The Years I Struggled in Xianqin

I haven't understood this paragraph after reading it several times. Is there something wrong with my language?

Hanging sheep's heads and selling dog meat. . . There are also awkward emotional scenes.

Xian Qin's twenty-level military merit system

Suddenly I discovered that the protagonist practicing martial arts means the decline of martial arts, the protagonist practicing Taoism means the decline of spiritual practice, the protagonist is a disciple of the sect, so he must be suppressed by the dynasty, the protagonist is a prince or a member of the court, then the court must be the puppet of the sect. If there are really many settings, the settings cannot be balanced. It's just fun, alas, it's just making trouble. It's hard to live without being aggrieved.

The first few chapters were pretty good, but this girl really confused me and gave me the impression that there were no rules. In the era you mentioned, I really don't understand what you are writing. Since there are no rules, this is the first time I have seen Da Qin written like this.

Practicing martial arts in Immortal Qin is really thoughtful. Whoever practices martial arts is a serious person. Isn't it good to practice martial arts? Isn't the magic good? 🙂

I wanted to say some words of encouragement, but also wanted to point out my shortcomings, but I also thought that I am not capable of writing a novel myself. I don't know whether the encouragement is useful or whether the shortcomings pointed out are reasonable, so I dare not comment lightly. It is still a difficult stage to endure when the heat is not enough. Unless you find a style that you are good at, or have a distinct personal style, writing is secondary, and the story must be exciting. The early stage of this book is a little worse than the previous one (the previous one may have spent a lot of energy conceiving the opening chapter), but the later stage feels much better, if there is a later stage. At least the general direction can be basically determined: in the world of Xianxia, ​​standing on the shoulders of the disciples, martial arts is king! As always, as long as you keep writing, I will continue to read.

Don't you teach martial arts? You only have two apprentices?

It's a bit little, watch more, watch the ads to feed you

I am General Xing Daorong, who dares to fight with me?

In fact, the setting is good. It's great to cultivate immortality. It's a waste if it insists on cultivating martial arts.

I feel like your holy master system is a bit rubbish. You have to practice the martial arts given by you. Don't you know what you are like? How many years do you need to practice this?

I don't want to say anything. The content is completely different from the title. It's a waste of a good title.

I just want to say that I am mainly sorry for his system

I just want to know if your holy master system does not go the way of recruiting disciples of the Zongli sect, why are you writing about it?

Set up a buff, this book is not worth mentioning, my mother is your surname, I think you have learned from the experience in this book, then you know that you started to poison not long after the beginning, people who see it are disgusting, comrades, they cut Aite me...

The title of the book has been changed. Let's get used to it. The cover will be changed in a few days.

You can come and go at will in the barracks, and your teammates will disappear after writing about it😔

It seems that this is not the correct way to open the golden finger. Isn't the Saint Master system used to teach disciples?

Ninety-eight percent of the books about protagonists who are immortal cultivators and practice martial arts have poor results.

It's so disgusting. The most annoying thing is that in a world with magic, you have to practice martial arts. Even if you don't have dual cultivation, it's okay. I just read a novel about a strange world. There are also magic, but you still have to practice martial arts. The protagonist is a time traveler and has some plug-ins, but he is stupid enough to practice martial arts 🤫

There is a martial arts school that is not only striving to develop, but also takes the system to take risks. . . . . . Either it's fun, or it's miserable, or every character needs to have brains, and if you don't occupy them, you won't have the desire to watch them.

It's quite strange. When I read this novel before, the registered account should be a mobile phone number or QQ. Can't find it now