Forgotten Era

My personal suggestion is for reference only. The author can incorporate the notes after some chapters, such as the prices of certain things, etc. Into the book in a clever way. I think this can attract readers more and serve as a link between the previous and the following.

If the author is biased towards cultivating immortals, I think he should subtly mention more things about realm and character in the book. I think this can consolidate readers' memory and prevent readers from forgetting the preface during the long update process, leading to loss of interest. Secondly, it can make the rhythm better and the content more compact. Mentioning more about the protagonist's personality can better lead to the following, making it easier for the protagonist to pretend, thereby increasing readers' interest.

The author is very good. Is this your first time writing a book? Doesn't look like a new author.

If the follow-up writing is good, it will definitely become popular.

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I would like to ask the author what the purpose of writing this book was, or what kind of mentality he had in writing this book? ?