After the Divorce, I Was Pampered by the Prince

Elementary school student writing. It's a mess with no plot at all. . It was actually written by a great god. . . If it can be written like this, there will still be people reading it. .

The plot is not compact, and it drags on for more than ten chapters with the same content written over and over again. The number of words is added up every day for updates, and the author seems not to care about the quality of his writing.

It's just a prince who covets the queen over and over again, and everyone knows that he covets her. As the emperor and the queen, they do nothing and don't mind, and they don't think of a perfect way to deal with it. They just let him dance around and disgust people, and then the punishment is painless and that's it. It's really incomprehensible for a prince with ulterior motives who never banned him and allowed him to continue to enter and leave the palace freely!

It's so bad. I can't stand it anymore. There is logic in front of it. It's so bad. Let's avoid lightning 😓😓😓

When will the mysterious Mr. Zhao Taifu appear? When the prince of the dynasty was plotted against in his own family, as a member of the family, he didn't come forward. This was because he didn't take the prince seriously. Why does the prince often stay overnight at Zhao's house? It's not like the prince's mother clan.

The imperial concubine has been tortured for long enough, so the master should take care of Zhao Zhao. How regretful the emperor will be when he remembers his concubine

Xiaoxiang Academy cannot be evaluated recently. Is this emperor still saved? I really want to slap Si Xianfei~~~

Why is Xiao Ce becoming more and more of a scumbag? Why is he so arrogant? Does a person who can't trust his feelings truly love the imperial concubine? No wonder the ancients said that the deep palace is like the sea. The emperor used the art of toying with the emperor to also use his emotions. Isn't it too cold-blooded and ruthless? Qin Zhao is right in dealing with sexual thinking.

I am actually a very tolerant reader. If the logic of the plot and character design is not really bad, I will never complain. Because I deeply understand that it is not easy for every author to write a book, and it is even more difficult to write a good book. Everyone who is committed to writing good stories deserves respect. Therefore, as readers, we must be tolerant and tolerant. If it weren't for the gap between what was written and what was written, which makes it logically unreasonable, I really wouldn't express my opinions one after another. It's really unbearable! The original intention is also to hope that the author will carefully read and compare his own article to see if there are many problems. At least it must be logical and smooth, and do not make people feel that the gap between the characters in the story is too big. If the characters' actions are out of the plot, it will be really uncomfortable and awkward to read. Now the characters created by the author (strictly speaking, starting from the time when Emperor Xiao Ce retrieved his past life memories) have begun to slowly separate from the story and cannot be well connected. I don't know if it is because the story is too long. From the text, it is obvious that the author is unable to control it. There are signs of collapse in the characters and plot. Many places are very unreasonable, and there are also phenomena that are deliberately done for the sake of events. Don't the characters all serve the plot of the story? Characters can be enriched and filled in through the advancement of the plot. This is the basis of writing a book. What I see now is that the plot has become weaker and the interaction between characters is highlighted. This was originally a good thing. Real emotional exchanges began to occur between the male and female protagonists. Unfortunately, the author did not grasp the relationship between the relationship and the advancement of other plots. The author only greatly described the sweet interactive relationship between the emperor and the empress, but almost did not advance the unsafe and hidden dangers that existed in the past and present life at the same time. In this way, the storyline It seems relatively thin, and the image of Xiao Ce, the emperor and strategist, who has taken the advantage is not well presented. Instead, it seems that Xiao Ce's character becomes particularly weak in the later parts, only jealous and sour, and all his thoughts are spent on Qin Zhao. I didn't see him taking effective precautions for the safety of the family of three and Nan Qi, and the heroine Qin Zhao's character is also superficial. It is related to the safety of the two of them and their future. Both of them think more and do less, which is very difficult to understand. Especially the plot of the Great Yueshi Seth's visit to hunt, there are too many shortcomings, and it should be written better and more rigorously. I also said it in the previous chapter, so I won't repeat it here. Anyway, when I read it now, it feels very careless, perfunctory, and imprecise. I hope the author can pay attention to this. Really, write carefully and write well, and discard these unreasonable, imprecise, and illogical places. This book is still a novel worth reading despite its flaws.

I feel annoyed when I look at Wu Xirou. When will the drama between the three of them end? I can't stand it anymore.

I don't understand why you go to all the trouble to get a man, well, just to live.

