I Can Strengthen My Skills and Secrets

I just took a look at it, and I think it's okay overall. The main character is a time travel and rebirth. How come the original father is so skilled, but when being served by a maid in the shower, he says he is not used to it. This is a split personality, or not integrated well. Logically speaking, the protagonist is reborn after time travel. Since it is rebirth, the original body is dead, otherwise it is not time travel and rebirth but the awakening of the past life. Also, the protagonist is too reckless towards monsters and should collect more information on monsters. Moreover, the author's writing about the predecessor is too useless. First he said that the predecessor loved martial arts and practiced immortality, but then he said that the predecessor had not even read a book explaining basic martial arts. This is really (~_~;).

Author, I suggest you revise your introduction. There is something wrong with this introduction. After reading it, I am very dissatisfied. I suggest you not write about your qualifications. You can only modify low-level exercises, but there are plug-ins that can upgrade your exercises. This is so stupid. If you upgrade your exercises, won't your qualifications still be low? Might as well write, why only practice low-level exercises but not high-level ones? Hey, luckily we have a plug-in for the system! Upgrade! Bin~The low-level Fuhu Fist is super evolved, and the super-god Meow Meow Fist! Look, wouldn't it be more interesting like this, and there is no such thing as qualifications? Like your introduction, if the title of the book is changed to I can increase the qualifications infinitely

As for the bathing part, I guess it will overwhelm most people.

Your writing is too discouraging. It feels like the protagonist is like a cowardly loser. He has no opinion and a bad personality. For example, the maid and the brothel girl are fighting and jealous. The protagonist here is cowardly and like a loser. They should not be forced to be with them. Are the protagonists sleeping with each other? Let me talk about the protagonist here. He has no domineering attitude at all. Is he still a warrior? The problem is that it doesn't matter here. When he went to propose marriage later, the protagonist didn't have any opinion at all. He was clearly arranged and persuaded to quit like a fool.

Monsters are rampant in the palace! Specifically waiting for the protagonist to take action? The face of a country! Why did the master go there? The city received a mission to eliminate demons. The master didn't take action before, but the civilians didn't care whether they lived or died? Specially waiting for the protagonist!

Man, this routine is a bit old. It was fine before and now I really can't stand it. The protagonist has a golden finger but doesn't know how to make good use of it. He has been wandering around in various cities for so long, bullying any sect disciples who come to him. After being bullied and defeating the opponent, he even revealed his real name. He was taken to the police and beat up the whole family. His father was also strangled and threatened the male protagonist. If it weren't for that nianchi, I wouldn't even want to talk about it. I was so poisoned that I died. Also, the practice of Kung Fu does not absorb the spiritual energy between heaven and earth, but absorbs gold,? ? ? ? ? Or is there a lot of metal between heaven and earth, but it can't be absorbed? ? ? Is this the earth-level technique? ? ? Write the outline carefully and then continue writing, otherwise you will enter the palace sooner or later.

I've probably read a few chapters, but it's actually quite well written. But I don't know why, but now when I see the academy, Tianjiao, I feel a little disgusted.

These exercises, martial arts, magic weapons, and elixirs are not as expensive as food. A sect's spiritual stone cannot afford half a month's food. This currency system is amazing.

After reading about thirty chapters, I felt like the price of goods collapsed. This is similar to the ancient emperor's "why not eat minced meat". The author is still gritting his teeth in the comments. Really emotional. Forget it and leave, I can't stand it anymore.

In fact, there is no need to write so much about the realm of cultivation, as well as the exercises. How many levels are you divided into? The eight levels are too different. I personally don't like the fact that there are so many realms. But the technique is one thing. I guess many people can't understand this.

What the hell? After raising dozens of chapters, he became a Zhutianliu? I'm so speechless, and I'm so speechless.

The author has revised the outline several times, from strengthening points that absorb demonic energy to spiritual stones, from the system suddenly weakening the protagonist to system collapse, and then to the coming of all realms. Overall, I feel that the stitching marks are too heavy and the basic settings have been changed too many times!

I don't know if I should say "poison" or not. There are many places that read strangely and feel inconsistent. It's as if he is amusing himself in some places, and the exclamation is similar to the great elder: "!". Writing like this is just like expressing an expression. You can try to add a few more exclamation points, or just use ellipses. It is recommended that you read it yourself after writing it.

Your attribute panel can dissuade 90% of readers at the beginning. The author is still thinking about the future. I don't know what you think. Now at work, I listen to books to pass the time. I read them word by word. It's not just a few clicks.

Hmm... The writing is beyond imagination and difficult to describe in one sentence 🥱

After reading two chapters, I have a question. No one from the richest family in the city practices martial arts? Forget it if it was normal ancient times. This is an era of monsters and powerful warriors. Can your family maintain its wealth? Not to mention occupying the family property, some slightly more powerful warriors will come to your house to fight the autumn wind in the evening. You don't even know.

Author, can you first figure out the relationship between the five elements before writing a novel?

Lingshi's economy has collapsed, I can't see it anymore

Also make a daughter of the Luo family 😅 who doesn't know how to write emotional dramas and insists on committing suicide. Collapsed

The Nine-turn Golden Body Technique is an earth-level technique, and the Nine-Turn Mysterious Technique is also a body-training technique, which is a heaven-level technique. Sun Wukong learned the Great Immortal Technique, which shows that when the Bodhisattva Patriarch taught him, he still had some tricks left in his hands, because on top of the Great Immortal Technique, there is also the Ninth Grade Golden Immortal Technique.

The writing is messy, I feel like I just write whatever comes to my mind.

By the time you reach chapter fifty, you know the book has collapsed. As soon as we left Donglian City, we knew it was going to collapse. He took a big step and pulled his eggs.

What is it that fire can produce metal? Fire can suppress metal. Brother, don't you understand the five elements?

You can't say it's rubbish, I can only say it's not suitable for this era.

The qualifications can be incredible, but the background can be set to say that the current martial arts development has reached a bottleneck. Wouldn't the protagonist's skill upgrade be useful? For example, there are exercises to change qualifications, exercises to change appearance, exercises with attributes, various functional exercises, exercises to improve energy utilization, and you can also combine exercises to create various cool operations.

I just came here to strengthen the system, but you destroyed the system.

It looked quite refreshing. In the end, all the heavens were so happy that they ascended to heaven.

……. What the hell, it's a waste of my time.