of Silly Zhu. If someone wants to be Silly Zhu, then let him be the nanny. A damn ghost who is willing to fight but is hard to persuade with good words.

Recently, urban novels have included Qinman Siheyuan. I feel that you are more than enough to write about Zhengyangmen alone. After all, Han Chunming has a lot to write about, especially Su Meng. I really don't want her to marry Han Chunming.

This book is the best. In which era is the most short of foreign exchange? You can easily pay 20+ million U. S. Dollars for an annual salary. You are thinking that it is ridiculous to return to China and give you 20,000 U. S. Dollars as salary. What do you think? The salary of a grandpa is only 90+ "RMB", and even a fan fiction would not dare to write like you!

Those who have returned from studying abroad are afraid that they will not die quickly enough, right? When the storm comes, Kochi will be unlucky, not to mention the fate of international students who are destined to be beaten. If they are strong enough to survive until 76, let's talk about other things. I'm just annoyed that I dare to write random things about people when I don't understand anything.

Is the starting point threshold so low now? Novel can be written at any level

Studio, robot splicing article.

The timeline is really confusing and a lot of things don't add up. It's just mindless, and many things are illogical. For example, Xu Damao lost his pants, and there is no logic at all. In the TV series, Lou Xiao'e made a fuss, that's because the two of them are husband and wife. In your case, Lou Xiao'e is not a couple, and then Xu Damao's mother comes to make trouble. What kind of imagination is this? What mother would make a fuss and ruin her son's reputation because her son lost his pants. After watching the first part, I can't stand it anymore. It's just obscene and has no logic. There is no complete storyline and timeline. The plot has been changed in a mess and it can't be echoed before and after. It's written randomly and connected to the plot.

It's worse than an elementary school student's ability to keep a running account. Other people's journals still have dates, but your chapter doesn't even have one.

You dare to say that you can get a pound of meat a day, even scientists with two bombs and one star dare not compete with you. Even the old people can't even get a pound of meat a day. You can brag that you can't get a pound of meat a day. You can't even ask for it but others still envy it. At that time, you dared to negotiate conditions with the organization. It was so cool.

What a mess, things from the 1960s look like the 1980s

What are you writing about? Disorganized

Novels don't work. The first uncle cannot recognize his son but recognizes his father instead.

Update soon. It's very nice.

What's going on in the plot now? Teacher Zhao suddenly appeared and got his certificate? Where is Teacher Xiaoran in front? Where is Zhou Xiaobai? ? ?

It's not that I'm a mess, even elementary school students can write more fluently than you.

The work is as messed up as the author's name. . . Confusing

It turns out that she is working as a nanny for Silly Zhu again, so withdraw! I really can't understand why I went back in time to be a nanny for Silly Zhu. Just ask if you care about your parents that much!

Does the author have no memory of what he wrote? He knew everything about the marriage between the protagonist and Teacher Liu, and someone introduced the couple later. The writing was so messy, he just wrote whatever came to his mind, regardless of what he had written before.

In fact, most people who write this type of writing are just following the trend. I think they have not grasped the opportunity. I think it is not the popularity of Siheyuan, but the demand for literature in this era. If you look through the library, there are too few. This drama is too bloody and the book is difficult to write. Compared with the plot, isn't Under the Zhengyang Men much easier to write? Sometimes I find that authors are really very different from each other. Some people can only use shitty dramas to make outlines and cram them into water. Others write period novels completely out of thin air. There are also wonderful plots. But the most regrettable thing is that most of these period novels are on female channels, and there are too few male channels.

Is there something wrong? Engineers are always talking about trivial things. Even if they participate in the plot, there is no need to be like this.

What is the use of the setting of returning from studying abroad?

🙂It feels very messy

The situation has become smaller. When overseas students return to China, they will end up with these short-lived parents.

The timelines of Siheyuan and Zhengyangmen are completely different. Han Chunming's first educated youth gathering was in 1974.

Are you going to stop updating? Click to finish the book.

Don't say anything completely. If you don't like it, just reject it. It's embarrassing to watch, bro.

Brother, didn't you write that Xu Damao is not married yet? When Xu Damao was drunk and his pants were burned, who was going to lock him up?

Why is it that there are so few good books in Zhengyangmen, but everyone follows the trend of Black Qin Widow? And Zhengyangmen and Siheyuan should not be in the same time, they are different.