It Turns Out That I Am the Old Patriarch of the Xiao Family

I still like the author's works very much, although it doesn't matter to me. I think the author's writing is pretty good. If I have any questions, I took this book with me. I feel that the pace is a bit flat, like a narration. It's good to read in my spare time, but it's not eye-catching enough. The protagonist has always been very stable. I always thought there would be a breaking point, and I waited and waited, but there wasn't. Maybe this is a style issue, or maybe there's nothing wrong with it. Personal expression is not clear. The author thinks for himself🤔. Another point is that as far as Xiao Lin is concerned, he has not had any conflicts with anyone so far, and there is no sense of oppression, tension, or excitement (almost no conflicts). I really feel that the author has worked very hard and has ideas, but the pace needs to be improved. I can't fit so many words into the paragraph comment, so I put it here. (Why is it still painful to read your book? Are you extremely anxious...) Steady

The author will update soon, look forward to it I hope that the protagonist, as an old man who has lived for 70 or 80 years, will show his corresponding strength. He will not pretend to be a pig to eat a tiger, and pretend to be a slap in the face. This is no longer popular. I hope the author will create a protagonist who has brains, IQ, strength, no stallion, and three correct views. Looking forward to it, come on! Author

Let's read it again when we run out of books! To be honest, I really hate showdowns between time-travelers. The main plot of this book is not that two time-travelers travel at the same time and then become enemies. Such a sudden showdown in this book has no effect on advancing the plot. It feels like it is purely for the two chapters on the water. But this book is really well written, except for this, there are no major poisonous points. Just after reading the free chapter, the author came up with this😭😭😭.

I am also convinced by the author, and he was able to write more than 800 chapters.

Beauty😍

Good looking

I think this book is very well written. Most of the Dou Po fanfics are about opening a harem for fun and becoming stronger without thinking. I have read the original work seven or eight times in middle and high school (it shows my age). Xiao Yan grew up and became stronger step by step after genocide, hunting down, and breaking off the engagement. But the current Dou Po fanfics, mindless harems, and casual slayings of Xiao Yan, made me feel a little nauseous. But this book is full of resourcefulness, sense of responsibility, and care for future generations. I don't understand why this high-quality book is not popular.

It is said that Xiao Lin is Dou Wang. If I change it to Dou Emperor, will it really mean that he is Dou Emperor?🤫

I sincerely recommend not giving too many roles to Xiao Yan. No matter how controversial it is, there will be people who will criticize it. Also, I hope that the protagonist really acts like an adult/

Is there anyone who can share pictures with me?

Either the original work has been changed. We old bookworms read the original Dou Po work seven or eight years ago. The old family leader is indeed Dou Wang.

I remember that the weight is not a fifth-grade peak alchemist. Why did it become a sixth-grade alchemist in this book?

It is considered to be of relatively high quality among Dou Po fans. The author uses his brain to write the book.

After so long, I came back and found that the comment section was still deserted.

Haha, I passed the second exam. Come and celebrate with two monthly passes

Can you write more about Medusa? She has no role at all 🤔

The ancient pagoda clan has a holy product. What he wrote is like me, who has watched The Great Master, and feels that it is completely flawed and elevated, Lingpin Tianzhuang

The author should stop talking about the Xiao family being the guardian of the clan. It's really awkward to look at like this. You can just ask him to show off and level up faster.

From the moment he took a bullshit snake girl as his daughter, the book started to suck. He persuaded a large number of people to quit, and then he became the heroine of Medusa. The author likes snakes so much, so I hope you meet snakes every day.

There is a reason why the book is not popular. Although I haven't read much, it doesn't stop me from complaining. It's just a search for souls, or a systematic search for souls. In the author's description, it can only be described as rubbish. I spent one or two pages writing nonsense literature about something that I once brushed off. I don't know if the author is annoyed or not. As a reader, I feel very stupid.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Is it almost finished? Is there any content about the world?

Because it is you who you are looking at. There are dozens of pictures now, and they all feel like they are writing about the lie that the Xiao Family Temple protects the ethnic group.

Author you. This is bullshit. Together. It looked so awkward.