First of all, congratulations to the author for finishing this book! 💐💐💐 To be honest, I really liked this book at the beginning, and I wrote a long book review for it, and also added it to my book list to make serious recommendations. But at the end, it made me so angry that I couldn't stand it any longer. 😓 The author Jun's writing is pretty good, but the basic logic in the latter part of the book is too unacceptable. I still have expectations for the author. In the end, I just want to ask the author. If you want to attract more loyal readers, you should try to be as logical as possible in the story and plot, and don't be too wild and arbitrary. 🙏 I am a person who prefers reading ancient novels. The bookshelf is full of ancient novels by various authors that I like. I also hope that the author's novels will become better and better, and that they will always be on the list of authors I follow. I cherish every excellent author who is good at ancient Chinese proverbs, and I have always believed that writing is not easy, and meeting a good author is not easy. My hopes for myself and other book friends are: be tolerant of authors, and everyone should read and cherish them! I sincerely ask the author to write well and carefully. When it comes to palace intrigues, rules and etiquette, please do more homework and write as logically and reasonably as possible. I think as a reader who is following the article, this is not too much to ask, right? ! I wish you well and happy writing. I look forward to a significant improvement in the next book. See you in the next book! ✌

This kind of plot can be filled with water all the way to more than 800 chapters! Many details are really not scrutinized. You can say it is Shuang Jie. Since you are not favored, a woman who cannot bear children is useless. Logically speaking, she can be kicked out of the palace. However, the concubines in the harem are as diverse as the vegetable market. They are not favored and still occupy their status. They are like monsters and ghosts worshiping them everywhere. They are like leeks. Another episode. The male protagonist has no boyfriend power. The female protagonist fights monsters alone. The bitter tears of the female protagonist. You can say that it is a doting. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is as weak as Qingshui. The two have their own way. The forced CP is embarrassing to the point. It is better to say that it is a borrowed child. This kind of literary talent. Farewell.

Isn't this word count a bit obvious?🤫

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This book actually has more than a thousand chapters. I wanted to see the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists, but there were all kinds of troublesome and annoying things in the front. It was only after more than a thousand chapters that I seemed to see the male and female protagonists begin to have a warmer relationship. I was defeated and skipped to the back. 😂

The love story between the male and female protagonists in two lives The period when Xiao Ce was the prince was well written and fascinating. After Xiao Ce ascended the throne, he was sweet at first, then abusive, and then the couple fought against each other together. Some book lovers think that there is too much dog food, but I personally think that adding some dog food to the palace battle process can also satisfy book friends' needs for reading romance novels. While the author is clearing out the manipulator behind the scenes, there are still some holes to fill, such as why Qin Zhao has extraordinary hearing and strength, what kind of family her mother is, why she and Xiao Ce have been in love for two generations, and is her son Xiao Yuanzi also reborn? Otherwise, why are you so smart?

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The writing is messy. The first part is fine, but the later I read it, it becomes more and more unsatisfactory and very messy.

Sweet rations and some scenes of fighting wits with the villain It's just that the villains are not very powerful.

Some people complained about the similarity between the heroine and the heroine: I actually thought that there are several people in this book who look like the heroine. Author, please count how many women in this book look like Qin Zhao? I only know four or five of them, including the concubine who sent away the maid in the palace, the concubine who died of Zhao Yu, the concubine that Hu Concubine found in Prince An's Mansion, and the one who appears now. Since she is a stunning beauty, she is very rare. Where do so many people who look similar come from? The population of a dynasty may not exceed 100 million, but so many women like Qin Zhao appear one after another. It makes people feel psychological shadow over the stunning beauties you describe! I checked: the probability of not being related by blood but looking very similar is 1 in 600 million, and the probability of living in the same city is 1 in 1.2 Billion. So, the author, if you need to write one or two people who are somewhat similar for the plot, it's okay, but you have set up so many similar-looking people that it's unnecessary to make people feel uncomfortable!

I was deceived again by Douyin's gorgeous copywriting, and decided to study at the next starting point. The subject matter is quite good, but the writing content is disappointing.

I regret investing all my monthly tickets. The queens and emperors written in the next 100 or so chapters are completely incompetent. This is ridiculous.

I'm curious, which stage of Xiao Ce is this Xiao Ce in the parallel world? In that short life, or in the second life, was it the one who was injured and knocked unconscious by Qin Zhao because of suspicion and anger? ?