Across the Heavens, It Begins with Mortals Cultivating Immortals

Zhu Tianliu will have his own ideas after seeing too much. If I were the protagonist of Zhutianliu, I would not choose to fight with the protagonist or the villain, but choose to be a salted fish and mix the benefits. Even if it is one world, the benefits are not many, but I can go to more worlds, and naturally receive more goods. I only take some things that are not particularly important and dangerous.

The Mortal Bottle, the Golden Elixir of the Gourd World, the Magical Alchemy Furnace, and the Alchemy Furnace are normally something the protagonist should find a way to obtain. This protagonist feels that the benefits he gets are all due to luck, and he will not take the initiative to seek "opportunities."

Good guy deceives people into booking a eunuch for the first time

The main character is too small. In the world of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals, I really don't understand why the protagonist has to join those seven sects to join the plot? ? ?

There are too many opportunities in the Gourd World, and it ended too hastily. Not to mention magical items like the Seven Heart Pill, which are impossible to obtain, but the lotus and lotus seeds, as well as the alchemy furnace under the water, are all good treasures, as well as the magic weapon of the goblin. It is really a pity. I thought it could be written better.

All of a sudden it became a chat group, and all of a sudden it lost its flavor, it was boring.

The writing is okay, but I don't recommend writing too many chapters on the Seven Mysteries. It's best to enter the world of immortality quickly.

One look at the profile of a batch of awesome people. It's not me who is trying to criticize anyone. The louder the tone, the faster they will cool down.

A chat group suddenly became boring, and several time travelers also appeared, making it more and more chaotic. To be honest, I have never read a well-written article about many time-travelers. This book feels like it has collapsed. If the author has the perseverance, he can just delete all the chapters in the past few days and just write as you originally wrote. Don't randomly join other systems, chat groups, time-travelers, etc. This way, writing will only become more and more confusing.

I collapsed when I was writing Calabash Baby, it was inexplicable

I saw a fox demon matchmaker and decided to collect it. I hope the heroine is Tu Shan Honghong.

Eunuch is on the shelves. Who did you learn from?

I'll go and put it on the shelf, right?

The author let himself go🤔

Why is he a eunuch? This is really, a bit uncomfortable!

In a word, the fox demon matchmaker is simply a world that is too boring, the lack of resources is a waste of time, and it is just a poor settlement in the corner of the solar system. It would be better to go out of the solar system and go to the outer starry sky. The outer starry sky has a vast stage, rich resources, and many races in the universe. It would be interesting to compete with the many geniuses in the universe. Only by experiencing the killings of blood and fire can one reach the pinnacle. For example, Emperor Ye Tian, ​​Emperor Ruthless, and Emperor Wu Shi all reached the pinnacle after experiencing endless killings! The protagonist's structure is too narrow, he has no overall view, no own direction, no determination to reach the top of the world, and it is difficult to achieve great things if his Taoist heart is not firm!

Why do mortals say you can't take bottles every time you visit? You Han Li can come back across the long river of time, me! Can't the protagonist of this book cross paths? I still have one more system 😅

To be honest, if the author hadn't cheated on the protagonist, he would have died a long time ago. To be honest, an ordinary earthling would have been killed by Han Li if he had not brought a golden finger to the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality and wanted the opportunity of Han Li, even if it was just Han Li who had just started, so either he should not be a mortal in the first world, or he should not get together with Han Li. Look at how many of the people who were with Han Li, except women, survived to the finale. It's a bit embarrassing to write

Eunuch, think about the outline carefully, clarify the context, and think about it for two or three months before writing.

The protagonist does not have the belief that I am invincible