Rebirth Sign in Super Power

The author is not old, the subject matter is good, but there is a childishness to it

I don't understand why you have to forcefully write a system. Why don't you just say you are very strong? It feels like a primary school student who can't write an essay. The word count is too hard.

This book is just about the Holy Mother, and other parts are pretty good, except for the family affairs and the soft-heartedness of the half-mother. He has so much energy that he can cure cancer, and he is in contact with all the big guys, so how can he still be kind? There are a lot of wealthy businessmen who want to get in touch with the protagonist, but he can't deal with the loser who has a fortune worth billions. Looking angry

The subject matter is okay, but the author's writing is too poisonous and I can't stand it.

The author should still be serious when writing a book. No matter how cool the article is, it should be slightly realistic. Read more books and write less typos.

I just saw Chapter 4 of Rivals, and I personally feel that this super power really showed off my face. It's like two souls in the same body, what kind of super power, and the dialogue is extremely childish. . . How can a normal person talk like this? They think it's a child. What happened to you after the society has polished you for ten years?

After reading about the Chinese medicine doctor Xu Yang, the author can refer to it, but if he writes randomly, no one will read it. I think the author can cut it off🙂🙂🙂

Eight posts, five ads. One of the remaining three is the author himself, how miserable! ! ! ! Oh, now you count me as 9.

Thank you to the big guys for your support. The signing documents have also been sent out. Friends who have investments can start, and you will definitely make a profit without losing any money, hehe!