Treasure Hunt Live

The writing is good, but it's not suitable for reading.

Name Change: 5000 Years of Prisoners' Modern Redemption?

At the beginning, the elves that have nothing to do with treasure hunting and the monitoring elves should be deleted. . . Too irrelevant to the topic

It's too niche. After serving 5,000 years in prison, it means you don't understand things from now to 4,999 years ago. Treasure hunting. You can't always be looking for things from the time when you didn't serve your sentence. It's boring.

Hey, I couldn't read it until I discovered the ancient tomb. What's written about it is so disturbing, isn't it? Slipping away

It's really well written, but it's just not updated very well.

After reading the first three chapters, I have no desire to continue reading.

The writing is very good, it doesn't look like it was written by a newcomer! You can become famous without jumping!

One sentence review. It's a mess, it's foggy.

Can't sleep. Then came to see it. This book would be okay without this monitoring elf. I added a lock to myself. It's difficult. Slipping away.

The book is a good book, but it is too updated 🙂🙂🙂

Indeed, the writing is good, but the logic is wrong. The main character points to the pig and says: This is a deer! ! Audience: The protagonist is awesome, he knows all these animals!

When he saw the monitoring elf, he got upset and withdrew.

The first chapter is extremely poisonous. Why write something incomprehensible?