Douluo: I Can Exchange for a Titled Douluo

If you only think about yourself, you won't understand the feeling of being there. It's better not to share it with others and just talk about it yourself. You still need to learn more in your youth.

Does Wuhun Palace have a grudge against you? Destroy him as soon as he comes

Well, what do you say? I understand that it's the first time a novice author writes a harem novel. However, I don't recommend it if you, a novice author, write a harem novel for the first time. Of course, you can give me a shit.

The protagonist is written like a retarded person, and he poisoned me to death in the first few chapters. To awaken the martial spirit, you summon someone to come out, can't you awaken it yourself? You still have to go to Holy Soul Village and leave after a month. No one doubts you. You are also short of money at the beginning. Go to Qibao Glazed Sect and tell Ning Fengzhi that I will protect your Qibao Glazed Sect and ask him to give the protagonist 3 billion gold soul coins. You will write about the Qibao Glazed Sect as if they are idiots. The two titled Douluo are vegetarians, and the Wuhun Palace is looking for you to mess with you? The Wuhun Palace is destroyed at the beginning. It is purely a self-interest novel. There are also some dialogues. Will you die if you add more symbols?

You gave me too many redemption points, and it doesn't look good if you're directly invincible.

I don't understand the punctuation marks, so I suggest you learn it from scratch. . . . . .

The start is very self-indulgent The sense of immersion in the protagonist is terrible The top newcomers are at this level... Can you come up with a more reliable one How about I write it myself?

Are you talking to yourself? Is the dialogue written in first person?

The subject matter is good, but the author doesn't know how to write✍🏻

The author should write better, think carefully, change the position, think carefully, and then the writing will be done.

The author does not use punctuation marks, and the narrator calls himself "I", for example: A person who looks exactly like me appears in front of me; if I want to change the name of the pig's trotter, for example, the pig's trotter is called Ye Chen: A person who looks exactly like him appears in front of Ye Chen 🤝🤝🤝

The sea, you are so watery, I really can't stand it. The characters' IQs are off-line, and the perfunctory language and psychological descriptions make people feel that everything is just for the sake of having fun. The key is not to the point of being happy-_-||

The writing was so embarrassing that I almost hit someone.

After reading this book, I probably ended up in the hospital.

Is this a novel written by Nima? He talks to himself throughout the whole article, acting like a schizophrenic, even pretending not to understand.