Surgical Artist

Finally found this kind of doctor article without any emotional scenes, it's great 👏

Although it is a combination of the elderly flow and the doctor flow, and the writing is very good, in fact, I think there is still room for improvement in some places. First of all, the task content appears too frequently. In fact, you only need to write it in detail once. You can completely replace it with a simple task name later, such as: Task chain: ① A blockbuster (completed) ②... That's it. I'll tell you where you go. The specific content of the first link is full of suspicions. Secondly, it is actually quite annoying to read it several times. Of course, the author may not necessarily want it, but just for the convenience of copying. Another possibility is that he cannot remember clearly and remind himself. After all, if we read it for a few minutes, the author will have to write for several days. Secondly, the pretentious slap in the face of the elderly stream is a bit stiff. This is not a problem with the writing style, but because the author is not an elderly person after all, and he also mentioned that it is a college student who time-travels into an elderly person, so the logic of the design is fine. But when I think about it from the perspective of the supporting character, I find it is particularly inconsistent. I feel that it is better not to let the protagonist appear too utilitarian. If it were written as: Alas, let me do it. Wouldn't it feel better to have such a helpless tone? It would match the performance of an old man who wants to retire and enjoy a happy life but has to go out. His willingness to refuse and welcome can make other people feel ashamed. Wouldn't it feel better to be pretentious? To put it bluntly, isn't the most enjoyable thing about aging people just relying on the old and showing off their old age? To sell correctly, to educate with old experience and win applause, and to be convinced by being educated, this is the cool part of the senior stream. Being young and old, there is no difference between coolness and transformation. The gap between psychology and appearance creates an exciting look. How to make Yi Lao sell Lao sell exciting and conform to the logic of transformation, this is the key point. On the contrary, professional writing about doctors does not require too much effort. All it requires is professional skills and knowledge. I don't understand this, and neither do most readers. To put it bluntly, we can't tell even if it talks about surgery. I read about ten or twenty chapters? I think there may be room for improvement in these two points. The writing and other aspects are both good. Overall, if the quality is the same, it's a good deal.

Getting younger is acceptable as long as it's not too extreme and you become seventeen or eighteen years old. After all, there are people in their sixties who have been working out for many years, just like those in their twenties. Dr. Chung is in his eighties as well as in his fifties.

Alas, when I read this novel, I thought of Academician Wu Mengchao, who is still undergoing surgery at the age of 96.

I'm 58 years old, is there still a heroine?

The appearance is still the same! It's good to be young! After all, your subject is the old doctor! That's what I'm looking at!

Now that I have become younger, as the protagonist, there is no heroine and no interest in life. If I go through the surgery blindly, I will become a robot. It is better for the protagonist to be more down-to-earth. No matter how awesome he is, he is still a human being first and cannot always work.

I don't understand, writing a novel about a doctor. Since you have already traveled through time and are 58 years old, you just need a youthful physical function card and a longevity card. Why do you need some appearance card to make yourself look younger? What are you trying to do? Are you planning to find a daughter-in-law?

I just re-read it again and saw the testimonials. It said that updates will be released every 4.5 Days. No.

He has a 45-year-old appearance, similar posture, 20-year-old physical fitness, and a life span of more than 100 years. What do you think?

I don't know if the author is short of writing skills, but the whole book is centered around the main tasks of the system. It is all about tasks for the sake of tasks. There is no emotional description at all, and the main tasks of the system are also very disgusting. You have only required three cards to reach the provincial level. How to develop in the future, the pace will definitely collapse Suggestions 1. The author can let the system abandon the main task chain at a certain stage 2. It is recommended not to advance too quickly, you This operation is a task and then it goes to the next stage, which is no different from playing a game 3. It is recommended that the author can develop horizontally and choose other departments to describe it 4. It is recommended that the author add some emotional descriptions.

The author gives you an address, and I'll mail you something, something delicious, so don't be polite to me! ! !

The author's setting is quite good. Medicine becomes more and more popular as it gets older, and technology is king. At this age, the conflict of fame and fortune with young and middle-aged key doctors has been directly downplayed. Because of the name, everyone will think that they have accumulated a lot of experience and admire it. However, most of the old doctors have already become famous. Most of them understand their own technical level and have less of a comparison mentality. After all, it is a job that requires the most technical experience. The same competition between hospitals, because Pigfoot is an old doctor, has also reduced some potential rules. I suggest the author optimize the details. The speech, behavior, way of doing things, etc. Of an old man who is about to retire will definitely be brilliant once written.

This book might as well be renamed. No one understands your liver better than me. 😆😆😆

If you are a bitch, you have to click to read it, and you will finish it in a while 😭

I feel that whether it is the superior leaders or the doctors from other hospitals, the writing is so great and upright. Whatever the protagonist achieves, everyone around him is happy for him. It gives me an unreal feeling. Are there really so many good people in society?

It's too little and not enough to watch! ! ! Come on＾0＾~

There are flaws, but more of them are advantages. The most valuable thing is that no one forced their head to be slapped in the face by pig's feet, which is very good.

It's quite interesting. I've read about 20 chapters. The pace is okay. But I'm thinking that if I get younger later, I'll be arrested and studied. If it's a young girlfriend, it's too poisonous. I still hope the author will arrange it. If I really do this, then I can only give up.

Is this the new account of an old author? I feel that the writing is smooth, refreshing and reasonable, and the pretentiousness is natural.

Brothers who have clicked in can collect this book. I really think it is the best medical novel. There are no poisonous points, no supporting characters who forcibly subdue their intelligence and make them stumble, and no meaningless pretense and slap in the face. Every time they pretend to be pretentious, they are in place and reasonable. I can't wait for the book to be put on the shelves. I just want to spend money on such a careless author like you 👍👍

I hope the author will write about the daily life of the protagonist, who feels like he is undergoing surgery all the time, like a robot

Isn't it even more updated? This chapter-by-chapter card-studying is really excellent 🔨

The idea of ​​traveling back in time to become an old doctor is very good, but the author's writing style is quite poor. Either during the operation or on the way to the operation, he always performs the operation according to the system tasks. All the situations encountered are related to the system tasks. I read this book back and forth twice, but I couldn't stand it anymore around chapter 100. The only advantage is that there are no brainless villains, or in other words, there are no villains in this book, so there won't be a bunch of very toxic conflicts.

Buddhist authors😴

Update for Ten Thousand Years Brother, can't you update one more chapter?

If I update a few more chapters, I won't be ranked more than a thousand places.

There is nothing wrong with this book except that there is only one update a day!

I really feel that it is much better than the other doctor books. The Bears is too written about reality and all kinds of unfairness and criticizes the system, and The Rules is too holy. The Great Doctor Ling Ran has an inexplicable feeling that is hard to describe since the release of Tian Qi. Moreover, this book is better than the others. The protagonist can rise to the top. The writing and plot of other books are indeed good, but the writing is long and hard and I really don't feel it.

Aren't you going to make another update? Author