Douluo Dalu: Mandrake

This introduction is awesome! Tang Seng's first soul ring, this is so embarrassing, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

Big brother. . Why do I read it as if I were reading a narrative? .

Forehead. . . Overall it's okay, but I probably won't read it, but I'm not saying this novel is bad, I just can't stand some of the minor points If there are new readers who plan to read it, I'll summarize the advantages and disadvantages I've seen so far. Advantages: The creativity is good, at least in Douluo fan fiction there are very few stories related to poison (there are also people who directly travel to become Dugu Bo, but they are basically pretending to be pigs and eating tigers, pretending to be slapped in the face, and it has nothing to do with poison). As far as this idea is concerned, it is not bad, and with the training effect similar to that of the Ernan Poison Body, you can tell at a glance that this is a novel related to poison. This is the only advantage I have seen so far. The next thing that is neither an advantage nor a disadvantage is the author's writing style. It is not too bad but not particularly good either. Personally, it is definitely not as good as the comments say. Then there are the disadvantages Disadvantages: First of all, the section where the village chief introduces the village is really confusing. It is clear that the protagonist has lived in the village for six years, but it seems that these six years have been in vain (see for yourself) I know that the author wrote this paragraph to show us readers, but wouldn't it be better if you just used narration? Disadvantage 2: In the chapter about swallowing venom and reaching the tenth level, except for telling us how the protagonist upgrades at the beginning, the rest are all conversations between supporting characters. In human terms, I felt lonely. Obviously it only needs to be written as a few words of greetings between so-and-so and so-and-so, but now it takes up most of the chapter Disadvantage 3: Feeling When Awakening Wuhun, the person from Wuhun Temple actually gave the protagonist the internal breathing method of Wuhun Temple directly when the protagonist said that he would not join Wuhun Temple. Although it was just the ordinary breathing method of Wuhun Temple, it was an internal thing. From the person said: "This is the breathing method of Wuhun Temple", it can be seen that this breathing method is different from the outside world and is unique to Wuhun Temple. And this person actually gave it to the protagonist directly? Disadvantage 4: In the chapter of Awakening of the Martial Spirit, the people from the Martial Spirit Hall directly made the decision and gave the quotas from other villages to the protagonist village? Does he have this right? He is not a big shot. He must have a superior. This is outrageous. A person at the bottom of Wuhun Palace actually has the right to directly allocate quotas from one village to other villages at will? Disadvantage 5: After the protagonist obtained the soul ring, someone asked him what his soul ring and soul bone skill was. The protagonist actually said it directly and said it in detail, as if he was afraid that his weakness would not be exposed. Once someone conducts specific training based on this, the protagonist will be useless Disadvantage 6: The paragraph is too messy, and he always breaks into sentences suddenly, for example, "The weather is really sunny today, "Lang" is like this, there will always be some punctuation marks in the middle, and I have no idea what I'm talking about. I'll put a picture for you to see So what does this paragraph say? Who is this "you"? Can you understand? To sum up, there are not many big poisons, but there are a lot of small poisons. These small poisonous points together are the biggest poisonous points of this book. Also, the author's attitude is pretty good, at least better than some authors, but I still hope that the author will read more comments and read the comments of book friends to actively correct typos. A novel cannot only read the work, but its author is also very important. Read more comments and interact with readers. I also hope that readers of this novel will read this in the paragraphs with typos. Tell the author, otherwise there may be a lot of typos in a chapter and you may just read it, but this is a big test for new readers. A novel is not only a reading book but also a community. This community needs the joint maintenance of readers and authors. I also hope that this book will get better and better⸜₍๑•⌔•๑ ₎⸝

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I'm about to sign the contract, thank you all for supporting me

This idea of ​​using martial souls to swallow poison is a bit bad. Beast martial souls are all composites. Should he eat this by himself? It's scary to think about it.

I hope everyone will support the genuine version

I finally borrowed a mobile phone, and all I saw were reminders during my exams. They all mentioned that the finals are not college entrance exams, and the exam times are different. I am a high school student in vocational education, and I have been in school for five years.

I'm speechless because you fished for three days and posted nets for two days.