Dash: Brilliant Life

I feel like there are too many emotional scenes. ,. A bit boring. . .

Come on, the author, I have been reading, hoping that the protagonist can win more than three or four consecutive championships in the 100 and 200 events starting from the 2004 Olympics, and also win several World Championships, becoming the only true god who has never been seen before in the history of track and field and has never been followed since!

This is a good and refreshing article in the sports genre where the system is littered with novice articles.

I wish there were less emotional scenes. I'm here to read Shuangwen. Pig's feet don't open a harem. Why write so many emotional scenes?

Are you worthy of your efforts if you don't get more hits on the shelves?

After looking at the protagonist's college entrance examination results, coupled with his talent, and his experience before rebirth, I really feel that the protagonist should pursue scientific research instead of sports.

As a sports student, I thought it was outrageous. I was a novice at the start, on a cinder road, with ordinary shoes, and had never learned any running skills. I ran directly within 11.5 Seconds for the second time, reaching the second level...

It's time for tj, it's just a sports skin

Why do you keep writing about Liu Tao? Um?

With so many subscriptions, there is not one monthly ticket that really comes from you 😡 Consider it a support, except for the two sprint novels written by Zombie Dance a few years ago, I have never seen a sprint novel written that I can read. Looking back now, I feel that the writing of those two novels was a bit outrageous. The protagonists ran 100, 200, and 400 at the same time, which felt too unrealistic. You can say that this is very close to reality, and it is completely possible to do it. After all, Su Shen ran 9.83 At an age in his thirties and a not too suitable height. In the end, yesterday's chapter was disappointing😔 not because of the content, but because of the title. I had high expectations, but this is the result 😅 Come on💪 Just don't be a eunuch

What kind of celebrities are you writing about? If I continue writing, I will give up the book.

I think it's pretty good. A book is all about one thing. Don't be too bothered. This one has investments, feelings, and running. It's like an ecological chain. Nothing is missing.

I have read the latest chapter, and the climax is almost over. I would like to give the author some suggestions. They are also some of the plots I want to see next. 1. Use the protagonist's influence to clear the name of Liu Xiang or athletes who have suffered similar situations. They are already heroes and should not receive so much slander and abuse just because of one or two injuries and abnormalities. 2. In the small direction, participate in some variety shows, interviews, etc. It is best to write about Yang Hao's crazy suitors, and then finally Yang Hao announces his relationship, saying that the childhood sweetheart who secretly used his sleep money to buy him his first pair of running shoes when he was a poor boy is his destiny. He will give Mi Mi a sweet wedding. 3. It is best to cover chapters such as raising a child and becoming a father in one go. Don't write too much. The main line is still running. 4. The last and most important thing to mention is that there is not much training improvement that can be written now, and it is only about foreign bases and so on, which can easily become a rip-off. You can write about sports technology. The Olympic competition is also a technology competition. I don't know if the author knows about running shoes. There is a lot to write about. These equipment are also an important part of sports competition. It is also very interesting to write about this aspect. As an athlete of Yang Hao's level, he should also shoulder more meaningful missions in the wave of rising domestic products and national self-confidence. That's pretty much all the suggestions, book friends can also add more. I hope the author writes better and better.

Author, what about you?

Singing is really embarrassing. I don't know what other skills I have. I just sing for others when I have nothing to do. And the setting of writing is too pretentious.

Is there a system? The lack of a system in sports writing makes me feel that the protagonist is stupid. The uncertainty of practicing sports is too great and the risks are too high. Without a system to back it up, I shouldn't choose to be an athlete after rebirth.

July will start after the Doha race, and in August 2008, there is still one year left, and the pig's feet will break 9.7 Seconds in that race. Bolt's time in 2008 was 9.69 Seconds. I guess Pig's Foot may win in the thousandths of a second. I will continue to prepare for the competition and beat Bolt in 9.50 Seconds in 2009. In the subsequent games, the two won and lost each other. They were rivals but also cherished each other.

When can we write that the male protagonist eats nutritious meals and is careful not to drink water from strangers? We have already seen Chapter 50 of the closed training session for the National Chinese Games?

Is it predicted that 4X100 will also win the championship? 4X100 can win the championship and give up the book directly

Why did you change the cover? This cover is not as good as the original one.

In 2004, Yu Bo spent 2.6 Million yuan to buy two dilapidated courtyard houses in Beijing, one with 300 square meters in Shichahai, and the other with 150 square meters in Yonghegong! Author, you asked the male protagonist to spend 26 million to buy an uninhabitable courtyard house in Shichahai? Still need to spend more than 10 million on decoration? What do you think, author? Why should the male protagonist buy a few courtyard houses on Nanchizi Street and Zhengyangmen next to the Forbidden City? Can you write more about the hero's personal life? When you just write, you don't have to train. You train non-stop and just write! If you have nothing to do, you can go shopping and buy a few courtyard houses, some antiques, and a Hummer off-road vehicle! Stroll around Beijing's alleys and eat a Manchu-Han banquet! In the author's novel, the male protagonist doesn't even have QQ? Can't you just buy a laptop?

@ Galaxy Bully Who is the little girl in the avatar?

This cover of yours is, well, not easy to comment on. . .

I think we can explore Lao Yi and join the national team through winter training. After all, the 2010 Asian Games champion may not be able to break ten. There should still be a PB score of 10.0+. Furthermore, most of the risks of injuries caused by fatigue can be avoided through training.

This time 9.69? 9.68? 9.67?

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I feel like the author's avatar is the prototype of Tian Mi!

No more writing? There is no new book in a year