
Ultra World: Transform into an Imperial Cavalry at the Beginning
奥特世界:开局变身帝骑
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 119k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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49Chapters
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Sorry I can't hold on any longer, Chapter 3 poisoned me to death.
There is no time limit, and there is no energy limit. This is directly invincible. What form do you need?
The author should write more knight elements. You might as well write about Ultraman directly. The knight kick has not been used a few times, and the knight itself can become huge without consuming energy. The bracelet is useless at all, and there is still some light. It is better to just use the knight kick.
What is this about? When writing about the Imperial Cavalry, you didn't even change its form. After reading more than ten chapters, you changed three of them. You got all the old Pingcheng ten-year cards, but you just didn't change.
I hope to integrate the emperor, knights, etc.
The author gives you some suggestions: 1. Change the transformation sound effect to the original sound effect, which is the English one 2. Change "transformation" to "henxin" This will make it more interesting 🤭
To be honest, the writing style is indeed not great, but it is still better than some authors. At least you won't make me think that you are a primary school student writing essays.
The content seems okay, but I don't know why. This book is twisted no matter how you read it 😥😥😥
How should I put it? Some of the writing in the first few chapters may dissuade people. Maybe the main reason is that the protagonist's thoughts on gaining power are not written in detail. He already understands what to do with power without even struggling. Although I can understand that this is because he has light in his heart and a sense of justice. Of course, this is just my point of view. , There are 1,000 Hamorets in the hearts of 1,000 people (it should be called this name, right?), But overall as long as some of the plots are not too broken, I think the overall story is pretty good. After all, I am also a writer of novels and I have failed to write a novel before. It was also because I didn't write the beginning well and I was too self-satisfied, so come on, author!
It looks good. Let's take it from each other. Come on.
At present, I personally feel that this book is okay, not too poisonous, but I hope the author will adopt some suggestions: 1. Come up with some original plot, otherwise it will always feel like a follower to Zero. If you want to write it, I feel that it can be written like this: The big leader of Shuka (Showa) accidentally enters the Ultra universe and cooperates with the Dark Killer to fuse the World Destruction Knight and Ultra. The protagonist uses the Dimensional Wall Shaker to start a group fight, and finally the big boss backstabs and escapes to continue causing trouble... 2. Use more knight kicks, otherwise it will be a bit strange for the knights to make waves. Looking at the diaphragm 😰, in the future, you can sometimes open up without knight kicks. Refer to the non-knight kicks and knight punch versions of ultimate moves of knights such as Final Cavalry and G4, such as the armor series.
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Author, can the protagonist control himself into Ultraman in the later stage?
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