Tianlong: Accept Xiao Feng as His Adopted Son at the Beginning

Let me tell you a joke. When we were in high school, the girl in our class changed her online name to Xiao Longnu. The boy in our class changed his name to Yang Guo, and I silently changed my name to Yi Zhiping.

Xuanci picked up the child from Yanmen Pass and did not throw it away all the way. He had to run to the gate of Shaolin Temple before throwing it away. In order to throw the child away, he worked hard. Everyone knows that it is Tianlong. The protagonist would rather let Xiao Feng become a Shaolin disciple than use Beiming to train Xiao Feng. In order to keep the plot, the author also went to great lengths.

To be honest, if you want to make your photo realistic, don't add any dark energy or energy.

Practicing Chinese martial arts in the world of martial arts is a true example of picking up sesame seeds and throwing watermelons. From now on, you can also practice Chinese martial arts in the world of cultivation. —————— It's 2021 and there are still such stubborn people, how can they practice low-level skills in the high-level world?

Martial arts is martial arts, a combination of martial arts and chivalry, but in the final analysis, chivalry is the most important, chivalry is the theme throughout the book, and martial arts is just a means to assist chivalry! But today's novels, whether they are original martial arts or martial arts fan fiction, are all written as utilitarian intrigues, conspiracies, and struggles for power. Good martial arts are written as gang fights, and even more authors write as fairy tales and fantasy!

A Taoist priest raised a child and then asked Buddhists to come and take him as a disciple. Children also particularly like to learn from Buddhism. You, a Taoist priest, have failed in your education, and yet you still agree with it. How vicious a Buddhist must be to think of accepting an adopted son of a Taoist sect as a disciple. A naked slap in the face. A Taoist priest from the Republic of China was so angry that you even agreed to it even after Buddhism decided not to accept him. Then the monk who came to your door took a fancy to your kung fu, so he had the audacity to ask for it, and you agreed. How poisonous is this

It is indeed a bit strange for Xiao Feng to join Shaolin, even if it is registered. Besides, Shaolin during the Anti-Japanese War was not a good thing. Marshal Pi Dingjun went to ask for help, but the group of monks wanted to kidnap him and hand him over to Little Japan...

You might as well write a monk as the protagonist. Why should you write a Taoist priest?

Make a statement Xuan Ku only accepts Xiao Feng as a registered disciple to guide the protagonist on some basic issues in internal skills that he is not good at. From the beginning to the end, Xiao Feng's internal skills are only Taoist and all of the above are written in this novel. If there are still people who think that Xiao Feng directly worshiped the Shaolin Temple, then I really have nothing to say. As for other issues, I will not refute them if they are reasonable, and will gradually strengthen and improve them in the future.

It's not fun. Maybe it's just because of my poor writing skills. The idea is very good.

The most unreasonable thing about this book is that a monk can continue to be a monk even if he becomes a Taoist priest.

It's too late. Modern people who don't know the plot have traveled through time and still have systems. It's not as good as modern people who have traveled through time.

It feels a bit like the Holy Virgin. No matter who it is, as long as you ask for pig's feet, the pig's feet will definitely agree. . .

First, the power system is too cliched. Normally speaking, martial arts training should not have such a clear distinction between first-rate and second-rate. Internal strength is only a part of the equation. Comparing the two depends on the actual combat effect. The same goes for national martial arts. Ming Jin and dark strength are just one way. It is not necessarily that Ming Jin cannot beat Dark Jin. It is very helpless to divide martial artists into clear grades. Second, the author seems not good at fighting scenes. Feeling inadequate Third, the system is too deliberate, there are insufficient sources of reverse fate points, and it does not allow for major changes, even killing Murong Bo Fourth, the plot is brought together, Duan Yanqing, Xu Zhu, Murong Bo are all together for a long time, and we must wait until the protagonist appears before we can continue Fifth, we deliberately add characters, Persia, Tibet, Taoism, Sea, and The Eight Parts of Demi-Gods are not even started yet, are we going to increase the difficulty for the protagonist?

Overall, it's very well written, with a lot of cool moves, and it's interesting to watch. The bad thing is that the main character doesn't like women. Plan to die alone

The road was exhausted at the beginning and disappeared.

As soon as you look at the introduction, you will know that the beginning is not to accept the adopted son, but also to marry Duan Zhengchun.

Not very toxic but boring.

I don't write about martial arts well, but I write about Chinese martial arts. I always feel that Chinese martial arts are for ordinary people in life, while martial arts and immortality are extraordinary.

How many adopted sons and daughters does the protagonist have, and how many biological sons does he have?

There is nothing to write except the beginning. Will online articles disappear in a few years?

I want to write something new but my writing style and plot arrangement are not very good.

I feel like the timeline is very confusing. I know the plot at Chapter 40. Do you know it or not?

The protagonist is also the first person to travel through time during the Republic of China. Unfortunately, there is no sense of immersion. After reading the first chapter, I feel that it is boring. The Eight Parts of Tianlong has not been written yet. You travel to this world...

Chapter 29: What did the author think? Your plot has gone against fate and yet you are still like this. This chapter will dissuade at least half of the readers.

Although they all worship Jin Yong, the following novel will not be such a blind worship. You have to pay attention to your own calculations and principles.

I don't want to see the ending of falling flowers intentionally and flowing water ruthlessly😢