The Grindstone of Red Mansion Is Jade

Pseudo Red Mansion, the author's self-titled article~

The Grindstone Volume is getting better and better, and I read it as a new Red Mansion novel. The author's writing is much calmer. The rhythm is just right, no jumping, no self-excitement.

Lin Ruhai couldn't refute his wife and stuck out his tongue. Jia Lian stamped his foot angrily. Isn't the writing of your character considered bad?

What is the difference between writing about the Red Mansion and not about the harem, and taking off your pants and farting?

I've read a lot of Red Mansion novels, and 90% of them are about Lin Daiyu being the female protagonist. I don't understand why the male protagonist follows her as soon as they hook up with her. Besides, there are so many high-quality women in the Red Mansion, Lin Daiyu is really not a suitable woman to be a wife.

It's not good to be self-indulgent, but it's a sneaky thing, but it's not good enough. An educational tone

It's not a novel at all. If you don't believe it, read it. The protagonist also participated in the European serf uprising. Today, as I write, I arrive in Yangzhou again. . . There are as many pitfalls as there are pitfalls

Great book! It's really disgusting to bother the Red Mansion to save the Jia family. Just save the ones you like, and exile or kill the ones you don't like. The protagonist of this book is determined to fuck the Jia family, good book!

I just saw someone in the comments advocating for a harem, thinking that opening a harem would solve the problem. I didn't want to offend anyone, but the book that might become an immortal was once again dragged into the ditch by the "public opinion". I also had to be annoying again. Is it true that opening a harem and adding more female protagonists can save Red Mansions fan fiction? In my opinion, it's bullshit. Looking at reality, after 18 years in the Red Mansions fan fiction, are there still very few harems? Of all the books with half a million words, is there one that truly has a single female protagonist? But overall, Wang Xiaoer's performance during the Chinese New Year was not as good as the previous year. There are more and more harems, and the protagonist has more and more wives. However, the writing style is getting worse and worse, and the basic market is getting less and less. So if you still think that the decline of Red Mansion is caused by not opening enough harems, then I can only say politely that there is no hope, wait for death, and take my leave. To those who are still writing about Red Mansions at Qidian, thank you for persisting until now. At the same time, I hope you won't be led away by those readers who talk nonsense all day long. Those who are loud may not necessarily be correct. The silent majority will not point out the country or write passionately, but will only choose to stay or leave. Can Red Mansions fan fiction attract people? The goal is not to open a harem. Whether you open it or not, it's just a detail. Those of us who really love to read Red Mansions only care about one thing: whether the story you write can be "reasonable" taking into account the background of the times, and then it will naturally resonate spiritually with us modern people with normal IQ and EQ. If we can do this, I believe that most readers will use practical actions to let the author see our choice.

I read the previous part of the file in vain, what's the fun in that...

Harem, harem, apart from being yy in novels, in reality you are just losers. Can't you live without a woman?

Elementary school students can write better than this!

Dear book friends, I have a question. Everyone's tolerance is different, not to mention that people who write have a sensitive heart. Otherwise, they would not be able to create a variety of stories. Please stay here and don't disturb other people's creations. One word from you may hurt a person who loves words and works hard to create. Just stay with me. I am trying to keep everyone here privately. Just tell me what you want to say. Please!

When I was six years old, I traveled all over the world. When I was eighteen years old, I returned as the God of War. I sold sesame cakes on the street. When I met an enemy, I knelt down and licked my sister as a gift. All I talked about was doctrine, and all I did was business. They are all supporting roles that fall from wisdom to wisdom.

What about the promised red building? Liar, you are so childish. Let's learn some science. Baby teeth can't bite the rope. A child can't hold it in for thirty seconds at the bottom of the river, let alone a minute. You think the water pressure is a joke?

The only part that the brothers can see is that the Russian girl is regarded as the lord. The rest is nonsense, written randomly, no brains, no subordinates, rebelled against 3 countries, and has not saved any family property. Worri, your family really has it. The 6-year-old protagonist gave away hundreds of millions of antiques casually, and there is no receipt for anything. He is truly a son who was taught by a good author.

The biggest advantage of Sister Lin being a wife is that whether she is happy or not, and whether she wants to make trouble or settle accounts, it is all against the male lead. . People like Sister Feng were allowed to come in but were killed secretly. . Those like Hua Xiren are removed quietly. .

The author's writing is good and I like his writing style. The characters are well written and their dialogues are lively and interesting. The starting point is the roof beam and the author's style appeals to me.

In fact, it doesn't matter if you have a harem or not, as long as the writing style is maintained, there will be many people watching it. Ignore these people. In all the Red Mansions books, there is a group of people who set the pace, just like in all the Ancient Books, there are people competing for Hongjun's heel. In fact, they are all secondary. It mainly depends on the plot and writing style.

The writing is really incomprehensible. It's full of private information. The main character's character is completely disgusting.

I've been writing a lot these past two days. I might as well start the book again at the end.

There are some jumps. He helped other countries to revolt, and returned to the feudal dynasty to study in the imperial examination. The contrast between before and after is too great. After returning to the country, the obvious contradiction between feudalism and the protagonist's thoughts is very big, which seems very "jumpy". The construction of other characters is not implemented well, which can be seen from the author's style.

This protagonist is not as good as Jia Baoyu. Everything relies on wisdom, revolution relies on boasting, a person is a person who is in heaven and earth, and the book he writes is rambling here and there. It is hopeless.

The protagonist's character is inconsistent. He was a calm person when he was in Russia, and then traveled to Europe, including the French Revolution and the British King's Movement. He should have become more calm, but when he returned to China, he became a funny person who was too frivolous. Is this still the same person? ? ?

If you don't understand Chinese medicine, then don't talk nonsense. Why did you go to the Red Mansion to worship the West and demote the Chinese? Wouldn't it be better for you to directly travel to the West? Now that you have gone to the West, why are you coming back? Just stay there, the farts over there are delicious.

The subject matter is good at the beginning, but the way the protagonist you write is so inconsistent with Red Mansion. It's a mess and I can't stand it anymore.

I can't understand what's written?

Instructor Niu🐮🌹

The book is finished and I finally became the leader

If you say it looks good, a bunch of trumpets will come here to comment.